High Martial: I Wield the Insect Evolution Scroll

After reading it for a while, I found that the writing was okay, much better than what I originally wrote. However, compared to those old authors, the writing style is indeed not good enough, but this is the normal state of every newcomer. Don't take it too seriously. It will get better if you write more. I suggest you not pay too much attention to the bad reviews of readers for this first book. If you have any suggestions, listen selectively. As long as it is logical and not too poisonous, just do it yourself. Just treat the first book as a practice, don't worry too much about the results, come on!

Screen readers at the beginning? If you get a mosquito, it will only suck your own blood? Why don't I just suck you to death and buy some chickens, ducks and geese? The protagonist's brain is hopeless.

The Terran war relies on the Zerg to make a comeback. It's a pity that the protagonist is not the Zerg. Otherwise, the Zerg would be in first place, and the Terran would still be the last.

I think the later chapters of this book are okay, but there are too many poison points in the front, and the poison resistance is not enough to make it unreadable.

How should I put it? The protagonist is the first in liberal arts in his school, and he can easily get into top universities. Then after reading the book, I feel that the protagonist doesn't know anything. I don't dare to think about other people. It's too outrageous Then such a powerful person hangs on the protagonist's hands as if it's a joke. The protagonist's parents seem to be quite high-ranking, which means that the protagonist can say that he will not be short of money. It's even more outrageous.

Embarrassment syndrome, the righteousness makes me sick

Alas, the road is too narrow, and body training should not be described as so powerful! The main focus should still be on pest control! It would be more interesting to write more about the strengths and weaknesses of each insect, what kind of tactics are needed to maximize strengths and avoid weaknesses, and what kind of multi-insect group is used to kill enemies by leapfrogging! It's enough to practice physical training to protect yourself from force! To develop yourself, you should also be in the mental category, such as being able to increase the scope of control, add types, strengthen micro-management, etc.! Or auxiliary skills such as turning bugs into crazy, treating bugs, etc.! The only thing is that the protagonist is so capable of fighting. What a loser! If Luo Guanzhong wrote that Zhuge Liang could defeat the Three Kingdoms better than Lu Bu, would it be so interesting? And selling a flaw will give you more opportunities to show off and get slapped in the face!

To be honest, the introduction is quite attractive, but the first one successfully persuaded me to leave.

Suggestion Post Moral Kidnapping means too much. The protagonist has never experienced the process of human beings paying for him. From the beginning, he must sacrifice his life for human beings to protect human beings. The most basic thing is everyone for one, and one for everyone Right? The current situation is too morally kidnapped, as if you are a human being and you should die for the human race. There is no process of transformation. People are selfish protagonists but look like saints (fools?), Very distorted and out of touch with reality. The Song Chengyu in the article is obviously just a classmate and has an average relationship, so the protagonist needs to fight to save him. If the world to be described is a Utopia type, then forget it. The style of writing is more realistic, but the protagonist is still like this... It's hard to like him.

The world view and values ​​are different. The author only wants the ultimate powerful individual. He should be the one who clicks in to play the crowd tactics. Otherwise, if you write about Zerg, you need auxiliary capabilities. Are plants not tens of thousands of times stronger than your insects?