I Asked You to Tell Fortunes, Not Catch Ghosts!

It's well-written, with a good plot and style, but I don't recommend using real-life trending events as material. They're already unfortunate and unresolved, so it's best not to adapt them.

The pacing of the plot wasn't handled well. It was quite interesting, but it was written too hastily; I didn't even have time to read the next paragraph before moving on. The transitions between paragraphs were also weak. Keep up the good work!

A male-oriented overpowered protagonist has smuggled himself into the female-oriented genre? I'm outta here, the food's poisoned.

The ending was a bit rushed, it felt a bit rushed.

The beginning was well-written, but the ending felt rushed; it felt like it had just begun and then suddenly ended.

It's well-written, except for some slightly awkward transitions. 😊

It's so good! I only support it! Author, please update soon!

Well, it's a bit like a diary entry.

Go go go!

This plot is quite well-developed, and you're not rushing it anymore. Keep up the good work!