Strange Stories About People Becoming Police Detectives in North America

He was shot twice and was dying. Fight back with anesthetics. He actually thought about capturing the other party alive and putting him in jail😰

I want to say that you don't have room to be a policeman, and don't keep exchanging crime points for guns. Just change bullets. You can get guns wherever you want. There are plenty of them in gangs.

There must be something wrong with this author. Three of the less than 50 chapters are completely duplicated.

It feels like it overwhelms the protagonist's strength. So many supernatural events, supernatural times. My godfather, who has been a policeman all his life, actually said that he had never encountered him before. There are bad guys to deal with and supernatural events to deal with. Chaos. There are actually chapters with exactly the same content. What the hell are you doing? I really can't read this book

Why do you need to buy weapons and ammunition in the system store? Legally, he is a policeman, so he can buy them at the gun store. But illegal gangsters or the people he killed also have guns? Isn't it because they don't have money?

The writing style is okay, and the subject matter is average. Because there are already many similar themes. Then the writing technique is too old-fashioned, some details are unclear and cannot be logically consistent. For example: As a police officer, the protagonist does not apply for firearms and ammunition, but has to redeem them himself. Even if the weapons at the police station are inferior, they are better than small pistols, right? Can't the shotgun and M4 rifle mentioned in the article be used? Even if there are no weapons, there should be ammunition, right? Wait, these are all ignored by the protagonist in the article. Also, in order to create plot conflicts and tension, the protagonist's IQ is forcibly lowered. For example: Chapter 31, the part where the protagonist goes to the uninhabited mining area to look for clues and overhears two men in black saying "sacrifice" is so witty. Ten years ago, it was okay to write like this, but now who still likes to watch plots about falling out of control? It's too contrived to set up the plot like this. I hope you can pay attention to these issues.

Very average, no big problem, but tasteless

Just throw away your brain and read this book. You are like an idiot. Not to mention the United States, even the police in China who can carry guns are not so stupid.

Don't give up, kid. Although the data is poor now, at least write it until it's on the shelves!

I'm from Zhihu. Your writing skills are really good.

Is there a superman? Superman is strong😎