I Can Regret My Life

To be honest, the author's writing is okay and the subject matter is very novel, but I can't stand it. I always feel that the real world is not so dark, or that I am not worthy of seeing that darkness.

It is getting more and more divorced from reality. Although it is silly to look for reality in novels, first of all, the supermarket uses knives and guns. No matter whether you are using gunpowder or stuffing firecrackers, whether it has been opened or not, whether you have mental illness or not, no matter which country you are in, you will not be taken away the next day, especially if you come out to assassinate in a short period of time, even if such a dangerous person is real Real mental illness will not relax like this. They are all under surveillance. They cannot be released by fraud in the mental hospital. They are monitored by the public security organs for a short period of time. You are too fake. After the assassination, dozens of people were dispatched for the assassination. You are just playing martial arts. No matter what the reason is, you will get to the bottom of it. You can just come up with it casually. Dozens of people are assassinated, no matter what the method is, whether you panic or not, it turns out that you are just like playing house. Also, when the protagonist is assassinated by dozens of people and the interpersonal relationship is clear, the police have been provided with clues that there may be problems in the mental hospital. Then the protagonist is assassinated in the hospital. It has been basically confirmed that the mental hospital has certain problems. The problem was that the police pretended that nothing happened, and the protagonist was assassinated again in the amusement park. The same killer, you are just a gal, you are the only one in the world, right? And then, after so many situations, there is no mention of the police investigating the mental hospital. As a result, the protagonist is sent to his hometown, pretending to be mentally ill and going in to investigate. What is this brain circuit? In fact, I have written so much, but back to the beginning, there is a problem with your starting logic. How could three men from mixed society go to the knife to seduce a woman in public, a loan shark, only 300,000, just to get this woman, there are 10,000 ways, it seems that there will be explanations later, write about the person behind the scenes, but your plot. . . And the main character is not worthy of such a big scene. . . . . . With this kind of movement, you can carry out assassinations in public, and you can casually bring out dozens of unrelated people to participate in the assassinations. Your mental hospital is Arkham, the loan shark must be at least Liu Han's level, and the organization behind the cooperation must be at least the umbrella level.

The idea is very good, and the previous writing is good. After the gangsters appeared, the plot was obviously stretched. I can use this idea to open another book.

As soon as the gangster came out, the plot was instantly stretched, and the setting and the appearance of the heroine were in vain. I suggest other authors copy the setting and publish another book. It is absolutely hot.

I just read Chapter 14, I didn't read the rest, and I also read the comments To be honest, I think the selling point of this book should be the repentance of golden finger turning back time rather than the protagonist fighting to the death against the evil forces The dark forces do not need the protagonist to fight Only the protagonist needs to change the regrets of the past And then write through each regret It becomes a short story The main plot is that the protagonist and Qingmei live together as an old married couple You can just be as plain as you like, there is no need for climax You can improve yourself by repenting and acquiring new skills It is already very good You are making some messy things which are purely redundant

This villain is like a dog. I really can't stand it. I keep writing about this thing, but it's not interesting. I would rather see daily life

It's too outrageous to describe a town tyrant as omnipotent, so powerful that he can control the whole world with one hand, altering information in various ways, and paying off international killers! I believe he is so powerful that he can actually control a province!

The village bully in this book is more awesome than Director Qi on TV! He robs people on the street with knives and guns, and comes out the next day after entering the police station. Even the village chief and the mental hospital are not so awesome!

WOC, do so many people now think it is normal to lick a dog without hitting or scolding him?

Outrageous! This plot is too outrageous. He could be saved so quickly for such a big crime. Not to mention the false evidence of drunkenness, model guns, and uncut blades, and not to mention the mental illness certificate. Even with these, it is not that easy to get out. After that, so many people committed crimes, which is simply outrageous.

Let's not mention that the so-called village bullies have guns. The brains of such a powerful village bully are not that stupid. How could I be led by your nose? How could I let you go just because you were wearing a bath towel because I was afraid of touching you? There are many ways for him to not touch you and not let you out. In fact, the self-proclaimed top student came up with a plan full of loopholes. (It means asking his father to borrow money to gamble in the casino, racking up huge gambling debts, selling himself, getting the money, and then sneaking back.) Then he went to touch porcelain. Such mentally retarded behavior. Not only was he lucky enough to meet the male protagonist, but he dared to talk about his plan with confidence and confidence. However, he showed no gratitude to the person who saved him, and looked determined to join their business venture. They also talked about their relationship. It poisoned me.

Regarding the inspiration for the design of the villain in the first chapter of this book: It is a mixture of the villain of the TV series "Our Ten Years (Xixiang Mingyue)" and the villain of the TV series "Operation Icebreaker". That's why I write so wildly.

After reading so many new books, I wanted to complain for the first time. What are you writing about?

If you say that the villain is Huaqiang, I believe him. The entire Internet is full of gunmen, and they are released the next day. Except for those national brands, no one can do it, not even at the provincial level. Each province has the right to legislate, and other provinces cannot control it.

Is there an outline? How do you plan to write what comes next? I won't write more than 100 chapters and finally get to the mastermind, and then I'll write dozens of chapters and send the mastermind to prison, then I'll have sex with two women until I get 200, then I'll write about the business aspect, and then I'll go play with them and be done with it.

It's a bit confusing. In our country, if you dare to have such killers come one after another, it's a bit of a waste. The protagonist is a well-known figure after all. Of course, if you talk about the logic of the novel, treat it like I didn't say it.

It's not pretty since the assassination.

When writing this thing, why don't the author carefully organize the outline and prepare for a remake? You can write a modern plot without violent conflict, but there is a lot of economic and public opinion? If it was really hard, why not change the country or even the background? Why do a lot of Tokyo stories, that is, a lot of people in a city with poor public security, be brought in to change the map? Wouldn't it be more interesting to change it to fantasy? You buttoned the wrong buttons at the beginning, and the more you write, the more awkward you become. The reluctant story shows that the author has a sense of responsibility and is not super careful, but sometimes the boat is small and can easily turn around, and the sunk cost will only get higher and higher. When writing a book, be careful not to get ahead of yourself. You must understand whether others will understand that there is a sense of substitution. Old authors also fall over.

When I saw that girl, I was a little confused. Originally, I wanted to help my hometown get rich, but then I stopped helping my hometown when faced with bullies and chose to run away. Then my childhood sweetheart and that girl somehow got to like the protagonist. The protagonist is an ordinary person. If his childhood sweetheart really liked him since childhood, how could he have been together so long and never fall in love?

This book is also called "I am Invincible after I Learn the Spiritual Victory Method"

It's so top-notch. The plot is really like a dog.

The creativity is good, but the plot is too toxic. I recommend restarting it.

I read Chapter 8, the subject matter is good, but in Chapter 8 I started to feed poison, Renaissance

It didn't work at the beginning. A gang of three gangsters were armed with guns in the city and abducted women. How could they be released the next day? Okay, you can talk about toy guns or mental illness, but the impact is so huge and the police don't do a comprehensive internal inspection? Is there no accountability for abducting women? That woman is so smart, she can make the village bully's family eat national food with just a little trick, so why does she need to be bullied?

I bought three cards at the beginning. This looks very unlucky.

I can only say that it is outrageous, too far from reality.

I wanted to scold you for writing something so outrageous, but forget it. The bookshelf has been added, let's see when the author cuts it.

It's a mess, but some sections are good, but overall it's a mess.

There's no need for a weak person to ruin the whole novel because of a woman. Everyone doesn't like that scheming bitch... Even though the person he lied to is not a good person either? But is it not a good thing that this person can do this?

Author, you are so awesome, how did you come up with this? ? ?