Red Mansion: Born with a Jade in the Beginning

"When they say you are auspicious from heaven, you'd better be auspicious from heaven" "Baoyu's soul is transported, Daiyu is reborn, Sister Bao: I always feel like something is wrong" These two points can be seen, and the rest can be skipped at a glance, and the rest is even more unfinished.

I don't even think Baoyu needs to be written haha, the ending of the original novel is quite good.

It would be okay if no one knew that he was born with a jade in his mouth, but if anyone knew it, it would be a sin. If there was a possibility of rebellion, it would be a sin of ten thousand deaths. Therefore, there were almost no protagonists of Jia Baoyu in the fandom in the past.

My personal opinion on age issues. In the original novel Red Mansions, everyone is a bit younger. Sister Lin was only six years old at the beginning, and by the time Xiang Xiaoyu died, she was only fifteen or sixteen years old. The average age in ancient times was very low, and it was considered rare to live fifty years. Perhaps in the eyes of everyone, it is difficult to understand that someone who has already done things that adults can do at the age of eleven or twelve. But in ancient times, a woman was considered an adult at fifteen, and the average age was so low that it was normal for such a situation to occur. Therefore, you book friends do not need to use current concepts to view age in ancient times. In the end, the author is also very helpless. He can't appear again when the protagonist turns eighteen, right? At that time, the Jia family would probably be nothing more than a pile of ruins. Book friends, please be considerate and understanding.

I was so addicted at the beginning, what a pity. I really wanted to see Jia Baoyu as the main character.

The main character is Big Face Baby, the ending of this book is a foregone conclusion

How much do you like Qingwen? A maid with a heart as high as the sky and a life as thin as paper. She doesn't know etiquette or rules and doesn't know how to take care of others. She has a face that is bigger than her master. The author really gave her face. She looks disgusting.

Vicious, very ink, all kinds of artificial intelligence, forced slaps in the face, very boring, a waste of time 😰

The starting setting of Jinling is too bad. In the book, it is set that Lin Daiyu entered the Jia family at a very young age. She almost had a table, a table, a bed, and a bed to sleep in. What would Daiyu think without her in Chapter 80? Why did she go to Jinling if she didn't write about the Jia family's Daiyu Qingwen who had a lot of gold hairpins?

I don't believe that this kind of guy can rebel. He still has to take the imperial examination all day long. Since ancient times, there has been a person who succeeded in rebelling in the imperial examination. SB

You need to think more about its logical rationality. Go and experience it yourself when you go to kindergarten to see the children, and see if you can still write down the fantasy as it should be! In ancient times, parents traveled far away. Besides, if there is no major change in the family, can parents allow a 5-year-old son to travel far away? This is logic. Even the best books have logical loopholes. Those good books are designed to reduce the existence of loopholes!

Are you serious about this start? Is there such a weak-minded villain? The competition is here

The Jia family died because of their political stance. The smarter you act, the faster you die. If the emperor wants your family to die, you have no other way out but to rebel.

As soon as I saw the title of the book, I thought it was over and the four springs were gone.

I really like Baoyu, so I endured the whole story of "Entering the Red Mansion Drunkly", but is it too forceful for you to run all the way to Nanjing to rescue Xiangling in the beginning? The plot is too old-fashioned or weak✨, and Xiangling doesn't need to be rescued. Others are fine, and he still appears in the Grand View Garden later. As the protagonist Baoyu, you are in the beginning There are already too many people around you who will have entanglements with you, including several maids, Liuhong, gold, jade and mandarin ducks, the three natural options Daiyu, Baochai, Xiangyun and Baoqin at the back, as well as the maids beside them, plus only two Lis, there is no need to do anything like pulling out ashes to seize a sister-in-law, these will naturally meet you. You just need to improve yourself. As a bystander, you can change Baoyu's character, strengthen his brain and waist without going too far, change the fate of Sanchun, and make the eldest sister live a good life. If you can write these and integrate them into the plot, then it will be a good article. There is no need to regard the vast white patch as a clearance boss. The Jia family is mainly composed of men. A successful man in an ancient family has a great influence on the people around him. Many things you succeed are trivial or will not happen. Many blame the problem on the housewives, which is purely an insult to that patriarchal society.

The novel "Red Mansion" is of average quality, but the latter part is too boring and crooked. They are all women, and the main plot is not very advanced. It's too watery.

The writing is very colorful, but I still have a big face in my mind.

I really admire these authors who write about Red Mansions. They not only have to read the entire Red Mansions, clarify the relationships between various characters, and dig into various secrets, but they also have to modify many plots to cater to readers and even their own fantasies and even obscenities. They also have to create new plots of their own (there may be side stories, there may be immortality, there may be suspense, there may be "utopia", but It can be "high-tech", maybe - I can't edit it anymore) to ensure that readers maintain a high interest in reading, and it is not easy to write poorly (I have seen people quarreling about whether to accept a certain girl, and I have seen people quarrel with each other about who is big and small, haha, I see it as amusement), and it is really not easy to bear the scorn and accusations of the majority of readers!

Does Jia Baoyu's birth with a jade in his mouth have any impact? There are no hints in the first eighty chapters of Red Mansions, and Gao E's sequels of the same era can directly hit the audience. It's okay for other fans to write like this. After all, if you want to belittle Jia Baoyu, you, who takes Jia Baoyu as the protagonist, are also on the line. It's really unwise to suppress him in various ways. He stayed in Jinling for a hundred chapters for Xiangling. For a guy like Xue Pan, you can write any plot and get him to give it as a gift or give it to Xue Baochai as a dowry. But when you return to Jia's Mansion, you really can't stand it anymore. Even a little plug-in Baoyu makes you have fun. Jia Baoyu is obviously the best protagonist to write, so you just sit on the Diaoyutai in Rongguo Mansion, write garden dramas from time to time, discipline the domestic slaves, and kill a few dandies. If you want to increase your subscriptions and have some ambiguities with the royal family or the sisters-in-law of the Jia family, this is something you can easily do.

I gave up after reading the introduction. Unless the ancient royal family has reached the last generation, otherwise having jade in your mouth is so "auspicious" for the country. Even in the royal family, it will be criticized by everyone. It will not be long. What's more, the family of hereditary generals, don't you think the nine tribes died not fast enough?

I suggest the author write a completely fictional historical article! Or urban literature! Those who read Red Mansions fanfiction are all people who feel that they have something special! I can't stand it as a semi-literate person! Sincere advice

The beginning is too troubling. As a person who likes Baoyu Red Mansions, I have turned to this book countless times but never read it every time.

In ancient times, it was disrespectful to be born with a jade in one's mouth. It would have been good if the emperor had not beheaded him. If he still wanted to have another chance to stand out, this was not the way to seek death.

Xiren

The paragraphs and sentences in this book are smooth and concise, and the plot design is tight and compact. It is indeed a rare good article! Decisive to start

It is precisely because Jia Baoyu is annoying that we have to rewrite him. Otherwise, if he is still annoying, we might as well just let him die. Why keep him?