Swallowing the Starry Sky: Rise from Marrying a Wife

Dear brothers, I am speechless. This is a novel written by my 13-year-old son. I went through his school bag today and found a manuscript. After questioning, I found out that he published it at Qidian. I came in to look at the content and it exploded on the spot. How could this be a 13-year-old? Written by a primary school student. He said he was influenced by Kuaishou videos. What should I do in this situation? 😭😭😭😭😭😢😢

He is obviously a mediocre character, but suddenly he has a character who is even more talented than Luo Feng. Regardless of the system, he is more talented than Luo Feng, and yet he is still a senior student at the age of thirty. Is it reasonable?

In Swallowing Starry Sky, there are so many beauties and all kinds of alien races. When I read the original book, I felt that Luo Feng's wholehearted cultivation was not exciting enough. How could I not want girls? In Tomato's book, the heroine is basically invisible.

Well written, it has the potential to be popular. It seems that the author should be writing about the harem. Seriously, Devouring is best left out of the harem. Tomato's character settings are all very positive, and a harem is not a plus in his world. There is no need to spoil some readers' hobbies. The author is advised to write slowly at the current pace. As for the wife, she still has to enter the reproductive period. Many children and many blessings are inevitable in the Devouring World. Hundreds of years of practice are all in one moment. As long as offspring come out, according to the earth's fertility system, a huge family will naturally come out. So the author should not be afraid of destroying the system conditions he has set.

Diaosi protagonist, anyone with this golden finger who doesn't directly find dozens of wives is a diaosi

The author promised me not to kneel down and lick Luo Feng. He recommended discussing the origin of life with Jiang Fang and enchanting to hone his marksmanship. Baba Tower must be obtained, even if the spaceship is not intercepted, Baba Tower must be collected (I will try my best to cast a recommendation vote every day👍)

Selling dog meat over sheep's heads. If you don't write well about dual cultivation, you have to run away and take risks.

When we get to the universe, wouldn't it be enough to just buy slaves? The so-called stunning beauty in the original book seems to be only 5,000. Is it a black dragon coin or something? I forgot. There are all kinds of people and types. It is impossible to write this kind of subject to the later stage in the context of Swallowing the Starry Sky. The heroine in the original work has few plots. But once you reach the level of immortal life, things are different. Although they are still divided into men and women, judging from the description in the original work, there is no distinction between men and women in the form of life after immortality.

The protagonist can only improve through the system. If he himself can't improve at all, then without the system, does that mean the protagonist is completely useless?

Devouring the Stars is not suitable for a harem. This is what can be written on earth. In the later stage, when you enter the universe, it is not for the purpose of becoming stronger, and it is not for the purpose of revitalizing the human race. . Writing about the harem is really too small.

If you have talent, use it. No matter how talented you are in martial arts, 29 years of mediocrity has proven that you have no talent. The contrast is too great.

Damn, this book is disgusting. The double poison of arsenic and crane crown red! ! !

It's obvious that I want to marry a wife, but, hey, I don't accept daughters, it means I am Liu Xiahui. And I'm being a holy mother, kneeling and licking. It's fun to watch, but not so much.

It is not suitable to devour this world to marry a wife and have children. 1. As long as you have money in this world, even if you are at a low level, you can marry thousands of wives 2. Even if you want to have a child, does in vitro fertilization count? The technology inside Devouring should be very advanced. Masturbate once and train hundreds of millions of children.

The first few chapters were pretty good, but then the cliché of showing off and slapping people in the face started.

As for the offspring, they are just women and have no children, which is boring and boring.

I hope you won't lick Luo Feng. Another thing... The girl didn't like the original one. I didn't feel like it when I read it.

I've lost my golden finger in vain, I can't use it, I'm like a fool and I can't plan.

. . . Even if you have a golden finger, you won't be able to play. You deserve it. You are still a senior student at 29. And that sister, who I just said is not talented as a warrior, just goes to the protagonist's house to practice and improve her physical fitness, which is incredible. It's obviously the Hehuan Sect system, but there are only two furnaces.

I recommend a book called "Swallowing the Starry Sky: My Comprehension Has No Limits", it's really good~

I'm very surprised why the author didn't continue writing in the first place. At this point, the fan list has more than 70,000 words. If the number of words goes up, there will definitely be more and more people.