Simplifying the Great Dao: From Perfect Divine Archery to Sneaking My Way into True Immortality

The protagonist must have a cat cake in his head. No, it's the author. 25 Taels of silver can cover the expenses of a family for several years. As a result, buying a pill can increase dozens of proficiency points in an hour, but he can gain hundreds of proficiency points in half an hour in the sun. Then the author keeps portraying the protagonist as being short of money, and the protagonist still thinks that the money is worth spending. He also has no brains to save a drowning girl and take him home. Knowing that the other party has cultivation, he is obviously struggling, but this wave will bring a lot of trouble.

I'm speechless. I travel five thousand kilometers a day in the Golden Elixir stage. A spell can only run a hundred feet with one-tenth of the mana. A sword shines dozens of feet in a Qi training stage. Tell me what's the use of practicing this spell. In the Golden Elixir stage and Nascent Soul stage, I'm afraid of drowning in the sea. Practice a breath-holding technique. The effect of this technique can hold your breath in water for three days. Such a weak Jindan Yuanying stage.

I found that there is a common problem in the current Changsheng novels 1. At the beginning, they will be charged for protection fees by gangs 2. After a few chapters, they will definitely join a martial arts gym or a medical center 3. The talent is not very good, so they rely on the panel to avoid being kicked out 4. There is usually a black market around 5. After learning martial arts, most people will kill those who charge their own protection fees

There is a reason why this kind of book cannot be started. No matter how powerful the protagonist is, as soon as the protagonist makes progress, the other supporting characters will immediately keep up. No matter how big the resources the protagonist gets, they can keep up anyway, which is completely unreasonable.

If the protagonist is not promoted, no one will be promoted. Once the protagonist is promoted, the villains will immediately follow.

If you don't have any skills, just go up the mountain and pick up one? There is no woman, just pick up a princess by the river? You call this the Dao Zhi Jian system, you call it the King of Luck system. Where do you think of the plug-ins? Do you have an outline? Man, it's just for fun.

Knowing that it was Ma who framed Sister Zhen, she didn't kill him. Instead, just let it go! Then when you start practicing archery, you know you will be blackmailed, and you gamble for money. What's the point! Create conflict? There was a conflict from the beginning, so go ahead and fuck him! Be more decisive and don't always wait for the enemy to come to your door. This method is not suitable now.

Either stop writing about women. Every time you flirt with a girl, cultivate a relationship, and then let it go, it's disgusting.

Don't write about emotions, just use the heroine, it's very embarrassing to watch.

It's a no-brainer, the plot logic is bad, the writing is not bad, it's bad