Enlightenment of Merit and Virtue in the Wilderness Period

There is an unavoidable problem when writing fan fiction: either you have to find many excuses to seize the opportunity and at the same time let the original protagonist follow you around and become a dog to be raised. Or give the original protagonist a hard lick. It's like I can't live without surrounding the original protagonist. Doesn't chance depend on the author? There are so many Taoist ancestors, but they want to go to Shuifu. The main character's purpose is to have Taozu accept disciples and protect him. Doesn't the sloppy Taoist have the Taoist ancestors and later accept direct disciples? Couldn't the author just randomly arrange a Taoist ancestor to pass on? Besides, Patriarch Bodhi accepted Ji Ning not because of Shui Mansion, but because he saw the right person in his eyes. Otherwise, why were the previous masters of the Water Mansion not accepted as disciples?

It's great to use a gun, but I'm tired of using a sword.

The author now only explains that the protagonist has practiced the Nine Heavens Map of Chiming and the Northern Ming Sutra. In addition to knowing that the protagonist has comprehended the Way of Guns and the Path of Water and Fire, the most important technique for the protagonist to understand the Great Dao (similar to the three-foot sword in the original work) has not been mentioned.

Doing tasks and flirting with women? It would be good to refer to the process of the heroine and hero in the original work.

Is the first chapter so poisonous? When you are enlightened, you cannot understand the Tao. Asked more than 10,000 times a day?

You know, kill, kill, kill, God must be blind to give you merit.

Ji Ning writes too much and is basically the second protagonist, and the length is too long, which makes him take over the main role. The story is too closely related to the original work. It is obviously Ji Ning's story and you have to be a part of it. If you don't know how to write your own character story, you don't have to write it. Nowadays, there are more fan writers, but they are not as easy to talk to as before, and the requirements are higher.

I have read both the fan fiction and the original work, and I basically understand the plot. The most taboo thing is that you can basically guess the plot just by looking at the table of contents. You are looking at new stories rather than continuations and rewrites of old ones.

You really don't have any originality at all. All the plots have to follow the original work.

It's a pity. I thought this book was really good, but it turned out to be a eunuch.

Come on＾0＾~, No. 49, Tianyan forty-nine, escape one of them, I am the escape one, the strong one in the escape realm is here, I am claiming to be invincible, who dares to say that I am invincible, who is the top of all the roads of the heavens, when I meet the escape one, it will become empty

If it's well written, I'll order it all if you don't supervise it.

It's very well written, just don't keep updating it. There are not many fans of Manghuang. Look at how many people write about Douluo Dou Po next door. Come on.

See chapter sixty-three. Goldfinger merits and enlightenment! Um! Just the first few pictures appeared! Studio writing? Was it written by a different author?

The heroine persuades her to quit. The emotional scene is so awkward that I can't watch it anymore.

Why does it keep repeating itself? The beginning of the next chapter and the end of the previous chapter are repeated so many times, so I can't even make up the number of words.

Chapter 147 Beishan Baiwei is dead, and the flowers are scattered

What's going on? There's been no update for two days.

If you hold the straw, you can't be a eunuch, right?

This writing really looks like another Ji Ning

Are you a pigeon?🙂

What is the identity of the protagonist? When you meet a strange woman, you start having sex. What environment did you grow up in 😰