The Gunslinger of Samsara Paradise

The derivative world also needs to include the mastermind behind the scenes, which is honestly not interesting! Because the derivative world itself is a base for training low-level personnel, Su Xiao was moved to the group because he was too "outstanding" 😂 Keep him up again

The author is planning to write a Samsara Paradise fanfic for a long time, so if you think it doesn't taste right, you can give me feedback. I will read every comment.

1. The psychological description does not need to be so obscure and complicated Not to mention comments and explanations Just keep it simple Book friends come to read books to relax 2. Try to change it in paragraphs One sentence or two sentences is enough It will help improve reader retention rate

I heard that every good book has an idiom called "Solitaire". I'll do it first. It's so popular.

I feel that there is no need to add extra settings in the derivative world. If you have never seen it before, you are not used to it. Why not put your ideas in the native world later! The first derivative worlds are just too simple. Later, when the protagonist becomes stronger, the original world and the battle for the world are more exciting.

Catching bugs all the way down made me a little tired, and I wanted to wait for others to repair it before seeing the results. Tell me your impressions: 1. I have a vague feeling that the author has substituted his own perspective for the protagonist, and it feels like Su Yan has read the script. (Perhaps the character with high IQ has not been set up properly, and the IQ shown in the first copy does not match the IQ shown in the second copy, such as Testing Paradise). The author should pay attention 2. Detailed description-combat The process is a bit rough (omitted) and needs to be polished 3. The character of the protagonist seems to be pretty good now. First of all, the IQ is not low, at least not the kind that breaks the situation violently; the luck is also good, and the treasure chest often explodes; the moral value is also quite high, I don't mind showing some dispensable kindness, and I won't show some inexplicable pity to the enemy. The author needs to continue to deepen this character to let readers form an impression. Overall, it's not bad, come on!

Author, are you cutting it? If not, you can take a closer look at the DNF magic gunner, and soften the four professions into the protagonist's power system. This will create a viewing experience that is different from the original work.

As for the length issue, I can guarantee that each chapter will be no less than 4k words. Compared with other novels, one chapter is worth two chapters. I really don't like to forcibly separate things that are not too late in the narrative. So I think it would be better to send out two pages of 2k words than one chapter of 4k words.

Thanks to the big guys for the rewards, Twenty-One would like to thank everyone here.

Author, don't let most of the plot be about the interaction between the protagonist and the plot characters. The most classic thing about Samsara Paradise is always the plotting and fighting between contractors and people in the native world. You can create some crazy comments appropriately.

If gun skills are the basis, it is best to choose melee skills and bow and arrow skills. If you have gun skills and hand-to-hand combat in melee, you can use bows and arrows in long range and shoot guns as arrows (´｡✪ω✪｡｀) But bow and arrow and gun skills are best developed in the direction of penetration. Think about it. When you shoot a spear as an arrow when firing a bow, there are double penetration judgments. It is exciting just thinking about it (๑>؂<๑)

Paradise fandom is slow to take effect. You have to write more and it will grow longer. The author can find a good rhythm and add his own things. Come on.

If you are interested in spear skills, you can take the Iron Feather King exam.

Four attributes plus techniques, poor takeoff in the early, middle and late stages

Didn't you come back in three days? It's been three months. Is it cut?