Wasteland: I Came from the Wilderness with the Dragon

The author gives you a suggestion, greatly reduce the dialogue content, because your large dialogue content in these dozens of chapters makes the plot advance very slowly. At the same time, your setting restrictions make your only bright spot, which is your job title, without any specific setting. So now I feel that you are running low on word count. No accident, you will be gone in fifty or sixty chapters.

To avoid misunderstandings, let's talk about the panel settings first. They are available to everyone and are only used to view data. Only the male protagonist can see other people's panels through his left eye. Others cannot peek into other people's panels. The male protagonist's golden finger is the blue eye of his left eye. Therefore, he can see strokes and therefore can see other people's panels. Therefore, the panels are different from others. Thank you for watching. Please point out any mistakes. You can also join the book club to ask me. Thank you again! 😘

Hello, author, this account belongs to my son. He is already in the third grade of junior high school. He is under great pressure in the high school entrance examination. The child is becoming more and more silent and does not communicate with me. In the past few days, I found that he smiled while reading this novel. Author, could you please consider that I am a poor father who wants to make my child happy, and I will update it ten times a day?

This is a new book for a newbie. I don't have good results. I just hope readers can tell me what I can't stand or make some suggestions before leaving. I will make changes if appropriate. There are some places that I really can't see. Thank you.

Well, this book does not have a heroine but has a female supporting character. This book has a dragon but it is not a beast. This book is a wasteland but has fantasy elements. This book... So stay tuned!

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The rest is okay, but the lamp soul is disgusting, so I won't watch it.

Please pursue reading, please pursue reading! This is my first time writing a light novel, and I want to experience the feeling of being recommended!

The story is interesting, well written, and I found a treasure! 😘

Isn't one update a day a bit too little? The plot is slow to advance, and it's easy to get trolled. You need to update more, otherwise it's easy to get lost if you're chasing after it. It's too slow to advance.

Chapter 8 was confusing. Why did you make a contract with Xiao Hei? Why did you get lost? Why did the businessman come to save the protagonist? There are still a lot of questions. It directly negated the previous plot and made it impossible to watch the rest.

Since I've been reading so hard these days, I decided to revise the last few chapters tomorrow, integrate them and rewrite them, in order to achieve my dream of putting Baichai on the shelves! ☺️If I chase after a hundred times, it will last for a month, and you will have nothing to say!

I read about ten chapters, and I felt that it was slow, but I didn't understand what computing power was. The setting is unclear The conflicts in the early stage are not intuitive. I know that you want to write about the wasteland environment and pave the way for the plot, but I personally feel that it is not strong enough. I haven't read it since. Personal opinion,

I've opened a new account. My pen name is: I'm still a teenager. The theme is word games. The highlight is the title of the book "I am the heroine in a word game in the wasteland". If you are interested, check it out. Thank you for your support. It may be a poisonous point. It depends on your personal interests.

Just set it up like Blackbeard can suck out Devil Fruit, or everyone can absorb it and advance it

The writing is quite good, I wonder how many chapters a day?

Come and try out the book. All comments represent my personal opinions.

Let's do some dried tomatoes. The water is too deep at the starting point. When we have 10 million characters, we can come back to preach.

The visuals are too weak, but the plot is okay

The world setting is okay and the plot is okay, but there's too much nonsense.

The writing is quite good, but updating once a day is too slow. Also, is there only one main character, the lizard? Can we contract something else?