Perfect Savior

I don't really like the dream chapter, but I still like the reality chapter, so I skipped the dream chapter when the author wrote it in. I had no interest in the dream chapter at all.

It's good, I love it But I'd better write less about the gender change. It's well written, but judging from the current situation, the main character is probably going to be a eunuch in the future... He also has to pretend to be a woman... It's a bit 🙄

The shelf life is so short, do you want to have a meal?

Good looking, grass jelly, not enough, give me more, gkd

Don't rush to criticize Lu Yuan and Altai's CP. As we all know, this plot is a dream, and it is a dead dream of a dead person in a dead world. There must be a knife buried in it, but I don't care, let me knock first———————————————— (Screaming) (Distorted) (Dark Creeping) (Crawling) (Writhing) (Wriggling darkly) (Rolling) (Crawling violently) (Twisting) (Twisting) (Snarling) (Wriggling) (Eerie growl) (Crawling) (Split) (Walking ashore) (Writhing) (Spastic) (Wriggling) (Twisted walking) (Attack regardless of target)

This kind of book is quite good, but I just can't finish it. The author's level fluctuates up and down. If it were at the level of the first Dreamland copy, it would definitely be popular. But at this level, I'd bet 50 cents that it would be impossible to complete it.         ，，，， 😄😄😄😍😍😍😊😊😊

Predict first hand, this book will be 🔥 in the future

I feel like the author might as well write that kind of love story. Lu Yuan and Al Dai simply amazed me. It was so well written, but it was precisely because of this shocking aspect that I felt a bit unreadable later on.

In fact, I liked the last book very much (especially God and Son and Sister Maoer). I personally feel that the writing is really good (for example, the part where humans only need to provide a little hair and nails for the ancient creatures to survive). However, due to updates and various reasons, there are fewer people in the book. If you like this book, you can save more manuscripts. Just update once a day and keep updating.

Hey, another eunuch. The author's writing skills fluctuate up and down, some are amazing, and some are criticized. Why did you suddenly write a counterattack plot for useless materials? "The Counterattack of Waste Materials" is a cool novel, brother, but you are writing a post-apocalyptic novel. How can "The Counterattack of Waste Materials" create a sense of crisis? It could have been the abyss invasion, the game and confrontation between the top and middle forces on the earth, and the danger of the bottom forces, creating a precarious atmosphere. You suddenly wrote about a safe and comfortable life for ordinary people seven years later. Don't you think it contradicts the plot that was laid out before? It could have been about the crisis of the earth, the fight against the abyss, the invasion war, the anti-invasion war, interspersing the dreams of the magic continent to give readers the opportunity to understand the magic continent, and later the opportunity to connect the earth with the magic continent.

Overall it's very good, but the author needs to improve his common sense and read more about why there are not so many common sense poisonous points. For example: The sniper is deployed at 3,000 meters... The current world record is only for one person above 3,000 meters. The speed of the bullet is only three to four hundred meters per second, and it takes 10 seconds to fly. For another example, it appears many times: one thousand meters underground, two thousand meters underground. The author may not even know what the concept is. Usually nuclear bunkers are only a few hundred meters deep and a large building structure 1 or 2 kilometers underground. Can anyone really do it on earth?

After reading it, I found that the author has a history of being a eunuch and is a habitual offender.

I've read the original version. Do you want to read what you're writing? The Antarctic project has been inexplicably 7 years old. Do you know what you are writing?

It feels good. It would be better if we fast forward to the time when the deer is being poked.

In the early stage, Su Ranqing's character design was quite disgusting and a little bit poisonous. The other writing is good and I can see improvement. Great work!

The previous episodes all felt bland and the same routine, which made me feel drowsy. At the beginning of Chapter 55, oh, my whole body became energetic. My aunt laughed all the time. Damn, am I already so perverted 😂

The author might as well write a female channel in his next book. What he writes after the fifty-fifth chapter is much more interesting than the previous one.

It's well written, but it's only updated three times after it's released. How stingy?

It's a bit draggy and tender, and the part about returning to the dream is a bit too long. The protagonist is only "reading" the past and not participating in the past to change the timeline.

Author, you are taking too big a step. I have read about Aboriginals before. I personally think I still like fighting supernatural phenomena in the selection of believers and dealing with special events with various countries. After you wrote one step for 7 years, my desire to read disappeared instantly.

A mad dog can enter the temple. He is not the best candidate, but he can enter. But that Virgin Mary... It can only be said that ten mad dogs cannot allow a Virgin like Olivia to enter the temple. It's okay to be kind, but people like her who are unable to resolve matters immediately and worsen the situation because of the Holy Mother can only fail to succeed and fail.

I took a look, and the main reason for the eunuch was that he was too big, and the dream world was completely unnecessary. The whole world knew about it, and he let the world participate, and then he wanted to show off his blackness. For example, the parasitized No. 0 Had to be turned into ashes. It was stupid and uncontrollable.

I'm speechless. I really liked reading the last book, but it turned out to be a eunuch. I wanted to get fatter with this book, but it turned out to be a eunuch.

It's just a eunuch. If I had known about it, I wouldn't have bought it.

The subject matter is okay, but the writing style is Japanese-style and eunuch-like, which is disgusting enough.

That's it? Three? Who do you look down on?

😅This is a eunuch, it's too sudden.

I was planning to subscribe but ended up being eunuch. . .

Why does the plot of this book seem so mysterious and ghostly?

I'm young and ignorant. I've read dozens of chapters without daring to say a word. Author, why don't you pay me some money?