Simplification of the Road: from Perfecting the Magic of Archery to Becoming a True Immortal

The protagonist must have a cat cake in his head. No, it's the author. 25 Taels of silver can cover the expenses of a family for several years. As a result, buying a pill can increase dozens of proficiency points in an hour, but he can gain hundreds of proficiency points in half an hour in the sun. Then the author keeps portraying the protagonist as being short of money, and the protagonist still thinks that the money is worth spending. He also has no brains to save a drowning girl and take him home. Knowing that the other party has cultivation, he is obviously struggling, but this wave will bring a lot of trouble.

I'm speechless. I travel five thousand kilometers a day in the Golden Elixir stage. A spell can only run a hundred feet with one-tenth of the mana. A sword shines dozens of feet in a Qi training stage. Tell me what's the use of practicing this spell. In the Golden Elixir stage and Nascent Soul stage, I'm afraid of drowning in the sea. Practice a breath-holding technique. The effect of this technique can hold your breath in water for three days. Such a weak Jindan Yuanying stage.

I found that there is a common problem in the current Changsheng novels 1. At the beginning, they will be charged for protection fees by gangs 2. After a few chapters, they will definitely join a martial arts gym or a medical center 3. The talent is not very good, so they rely on the panel to avoid being kicked out 4. There is usually a black market around 5. After learning martial arts, most people will kill those who charge their own protection fees

There is a reason why this kind of book cannot be started. No matter how powerful the protagonist is, as soon as the protagonist makes progress, the other supporting characters will immediately keep up. No matter how big the resources the protagonist gets, they can keep up anyway, which is completely unreasonable.

If the protagonist is not promoted, no one will be promoted. Once the protagonist is promoted, the villains will immediately follow.

Knowing that it was Ma who framed Sister Zhen, she didn't kill him. Instead, just let it go! Then when you start practicing archery, you know you will be blackmailed, and you gamble for money. What's the point! Create conflict? There was a conflict from the beginning, so go ahead and fuck him! Be more decisive and don't always wait for the enemy to come to your door. This method is not suitable now.

Either stop writing about women. Every time you flirt with a girl, cultivate a relationship, and then let it go, it's disgusting.

If you don't have any skills, just go up the mountain and pick up one? There is no woman, just pick up a princess by the river? You call this the Dao Zhi Jian system, you call it the King of Luck system. Where do you think of the plug-ins? Do you have an outline? Man, it's just for fun.

Don't write about emotions, just use the heroine, it's very embarrassing to watch.

It's a no-brainer, the plot logic is bad, the writing is not bad, it's bad

After picking up a eldest princess, the emotional scenes were very blunt and awkward.

He is not rescuing women, he is on the way to rescuing women, and he always arrives at the critical moment.

This panel is amazing, you can make progress by spending money, the question is where does the money go? Wouldn't finding a mine make you an immortal instantly?

It's nothing at first, but when you get to the golden elixir, one body method is thirty feet away, combined with a bunch of Niubi skills, one body method casts one hundred feet, and then uses one-tenth of the mana, three hundred meters, you are not as good as Ta Xue Wuhen in martial arts. Now you insist on doing Xiaoyao Tiandi Jian, just like Yuan Xingke, you use a knife. You have no problem with using a knife. When you get to Jindan, you punch one after another in a fight, but you make up your own exercises. You have done a bunch of sword-type exercises and fused them, but you are still stubborn and do not use a knife. If you use a knife to fly with a sword, how do you solve the top-heavy problem? In the end, you returned to the clan with all ten thousand swords and used the sword, with poor self-esteem and unreasonable attitude.

It's a third-rate novel, the plot is brainless, the protagonist has a sarcastic aura, he either goes out to cause trouble every day, or he can cause trouble from the sky just sitting at home. The protagonist's enemies and villains all have a large group of relatives and friends behind them, and they are all very united. The protagonist only has a few vases around him, not even a friend, because except for passers-by, all the male characters who appear are enemies.

It's poisonous and watery, pure studio writing, I'm really sick and vomiting. One chapter has half the data

I always feel that the enemies of Pig's Knuckle are all very united.

There is no end to how much the author likes the two villains Su Changkong and Zhao Fuhu.

Such a powerful golden finger can't build a foundation in a hundred chapters, I'm speechless

Nowadays, all the fairy tales are about how the protagonist practices the exercises, but no one leaves a legacy, so what? Are they all iron roosters? Nothing? Inheritance is very important. This is what I read in an article on cultivating immortals. After all, the meaning of being passed down from generation to generation cannot be explained clearly.

Even though he has become a golden elixir, he is still a virgin. What a waste.

Was it written by AI? The questions and answers are really interesting 🤭. The two female supporting characters also acted viciously and violently to advance the plot and slipped away.

I think it would be better to change the title of this book from Gou to Mang.

Chao Gai is a good man, everyone says so. Brother Lin Chong, since you recognize me as your brother, I will take you to the capital and kill Gao Qiu until he bleeds like a river! Fellow Taoist Zhao Ji, since you call me senior, I will give you this red umbrella white stem fleshy Ganoderma lucidum taken from the Yaochi Lake in Yunnan to make elixirs for you. Aguda, since you are willing to die to prove your ambition, then go ahead with peace of mind, your wife, I will support her! Toba Japanese King, since you kneel down and ask for surrender, why don't you surrender your country as soon as possible? Don't you know that Jun's father hasn't swallowed the meat on his lips yet and is very hungry? Haosan, I heard that you have made a fortune selling curry. The girl on her left hand has money on her right hand, and she races gods by the Ganges River. Then double the gold and silver tribute. Camel, the Kunlun slave is so brave that he dares to ask the monitor lizard to take maternity leave. You are not bad at all. You dare to rob silk and green tea. It seems that I want to teach you how to grow cotton on the Red Sea. Why don't the Western barbarians kneel down when they see the miracles of the East? A piece of knee is missing and the legs cannot be bent straight? Then cut it open, crush it, and let me take a look at it for you! Don't thank me, I'm just a good person who likes to smash people to pieces. Chao Gai was sitting on the top of Weiyang, facing the morning sun, bathing in golden light, and welcoming all nations to come to court. Suddenly, a big book that was thousands of miles long fell down overwhelmingly, and the pages were opened to reveal a line of large characters: ... "Water Margin of Destiny" occupied precious land for publicity.

I don't know if the fairyland chapter will be written in this book. I hope that the fairyland chapter will be completed.

He has advanced to the second level, but has nothing to do with the masters. Regardless of whether they are first-rate or second-rate warriors, they are all warriors. A so-called second-rate master is one who can basically run amok among all second-rate warriors and is better than most second-rate warriors. Only then can he be considered a master among second-rate warriors and be called a second-rate master. Martial arts, martial arts, and martial arts are not about practicing well, but practicing well is a master. That requires fighting against each other, which requires experience, and requires a lot of experience against the enemy. Only when you can defeat the strong with the weak can you be called a master.

Is there anyone over the age of thirty reading this book?

It's so advanced that you can only kill people by one level.

Can the princess be added to the harem?

It's too dry and has no nutrition. It's all about fighting monsters and upgrading.