I Asked You to Tell Fortunes, Not Catch Ghosts!

The writing is quite good, and the plot and writing are good, but it is not recommended to use real hot events as material. It is unfortunate and inconclusive, so it is better not to use it for adaptation.

I didn't grasp the rhythm of the plot well. It was originally quite interesting, but I wrote it too hastily. I didn't even read it clearly until I moved on to the next paragraph. I couldn't follow each paragraph well. Keep up the good work.

Male channel Long Aotian sneaks into the female channel? It slipped away, the food was poisonous.

The ending is a bit fast and feels a bit unfinished

The first part is pretty good, but the second part is too rushed. It feels like it just started and then it ends suddenly.

The writing is quite good, except for some connections that are not smooth 😊

Good looking, only supported, the author will update quickly

How should I put it? It's a bit like a running account.

Come on, come on

This plot is more fully written and less rushed. Keep up the good work! !