Mechanic

The protagonist is useless, and the heroine is all responsible for driving the plot (what kind of Japanese manga; besides, the first few chapters are too wordy)

If you look at the introduction, you will know that it is a dog-licking article. . .

Important rule for wizards, equal exchange. I saw all kinds of forced buying. I don't know about the setting problem, but I still like to write it like this. Don't underestimate the reader's IQ and feel insulted. I probably guessed that I would accept the city lord and the attendant. However, there is no way out if you write like this. If you are not doing it to make money and just love writing, then treat it as if I didn't say it.

Let's change it! No matter how exciting you write later, if you can't stand the front, who will read the back?

Will it kill the city lord and the female knight?

First, change the introduction. Don't start from the line where you meet the radical city lord. Point 2: You already have a source of fire. It is necessary to use deformed metal through modern people's thinking to the greatest extent. The power of the fire source is not only to change the activation of metal, but also to deform the metal in various ways. Point 3: It is best for newbies not to touch the heroine's sister, because the emotional line is not easy to write, so don't write it. Point 4: Having a fire source basically means that you have the possibility of forming an army with one person. Basically, you take the overlord route, or you directly write the single-player elite route. The former may be difficult to write, so you need to pay attention to the character plot. For the latter, you need to pay attention to the map development.

Eunuch, open a new book. You won't survive more than a few rounds of PK.

I thought I could make it to the shelves, but I didn't expect that it was exposed after only 13 chapters.

No normal person likes to be forced!

This Chunchun is just a licking dog + eunuch, and he is also extremely poisonous. The city lord will directly take away your foundation for survival and give you nothing. This protagonist can even bear it.

The eunuch has been doing daily poisoning for three days.

It's time for the eunuch to open the champagne.

He paid a lot for Li Gouliu, but the city lord didn't give him anything, so he didn't get any money.

The subject matter is a good one, but the author obviously didn't think clearly about how to develop the talent for this subject matter. Moreover, the author should be a novice. It is recommended that the author should not touch the emotional line in the end and not describe too much about women. After reading a few chapters, the description of women is rather awkward, which will misunderstand the readers.

I've read a lot of questions about the female protagonist and the city lord. Here's a unified explanation. The protagonist is not just a licker. The female city lord is also a true empress, similar to Wu Zetian's kind of empress. Comments are welcome.

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It's okay to read. I've finished reading the latest chapter. Fortunately, I didn't find anything toxic. It's okay to read.