Bad Guy: Tianjianxing

So... Chapter 1 My father and sister are both fighting against a bad handsome man, and they want to surrender... Why are you trying to fight? In the end, he received a severe beating in vain, and my father also broke his arm. Totally meaningless behavior.

I think it's feasible. All the remaining saints from the empress can be taken as concubines. I agree to add one

It's very good. The beginning highlights the arrogance of a time traveler (it's normal, after all, there is a God's perspective, and the protagonist has a reputation as a genius murderer since childhood.), And then he is forced to join the bad guys due to family ties (no intelligence to join the bad guys). Now the plot is quite consistent with the original characters. I just hope that the bad guy will feel good, and then the protagonist will cause trouble. However, based on current observations, the protagonist may not be able to get rid of his identity as a bad guy. There is still hope that the butterfly effect will be greater, and he should not follow the original work too closely. After all, the bad guy has not yet ended, and he is afraid of being stabbed in the back.

I thought it was something, but it turned out to be a rubbish novel.

The protagonist's appearance has no effect except to steal a few women. Also, I really didn't know that even though I've traveled through time, I'm still a loser. He still resorted to force CP at every turn. It would be fine if you traveled through time and became Li Xingyun. It also makes people feel more normal. I have lived for more than 300 years, and I have never seen any genius. I insist on you being a Sky Sword Star. It's totally a mechanical statement. Dad was caught by Yuan Tiangang, and he still did some tricks. Is he blind? There is no other meaning. If the author sees it, please feel free to take advantage of it. After all, bad guys are quite popular nowadays. Don't waste the heat. (Author, please don't scold me. I also like to read bad people's fan fiction.)

I think it might be better if the title of the book is changed to Innocent Star 🔥

Emperor Hades has already demonstrated that the Great Heavenly One's skills are vulnerable to a single blow, yet he still looks for excitement. When I saw the beginning, I didn't want to read it anymore. I wonder if the commander will commit suicide sooner or later?

There are a lot of poisonous points, and the main character is too loser.

Your setting doesn't work, don't add your own ideas

Author, is the protagonist above the Great Heaven or the Great Heaven? If you write the protagonist and appear with Li Keyong's force value, it is understandable to stab. However, for a mere Great Heaven, even the known masters cannot be invincible, and even the empress can't be crushed. How dare you touch the commander? No matter how much you expand, you have to be at the level of the Empress Big Brother, right?

What time has the protagonist traveled through? Do you want to have a chance with a bad guy? Just forget about being invincible, little trash

After seeing the bad guys, I still don't believe that the commander is the strongest one. I can only say that he deserves it.

Yuan Tiangang exaggerates too much. The character set given by the original author is very good. He is invincible and has three hundred years of martial arts to protect his body. In fact, he is just like the Japanese overlord and Xu Fu in Fengyun. If he is so strong and has conquered the world so early, he still needs to be an undercover agent and plan something. Anyone who disobeys will be killed. Obviously he is afraid, but If you don't show it, just think about it and you will know that this kind of person cannot be invincible in the world. After three hundred years, it is useless to fool the passionate audience. An objective person can see the bugs by looking at the introduction. A strong person must be as greedy and undemanding as the master who is under one person. Otherwise, he will destroy your whole family, and beat you until you are disobedient. Both the kingly way and the domineering one must be held in one's hand, it's just a matter of which hand. They also sent an undercover Meng Po (I just checked Douyin and saw a talk about the ceiling of Chinese comics. I went to learn about the plot and characters and add some explanations. In fact, Yuan Tiangang is suitable to be the mastermind behind the scenes, not a nanny. An invincible character who serves as a nanny to serve the protagonist makes the protagonist look like a mama's boy. I have some opinions on this character). I originally had some opinions, but now I am no longer interested in talking about it.

There are three golden chapters. In the first chapter, I was persuaded to quit, and then I was no longer interested.

The strength distribution of the three kings is unreasonable. The official said that Ying Gou is the strongest among the four corpse ancestors. You still rank her behind the surrender. The strength distribution of the three kings is also unreasonable.

Dowry of the heroine and empress Jiutian Saint Princess

He also said that it might be uncomfortable to watch in the early stage. You won't look good in the later stage either. People would kill Li Xingyun directly if they were threatened by others. I don't know what he wrote.

Nowadays, those who write about bad guys are recruiting that girl from Mobei, and then a hybrid will become the emperor of China. I am speechless.

A writing technique that goes against the grain, only humans and machines will give it a favorable review!

The revenge of being beaten in the first chapter is now being avenged 😈

Also see Your Highness, even that mud is worthy of it

If Li Yuanba was still here, you, Yuan Tiangang, would not be a matter of punching him

It's good to learn more knowledge. Do you think Tiangang Thirty-Six is ​​just making it up? You check Baidu, Tianjian? 🤫

I still have some brains, but my selfish desires are too strong

Can the heroine add a general? I haven't seen many people write.

I was persuaded to leave before I even finished reading the first paragraph. I'm afraid the author is not the bad guy I saw on Douyin. If I believe that sentence, Li Keyong can have a stalemate with the commander-in-chief.

Shuli Duo is good at martial arts, similar to Li Maozhen. How do you want to write it?

The protagonist looks like a loser in the early stage