Ultraman: Evolution Begins as Humans

It feels too watery and the plot is too slow. Most of it is written about explanations or the protagonist's thoughts. You have to brainstorm for a while to do anything.

The current overall morality of mankind is not ready to become Ultraman and so on.

Now that I have read Chapter 94, I will also share my feelings To be honest, I was confused at first, about a human holding a small red ball and trying to evolve into Ultraman. Later, I filled in the pit at the beginning. Although I was not so confused, but right after that, the author created a parallel world sibling in the multiverse! ? ? ? Can you grasp it? You must know that although people from the original world are incompatible with the universe, their own status is very high. As the King of Ultra said, if you want to merge with the world, you can merge with it! Ah, yes, there are benefits, but can you grasp it? Even if there is a little red ball to cheat, you give me one to be ten thousand? This is considered one of the essences of God. Even if it is to be done, it must at least be at the level of Noah! Just like Tiga, he throws stone statues everywhere, but in fact, Tiga's essence is very high. He himself was 30 million years ago. Not to mention the boss of the dark giant, even if he became light, he could still use Shine to defeat the evil god. Where is the protagonist? If he encounters the evil god now that he can't run away, he will have to kneel three times and dunk nine times! On this point alone, the collapse is extremely serious. I will not pursue this book any more I have a characteristic in reading books. As soon as there are signs of collapse, I will stop pursuing it So, what I do with this book is to collect it and throw it into the Ultra category. There are many books on the shelf. Bei Ming bids farewell!

Personally, I prefer girls with this style, and they have a pretty good temperament. The most important thing is that this is a drama from 2004. At that time, TV didn't have so much retouching, skin resurfacing, and face slimming. I think it was already very beautiful. Nowadays, many people who have retouched pictures are like gods, but their raw pictures are worse than this. That's it.

First, first of all, this title does not have any sarcastic or other meanings, because it is really cool to read and comment on the author who wrote the article. I didn't comment at all, woo woo... Second, when I saw some readers saying that it would not be affected by skipping, or that there was less plot and more settings, I personally attach great importance to these reference opinions. (Actually, I was a little angry and depressed at first, but after thinking about it, I felt that what some readers said may be right. I still hope that everyone can be more specific and give some opinions. Maybe no one will care about me, haha.) Before that, let me tell you my own views on this kind of fan fiction, just for communication. Start writing within the existing plot structure. Either the plot flow makes up for regrets, or you try to add your own setting system, relying on your own main line to advance the story and enhance the protagonist's sense of participation. My first book "Picked Up a Divine Light Stick" is actually a bit of a plot flow to make up for regrets. The two books that I wrote later were a hit because they were actually based on my own fantasy structure, some worlds and eras that Tsuburaya did not write about in detail. The level was too low and the results were average. (Actually, the results of my first book were not very good, so I said I just threw myself into the street.) This book was actually written while I was reading a lot of evolutionary articles. It's a bit like the second type of story I mean by relying on your own settings to advance the plot. The main line of the setting is definitely evolution. The protagonist's plot is actually to serve evolution. Those who like to watch astronomy may adapt to this rhythm and a large number of theoretical settings in the middle, instead of blindly adding dots in dark blue. But considering that many Owen readers are fans of the plot, in fact, I am severely restricted by writing this way. Because I chose a niche reader among niche articles to try, and the results were posted to the author group, and everyone said that I was a loser. But I haven't cut the signed book yet, so I still have to work hard to write it down. The above are probably some of my thoughts. I hope you all feel that the book can use more support. If not, you can also give some guidance. Otherwise, you can just leave without commenting. It's not that you're being petty, but it's really not easy to write a book. If you say something rubbish and completely deny it, people who come here may not even have a chance to take a look at it. I hope you can be tolerant and kind to new books and ordinary authors. Since Dian Niang has changed many systems, authors with poor academic performance can hardly make money writing books. Some people actually have dreams and ideas when they write. This kind of psychology is actually very fragile. It may not need encouragement, but try not to discourage it. We are very aware of the poor performance, but at this level, sometimes there is nothing we can do. Only when there are more people writing books can we see some good books that may occasionally appear. This is also the meaning of our existence. In addition, I also watched some other Owen, and some of them had good results. After learning about it, I think they probably use a lot of memes, but because I don't know much about popular social memes, including Douyin and Bilibili, I don't know much about them, and I may not know how to use them. I do know some of Ultra's jokes, but they are all quite old. I can only try to resonate with everyone based on normal assumptions and my own fantasy of the Ultra world. I can only say sorry if it doesn't look good. There is also someone who said that the plot can be skipped. It is difficult for me to respond to this question, because I am afraid that some people will say that I am a jerk, but I still want to say it. In fact, there are very few online literature books that allow you to read line by line and word by word. If you look carefully at the text that starts with a million words, it goes without saying that it requires time and energy, and we are not here to be burdened. Ten lines in one glance, turning pages in one second is the basic operation for old bookworms. In this case, I skip most of the books I read. And there are only a few plots in the novel, and you can guess the plot just by reading. Not to mention fan fiction. If you know the plot of the fan fiction, it will have no impact if you suggest skipping chapters. . . I really can only agree! But there are some things that readers can't stop reading, but authors can't stop writing. If I want to write about evolution, I can't just call Shenlan to add some points, otherwise I will be accused of logical problems and writing about evolution. You can't have your cake and eat it too, the ancients never deceived me. That's it for now. If you have any opinions, you can directly mention them. I will read them and try to write something that you are interested in and enjoy reading.

Chapter 1: Time travel, encountering the Ke system and being polluted, and then crossing over again Chapter 2: Explaining that Pigfoot was a recommended college student before time travel. After researching something, he was detained by the United States. Then because of studying aliens, he passively became one with the red wishing ball in the Ultra World. He traveled to Chapter 1, and because of encountering the Ke system, he traveled again and arrived in the world of Nexus. He started researching again. He felt restricted and planned to return to China for research, and then passively traveled back. Pig Foot always felt lonely in these ten chapters.

If you don't have the writing power and imagination, don't write frivolous things. If you want to write something with a hint of grass, snakes, and gray lines, you end up painting a tiger instead of a dog. It's a typical case of being confused. You've traveled a long way and thought about running away without learning.

Shennong has tried the poison. I saw the part about Gaia and I couldn't stand it anymore. First of all, a novel with a clear female protagonist is actually written by this kind of novel. Secondly, when did Gaia become a legendary warrior? Furthermore, the author played a lot of bad jokes that are very embarrassing. Everyone used their imagination. The Warrior of Light smiled crookedly, the Dragon King returned and summoned the Ultraman Legion. This is a real plot.

The first chapter persuades me to quit, and the fan fiction is here to do literature and art, but the writing is neither fish nor fowl.

I don't want to see you implant your own understanding there and write a paper. Can the plot unfold? I fell asleep watching the beginning. Can you learn to fight to break the sky?

After reading so many chapters, I really don't have the energy to read anymore. I don't know what you and I are writing about. Your book is about someone wearing Ultra's skin, but you're writing about mutants. You might as well just write about Marvel's mutants. It's no wonder that your book has achieved this level of success so far, and that previous books have also failed to gain traction. That's all I have to say, goodbye.

Update soon. At your age, how can you update so little? Sit up quickly, pick up your magic pen of inspiration, reveal your essence, and let us savor it. Don't squeeze out a little bit every time, hurry up! We need a lot, a lot, of your essence!

When the three golden chapters arrive, you will become the three golden chapters😨

The author's use of the three golden chapters is too poor. He overly expanded the world view in the early stage and failed to explain clearly the world line and the composition of the protagonist. The first contradiction is also not good. Didai Universe, what does it mean to ask you, an ordinary person, to take out a sniper rifle with your backhand? A world-changing genius like Masaki can't even hold a gun. In the eyes of TPC, billions of dollars in wealth are just for you. When Dyna World was established, the world's top scientists and talents had to work for TPC. Rich people can't do anything at all.

Forcibly arranging BOSS-level monsters like Gliza to be the descendants and subordinates of those garbage evil gods of the evil system is a bit speechless. In addition to having the power to pollute the minds of ordinary people, those evil evil gods of the evil system are basically no different from ordinary spacemen and dark-type monsters, even if they have the setting of a creator god. Azathoth can also be eliminated by destroying the universe it created, such as the hypertime bomb in the Geed plot. The other evil gods feel that they are at most the level of Gatanjie without the BOSS aura. Take away the ability to pollute the human spirit, and most of the evil gods really have poor combat effectiveness.

I don't understand what you want to write. I write a few chapters in one world. I feel like I haven't done anything, so I jump to the next world. Why don't you just write a running account?

I read a few of them, and I was confused. The plot made no progress. It was all nonsense. I didn't know what I was talking about. It was like this or that.

The protagonist's behavior is not that of a billionaire, he is no different from a useless person who likes to seek death.

It's a mess. I was confused when I read the third chapter of the golden chapter. I am not qualified to comment, but I really can't stand it anymore

The beginning was confusing. Who is in the mood to continue reading?

As I write the Gaia chapter, I'm starting to get fancy. Have you strayed from the main line? Damn it.

I feel that the relationship between the male and female protagonists is a bit too sudden. There is no description of the process. It looks a bit weird.

The only thing I heard about Sleeping Ultra was so bad that I was speechless. After listening to it three times, I fell asleep three times and I didn't know what to describe. It seemed to be about weirdness, saving the universe, and the loss of boxing skills 😭😭😭😭

A group has been created, if you are interested you can join. 808152519. In addition, I changed the introduction to a more freehand description. The original introduction is written here to provide some plot references. ... This book is also called "I saved the world at the beginning and was raised by a young lady to become Dou Minjunxi, so I had to work hard" "I have the Shenlong wishing system but I don't use it, eh, are you angry?" When the unknown collides with fantasy, the mystery of the universe is revealed. As a biological genetic scientist, Jiang Cheng entered the mysterious 51st District to study various mysterious creatures after being secretly arrested. As an alien life form carrying a mysterious red sphere crashes to the earth, Jiang Cheng, who is responsible for the research, saves the world without anyone knowing. The good thing is that he inherited hundreds of millions of wealth and became a professor in the capital. But life has not yet begun peacefully, but the waves of fate have already exploded. Under the threat of unknown darkness, Jiang Cheng had to evolve from humans and use his own knowledge to write the brilliant wisdom of humans. All over the world, following the footsteps of light, Jiangcheng uses human wisdom to achieve greatness! Technology research flow + plot combat flow growth route. ...... Asking book friends to help me make a cover, you can pay, it is better to join the group chat

[Keywords] Technological time travel, infinite flow, plot flow [Storyline] Jiang Cheng, who was reborn, inherited hundreds of millions of family assets, but that day he looked directly at the terrifying existence. His spirit was polluted, and he was transferred to another world and embarked on the path of research and evolution... As a scientist, Jiang Cheng was secretly imprisoned when he returned to the country and became a researcher of mysterious creatures without freedom. However, when a mysterious creature was discovered by Jiang Cheng, everything became different. The good news is that after Jiang Cheng saved this world, he traveled to other worlds and became the owner of billions of assets; the bad news is that after Jiang Cheng inherited billions of assets, he traveled back through time again.

Congratulations on the ending, Sahua🎉, it's only been an hour since you posted the last chapter. Although I haven't read it yet, I bless the author! !

Pi Pi Zhu Shen stream, but without the brothers' favorite clone rebellion and reversal, wouldn't there be a villain controlling a clone to try to corrupt it? Corruption means that there is a main body that is undefended against clones.

What does the heroine plan to do next? Not being able to transform means that the heroine's lifespan is not good, but if the heroine's lifespan is increased, then isn't it just a vase and loses the meaning of the heroine itself?

The previous setting additions are OK, and the world view has been constructed. But if you look at what is written later, you can't think of plot settings, extended hard-pressure combat power, and written theory to make up the number of words.

Let's ignore the expressiveness of Ultraman TV and let's say that if there is a creature made of light with idealistic properties, I can think of the following possibilities with my limited scientific knowledge: First of all, this creature is made of light. I believe that the nerve signal transmission speed of this creature is the speed of light, which means that the thinking speed, reaction speed, etc. Of this creature are all the speed of light. I don't know what kind of reaction the biological thinking will produce in the brain, but I believe that this kind of creature can at least achieve relative time-stopping in thinking when necessary. I can't imagine how this characteristic will help in learning knowledge and controlling the body, but when encountering special situations such as emergencies, this creature has almost unlimited time to think and make decisions Secondly, based on the particle-wave duality of photons, I believe that this creature can be either an entity composed of light particles or energy composed of light waves. It can switch its body to an entity or an energy body at will when necessary. Third, according to the relationship between light and electromagnetism, I believe that this kind of creature can control electromagnetic force and electric energy to a certain extent, and can also perceive various magnetic fields, electromagnetic waves and electrical signals in space. At the same time, I believe that this kind of creature should be able to access the Internet directly through electrical signals. When quantified, fusion with the body or a more efficient way to generate energy Finally, maybe what I said is completely nonsense, but this creature has a certain degree of idealistic attributes. In the case where the above four are completely impossible, the idealistic attributes may play a magical role in making the above four impossible. If the protagonist's evolved state is this state composed of light with idealistic attributes, then it is entirely possible for the protagonist to master these abilities that I guess.