The Eternal Lord Who Devours the Starry Sky

Come on, it's best to take four pictures a day, two are not enough

After being reborn, do I need to understand the rules again? You said that you need energy to achieve immortality, but you can only say that there is no bottleneck. Rule: This is a knowledge category. Do you want to start over? md, off the mark

An old guy who's hundreds of millions of years old can't even rub his hands on the lowest level spaceship? Not even a secret method? Waste like this?

First of all, the biggest poisonous point is the unreasonable arrangement of the strength of humans and monsters in the early days of the Great Nirvana. Just two years after the Great Nirvana, you told me that humans Hong and Thor have already broken through the planet level, and there are already more than a hundred God of War levels. This is quite unreasonable. Humans and monsters cannot evolve so fast, and the Great Nirvana The viruses of the period did not evolve at once, but were divided into several evolutions. The virus you wrote evolved directly in one go. More than a hundred gods of war appeared in the first two years. As a result, the protagonist was given a stronger secret book than in the original work and it took more than thirty years to reach 80/90 planet level. Isn't this nonsense? Do you think it's normal for others to become the God of War within two years of Nirvana? It shows that they have very good qualifications, and it took more than thirty years for half of them to break through to the planetary level under the guidance of secret books. Author? Normally, there should be hundreds of planets. After all, there are more than 50 planet levels in the original book without the guide of cheats. With the cheats, there are less than 90, which is ridiculous.

At present, it seems that there is nothing poisonous except that it does not look like an immortal.

An immortal has no character at all

I remember that the foreign woman was very sinister in the original novel. Why was she chosen as the heroine?

The author's writing is very nice, but there is a question. Can't planetary level fly? Why does the protagonist keep running? ?

This book is very well written, it's a pity that it's a eunuch

Read Chapter 30, Stallion Story? The protagonist who wants to have sex with girls whenever he sees them, a man who has lived for hundreds of millions of years and still can't control his lower body? Author, are you kidding us?

A few points ① In terms of laws As the original feudal lord who is the ultimate immortal powerhouse, the laws should not be bad. Then the original law of the universe should come to you as soon as you are reborn. For example, if I am reborn as one year old, can you say that I don't know how to ride a bicycle? You can only say that I can't ride a bicycle. Therefore, whether it can be used is one thing, and whether it will be used is another. So, there is no need to change anything. You can just add a few words and say that the sequelae of Goldfinger's rebirth are temporarily sealed, and it will be automatically unsealed when you reach a certain level of strength. ②In terms of mentality If the law can be modified, then the mentality is undoubtedly a poisonous point. You, an old ghost who has lived through countless opportunities, told me that your mentality would fluctuate when you see apprentices fighting. Your mentality was wrong from the beginning to the end. You can't change this aspect. Nearly ten chapters are related to mentality. All I can say is, write it carefully later and put your mentality in a position where a normal immortal should be. As for worrying about the country, there is no need, you are already invincible. The death of hundreds of thousands of people cannot shake the foundation of the country. ③Hurry up and find a reason to go to the universe, even if you fly through a wormhole for three years. You can no longer write on earth. The most you can do is give birth to a baby, and then you can slowly cultivate on your own. Might as well be a cub and go out to play. You still have to participate in the Genius Battle. Apart from anything else, the Chaos True Spirit has a great increase in the power of the Earthlings. Hurry up and play in the universe now and become a clone. Your golden finger is at most useful in the early stage and to ensure a retreat. After arriving in the original secret realm, you have to look at yourself. After all, the laws of other domain lord-level members are no worse than yours, and the domain lord has even left you behind. I don't know if it is a living author or a studio article. I hope the author can accept the readers' opinions.

I feel like I can finish watching Old Mother Diurei, but it turns out that this eunuch

Writing a fanfic about Swallowing the Starry Sky, the protagonist is both a dishonest and a stud, what are you doing...

The protagonist doesn't look like someone who has lived for hundreds of millions of years and is still making various calculations in Novice Village. It should be because the author is young.

I took the time to change some of the poisonous points that readers responded to a lot: 1. The same name is changed to "Leihou" (first ten chapters); 2. One stick did not kill the senior general (Chapter 2); (Actually, I didn't expect so many people to oppose this.) 3. The part where the protagonist is shocked because so many people died in the war; 4. The effect of the Phoenix Nirvana Technique (Chapter 34) (Actually, the author did not elaborate on it, and I did not expect that some readers would think that after practicing this thing, you can become a world master. In fact, what limits becoming a strong person is mainly the domain and law perception); Some other small changes have also been made, so I won't go into details one by one. If there are any poisonous points in the future, you can report them in this post.

The author writes very well, please read more.

Today's Devouring Starry Sky fandom is really totally clueless. The main reason why Luo Feng Realm Master can achieve the title of king is by relying on the king's armor or the general's armor. Otherwise, he would be on the same level as Cody. I really don't understand how all the protagonists in the fanfic came to be crowned kings.

Actually, I think this fanfic is pretty good.

This book can actually continue to be updated. Current fan fiction is simply worse than this one.

Day! In this high-level world, pig's feet are inhuman in the end. What's the use of finding these low-level heroines? Can that time be happier than cultivating? Also, the higher the cultivation level, the higher the perception. When you see the heroine's enlarged pores and smell a different body odor, are you still in the mood?

The design is very novel and the writing is also good. Thank you for being so kind. It's a pity that I won't write anymore!

It's a pretty good book, but it's a pity that it's a eunuch

Is this all over? I'm playing, I bought them all, cao

It's a pity that it's a eunuch, I think it's pretty good.

Author, I suggest you delete this book, it's so damn embarrassing for devouring fan fiction.

It's rare to find someone who has the talent of Venina Bolenas

I think it's finally over. Is this a eunuch?

As an immortal and powerful man who has experienced eternity, shouldn't he look down upon everything in the world? Friendship, family, love, all emotions and desires are almost cut off. Even order is just a flower on the roadside. There is no trace of the immortal character. Chapter 9 is really a bit confusing. Either personal life is not described, or it is just brushed off. Isn't that enough? You're still chatting with women. The protagonist has been traveling in this world for many years. The character you created will not be like this at all. Every immortal god has an immortal will and firmly believes in his own invincibility and his own victory. Has the protagonist lived as a dog for so many years? Eternal years have passed, and the protagonist should not have this character. He is having sex with the maid. How is this different from those love-in-the-back palace stories? Or don't set up a character who fights for the world. What is the difference between the character of the protagonist and ordinary people? Having lived for eternity, it is not as good as Hong's character. Can this kind of person become immortal? Is it one more head than others, or one more nose than others? Just because you are a time traveler, you can become immortal? It's difficult for the protagonist's character to reach the cosmic level. Even if a beast lives for a long time, its wild instinct will be diluted. How can the protagonist become immortal when he is not even as good as a beast? Is it just because you are a time traveler? Are the children of time travelers all random in their nature? No respect for the original work at all

The intention is not bad, but there are too many scenes of forcing someone to show off and slap Luo Feng in the face. It is not a purely cultivation and upgrading story.

Another book about working as a nanny for Luo Feng, licking a dog