Ultraman: Evolution Begins with Humanity

Humanity's overall morality is not yet ready to transform into something like Ultraman.

I've reached chapter 94 now, so I'd like to share my thoughts. To be honest, I was quite confused at first. It was about a human holding a little red ball and wanting to evolve into Ultraman. Later, the author filled in the plot holes from the beginning, so I wasn't so confused anymore. But right after that, the author introduced a concept of parallel worlds in a multiverse! Can you handle it?

Personally, I quite like this style of girl, and she has a pretty good temperament. Most importantly, this is a drama from 2004. Back then, television didn't have so much photo editing, skin smoothing, or face slimming. I think it's already very beautiful. Many people nowadays look like goddesses in photoshopped pictures, but their unedited photos are even worse. That's fine.

First of all, this title has no sarcastic or other meaning whatsoever. It's just that authors who get to read comments while writing are really enjoying themselves. I didn't get a single bad comment, sob sob... Secondly, I have seen some readers say that skipping around doesn't affect the viewing experience, or that there's less plot and more setting. I personally value these opinions.

Chapter 1: Time Travel, Encountering Corruption, and Then Time Traveling Again Chapter Two explains that before the protagonist transmigrated, he was a college student admitted through a special recommendation program. After making a breakthrough in his research, he was detained by the Americans.

If you don't have the skill and imagination, don't write anything superficial. Trying to foreshadow and hint at things will only result in a poor imitation. It's a classic case of being unclear-headed and aiming too high. You haven't even learned how to walk before trying to run away.

Shennong has already tested the poison, and I've reached the part about Gaia, but I can't continue. First, a novel with a clearly defined female lead is actually a harem novel; second, when did Linga become a legendary warrior? Third, the author uses a lot of cringeworthy and tired tropes. Use your imagination: the Warrior of Light smiles crookedly, the Dragon King returns, and the Ultraman army is summoned—this is a realistic plot.

The first chapter is enough to make you want to give up. It's fan fiction trying to be artistic, but it's written in a completely incoherent way.

I don't want to see you injecting your own interpretations and writing a thesis. Can't the plot just unfold? The beginning made me fall asleep. Can't you learn from Battle Through the Heavens?

After reading so many chapters, I really can't concentrate on reading any further. I have no idea what you're even writing. Your book is just a mutant story disguised as Ultraman. You might as well just write a Marvel mutant story directly. No wonder your book is doing so poorly; your previous books also flopped. That's all I'll say. Goodbye.