Quiba in Avatar

The subject matter chosen is good, but the protagonist's shit personality makes up for this part of the advantage.

Haha, this is a common problem for new authors. For the first time, they want to write a "masterpiece", and they want to make the protagonist grow slowly, first suppress and then expand. As a result, I suppressed the protagonist for most of the first part of the book. Later, I found that I didn't know how to "promote" the protagonist, and finally ended hastily. There was a lot of foreshadowing, but it turned out that when it was time to feel good, it didn't feel good at all. Or maybe it's just that the author feels good about it, but readers don't feel it at all. If you want to write a long article, you must be able to write an invincible and enjoyable article. Only in this way can you know what is the best way to enjoy. Otherwise, you will just suppress it first and then promote it...

The Avatar itself is a standard story of the king. The world structure of the Avatar is not big. Don't procrastinate in doing things. After completing the Avatar, go to the next world. The story of the Avatar cannot even support a half-million-word story. Unless you continue to create original numbers, unless you add the Legend of Korra, you can , The Legend of Korra is not a supernatural power, so I would like to switch to the infinite stream as soon as possible. After all, it is not a long masterpiece like Naruto, Bleach, or One Piece. It only has a little story in itself, and you tell it so slowly. You just talk about your childhood in a long way. Can you enter the story faster? You are slower than An

Good guy, Quiba + Avatar, double chefs are ecstatic

I couldn't help it anymore, I could keep watching it all because of Quiba and the Avatar. I wanted to greet you, but I forgot about it

The protagonist has no courage at all. He clearly knows that going to the palace will make things difficult for him, so he shouldn't go, but he goes every time. If he goes, he will be beaten like a turtle. Other novels have gained something, but your protagonist is so frustrated.

Shui's writing is still procrastinating and has no main line. The protagonist's character is still that of a good old guy, and it's completely unclear where Kuiba's plug-in function is. It's neither prominent nor obvious. The protagonist's growth curve is very abrupt, like a child writing a diary.

I want to get fans from both circles, but I don't seem to get anything.

There has been no update for two days. Is the author a eunuch?

The gods who came to the supernatural world should know about the appearance of Kuiba, right? Is there a GodSpirit that can respond?

Crush the bones of the old king bit by bit, and then execute him Ling Chi. You should leave the Kingdom of Fire now, concentrate on practicing, and wait until you can summon Qi Hengsan to come back and bulldoze them. A militarism, to put it bluntly, is no different from the Nazis, a pure invader. Now I hope that the protagonist can rise up within 50 chapters and break every bone of the enemy, especially the old king.

And how could the most important protagonist not know the plot? Isn't this just a pseudo-indigenous thing? Mao has no advantage.

So far, I think it's pretty good. If the author keeps updating, there shouldn't be much of a problem. As for the other issues, it's okay. Typographical errors are not a problem. You just need to understand the meaning. The character is not bad and you can follow the growth stream. The biggest problem is that the audience for Avatar is very small. It is estimated that not many people will read it. Most of the people who wrote about Avatar have gone to the palace, so it depends on the author's book. Anyway, I don't care, this is the only one left. I hope the author can continue writing.

Support the author, but I also hope everyone will support my friend's novel. I would like to recommend you a fantasy novel that is extremely imaginative. This novel is: Returning to the Fairyland, the book is at the starting point. This is a very silly novel. The author specializes in funny novels. There are various plot contrasts and funny plots in the novel. The novel is very funny. I hope you can support my good brother. I hope you can support the crowd and the seat. Thank you all fellow Taoists for your support.