Gods Can Never Be Bought Off by Their Believers

It gets boring after a while. When the power you gain has no meaning, no matter how much you develop your simulator, it will still be empty. Forty-odd chapters are entirely simulator content, with no elements of reality whatsoever, which is quite odd. The interesting thing about simulators is that you can gain power and other things to cheat your way in real life.

Keep it up! You need to have your own outline and ideas. Don't drastically change your outline based on a few comments. Books that teach you how to write are likely to suffer from severe homogenization, becoming mere copies of previous novels' formulas, like *God Simulator*. Don't the opinions given by those teaching you how to write seem heavily biased towards *God Simulator*? Formulas are the core; otherwise, you won't retain readers.

The Mother Tree of Desire. Is the protagonist really that casual?

It's quite visually appealing, but those followers are practically Orcs. I'm thinking, whatever level of enemy they encounter, they immediately develop high-tech capabilities of the same level to turn the tables and crush them. When will there be a massive free-for-all?

As for the new book, if all else fails, I'll write another one on space survival, ocean survival, or any other kind of survival. Just don't write any of that nonsense.

Ten chapters are enough for someone to write a million-word farming novel. While I object to padding, this is basically just an outline! I can understand the continuous technological explosions under the insane increase in intelligence and the rule of gods, but you've only written about explosions. And to put it bluntly, apart from the Great Chief, there isn't a single complete character in this book (the Great Chief doesn't even have a name; he's just a pure plot device).

The description looks good, I'll give it a try.

Aside from the deity's name, "Desire Sow," everything else is alright. It has both literary flair and rhythmic structure.

It's pointless; recruiting believers is completely useless. As a deity, aside from receiving some berries that never fall (whether for pain relief or disease treatment is unknown), there are only some insignificant gains, as if it were simply playing a game. It seemed alright at first, but it became increasingly boring. Gaining faith sounds lofty, but it can only be used in games. If it doesn't improve your own strength, it's meaningless.

You've only read one chapter so far, should I read it or not? Why did you cut it off?