Gods Can Never Be Bought Off by Their Believers

It will become boring after a long time, and when the power obtained is meaningless, no matter how you develop the simulator, it will be empty. More than forty chapters have always been simulator content, with no realistic elements at all. This kind of length is very wrong. The interesting thing about simulators is that you can gain power and other things, and make fun of your own reality. Currently, it is all about simulator elements. In reality, the protagonist just eats and drinks, so what's the point? Even if you write about reality later, you have to lay the groundwork in front of it. Instead of writing about simulators like a running account, it is basically a fast-food novel. You can read the novel at a glance without using your brain.

Come on. You need to have your own outline ideas. Don't change the outline randomly because of a few comments. Those who read books and teach you to write books will most likely become homogenized and become a reversal of the novel routines of the previous generation, such as God Simulator. Don't you feel that the opinions given by those who teach you how to write are a bit biased towards god simulators? Routines are the core, otherwise you won't be able to retain people.

The Mother Tree of Desire. Is the protagonist so casual?

It can only be said that they are pretty good-looking, but those believers are just like Orcs. I thought for a while, if they encounter any level of enemies, they will immediately develop the same level of high-tech and defeat them in turn. When will there be a big fuck?

As for the new book, I really can't write another book about survival in the universe, survival in the ocean, and all kinds of survival. Don't write these messy things.

The content of ten chapters is enough for others to write a million-word farming article. Although I object to water injection, all you have left is an outline, right? I can understand the continuous explosion of technology under the crazy increase of intelligence and the rule of gods, but your mere writing is an explosion. And to put it bluntly, there is no complete character in this book except the Warchief (the Warchief doesn't even have a name, he is just a tool)

The introduction looks good, let me give it a try.

Except for the name of Desire Sow, everything else is okay. . The writing must be well-written and the rhythm must be rhythmic.

It's boring. It's useless in developing believers. As a god, apart from getting some berries from Buluo, whether to relieve pain or cure diseases, there are only some dispensable gains. It is like simply playing a game. It looked okay at first, but became more and more boring. Acquiring faith sounds lofty, but it can only be used in games. If it cannot improve one's own strength, it means nothing.

This is just one chapter. Should I read it or not? Why did you cut it?