Longevity Begins as a Corrupt Official

Where's the dog? Why is he such a pushover?

There's even such a bizarre setting as a household registration system in the Heavenly Dao realm.

The protagonist seems to lack the talent to be a mastermind; he always leaves loopholes in his actions, causing the big shots to clean up his messes. He's incompetent but obsessed, and always messes things up at crucial moments.

I won't acknowledge you as a corrupt official unless you forcibly abducted a woman.

The setting is incomprehensible: Martial arts strength determines everything - so you have to practice martial arts - practicing martial arts requires techniques - techniques can only be obtained by becoming an official - becoming an official requires taking the imperial examination - taking the imperial examination requires studying - how well you study has nothing to do with martial arts…

The premise is too grand; I feel the author can't handle it. The protagonist's character is too complex; it's bound to fall apart sooner or later.

It started off well; a crazy surge in martial arts prowess; eliminating everyone in the know means no one will know; domineering. The arrival of the female rebel turned things extremely toxic; the male characters' writing was so pretentious. Writing about how incredibly saintly she is; modern people's issues; and bringing up body memory again. The woman's passive reaction was to kill him. After checking her body, the person who rescued her acted like a scoundrel, ready to hunt her down.

One look at his profile and you know he's a corrupt official who betrayed his own class.

Does the author sometimes touch their nose, regardless of time, place, or who they are with? Don't you feel embarrassed? I suggest you touch your nose less often. Actually, you can touch other objects on your body, such as objects similar to your nose. This can relieve your embarrassment, make you feel like a saint or Buddha, and even instantly put you into a sage mode, which is beneficial to your mind and body!

Seeing the Hua family's grand ship and Xu Chongzhong's Taoist seclusion awaiting death, I have a question: Hua Nongyue and Xu Chong have no prior emotional foundation, not even a direct encounter. Yet, after only one meeting, the female lead's sister-in-law is forced into falling in love with the protagonist, using a far-fetched reason (a poem and some imagined explanation) that it was all a…