Six Ring Wizard

Suggestions: 1. Try not to innovate when you start creating, focus on imitation 2. Imitate with purpose, do not imitate for the sake of imitation. To imitate those highlights. For example, the original work's delicate description of the protagonist's inner feelings. 3 Try not to write about female protagonists when you have little experience. Complaints: 1. Since the first part sounds so similar, you should know what kind of people your audience is. People who can read the first part will have no choice but to read the second part. 2 I really don't understand the purpose of the protagonist making a salamander bomb before exploring the secret realm. In my opinion, it is a pure imitation of the original work, and there is no use of bombs when exploring the secret realm. 3 As soon as I started writing, I wrote about a female protagonist, and there was more than one. In my opinion, many excellent authors do not write female protagonists, and it is difficult to write good female protagonists. Because if you want to write a heroine, you have to make sure that she doesn't overwhelm the protagonist, but also has a distinct personality and a plot of her own. And you also write multiple female protagonists, so you challenge the difficulty of hell at first, right? The result is, in my opinion, full of stereotypes about women (not punching). The author knows too little about women, and their main characters are all about devotion. 4 It is enough to write porn a few times. If you write it several times in a row, if I want to read it, I can open other web pages. There is no need to read it here. If you rewrite it so many times, I will only feel that the number of words and the portrayal of the protagonist are low. I know what aspect of the protagonist is very strong, but you don't need to emphasize it so many times. This makes me feel like reading fantasy stallion novels. Don't you know that stallions are often debuffs in fantasy (although I see that the protagonist has not yet planted one) Finally: I think he was the first to create, so it's not surprising that these problems occur. Although this book has many poisonous points, it also has some bright spots. I can bite the bullet and read on. As a new author, the most important thing is to discover your own shortcomings, learn from some more classic novels, and don't indulge in self-pleasure.

After reading more than two hundred chapters, there are no poisonous points, but the pattern is a bit small. I don't know if the framework will be added in the future. Conquering the plane actually requires an entire wizard plane. The biggest framework pattern I have seen so far is the previous wizard's journey. The four-ring wizard can open the plane alone to plunder plane resources and blast the gods of the plane. However, in this book, without this pattern, not even a plane gap can be repaired, and the wizard's life will be used to fill it, unless the hole is filled later. And the current protagonist's spells and other methods don't feel like a wizard to me, but like a mage. In fact, the author could learn more from the setting of the wizard's journey. This novel's description of the wizard is really good. If this novel had a bigger plot, it would be considered a masterpiece, but it's a pity

I haven't read a harem novel in a long, long time. It's not easy to write a harem novel now that the news is so tight.

Ah, the sixth ring you have is one more ring than the fifth ring

I don't know if it's the author's deliberate overpowering or what, but I think the protagonist's use of the chip is really poor. Except for temporary use when he thinks of something that needs to be used immediately, it feels like the chip is empty at other times.

Do you have any recommendations for good chip-flowing wizarding novels? I don't like the kind of writing with a lot of female supporting characters and not many male supporting characters. When I see a beautiful woman, I get lustful.

The author arranges dark energy mastery for the protagonist. The last sentence says that light energy restrains dark energy. I don't understand. Light energy restrains dark energy. What does dark energy restrain? What energy restrains the attribute of light? Not explained clearly at all! At present, I don't know whether this pit is a poisonous point or not, or whether it will be explained clearly in later chapters. For me, it will greatly affect my reading experience before it is explained clearly.

I have a question. Stone giant hearts are not specially bred and are a necessary material for upgrading low-level second-level apprentices. Will they not become extinct? It's not compliant

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Why is it not difficult to advance to the first level after the age of 18? Is it too difficult? A 25-year-old third-level wizard apprentice ended up having no way to advance at all 😅

There is no big problem, except that there are three levels of apprentices. Generally speaking, the third level is the lowest and the first level is the highest. Secondly, money cannot be calculated clearly. 1 Magic stone costs 100 gold coins, but no one exchanges magic stones for gold coins. This plot is really old. Magic stones are not antiques, but currency. They have a large amount of circulation. If no one exchanges them, the market will spontaneously adjust to 150 or 200 per magic stone. When I bought a spell model, it cost 2 magic stones or 300 gold coins. At this time, it was 150 gold coins for 1 magic stone. Forget it. When I went to the Potions teacher to buy 3 black shield magic stones, he gave me 200 gold coins for 1 magic stone and said I owed 1 magic stone. I really cried to death. The gold coins to magic stones were 150:1. When I paid back, I lowered the price to 100:1. Really, you lost 50 gold coins to the left hand and the right hand. Also, do you need to take medicine to upgrade from first class to second class? Isn't it normal that you only need to take medicine after three liters? A total of two materials plus a handling fee cost 110 magic stones. This amount of money is not too much to spend on a third-level liter. Also, one material cost 40 magic stones. No matter how expensive the medicine was, he would still drink it as a first-class apprentice. How expensive are the materials? The Sleeping Mushroom in the potion that a first-class apprentice drinks is only 10 gold coins each. I just feel that a medicine worth 110 magic stones is not worthy of a first-class apprentice. Besides, there is no requirement to relax below the second-class level except for picking mushrooms. Where does the money for first-class apprentices come from? If you don't allocate a mentor, you will die in poverty, right? The price of the instructor has also been reduced, he is an official wizard, there are 12 people in the classroom, 20 to 30 gold coins for a class, a three-hour class, 200 to 300 gold coins, two magic stones for one, and a 30 magic stone handling fee for a bottle of potion. No, who is making the money in this world? Didn't they spend money?

There are only three levels of wizards in more than 610 chapters, and then there are seven level wizards in more than 680 chapters. The first level is suppressed, and the following chapters are crazy upgrades. It is too inconsistent.

It's so brainless, and if the wizard novel could stop killing people all the time, wouldn't it be written in a different way? Nowadays, authors seem to be unable to write wizard novels without killing people.

There's nothing wrong with it, but the other people who wrote it didn't have much brains, and the way they wrote it was a bit childish. I think it's at the level of hay, not even enough for food.

When I first entered the Land of Dawn, I felt like a holy mother. The sap of life is a rare treasure. After the protagonist cheated 10 drops, he actually gave one drop to every woman he slept with. Then the three people who entered the land of dawn together, the other two were obviously dependent on the protagonist to survive. As a result, the protagonist not only provided food and shelter, but also took the responsibility of taking care of them. He was actually prepared to give each of them a drop of the sap of life. Who is the protagonist? Their parents?

You raise horses for the nobles and you don't dare to steal the feed. Why did you call yourself Fang Han before you traveled through time?

If you like mindless reading, you can read it. I felt embarrassed listening to the book.

When I first saw the listing, I wonder if the protagonist and the people around him will not be able to advance without taking medicine?

It shouldn't be called Deep Blue, it should be called Zhinao. Dark blue adds points, and the brain assists.

The master-servant contract is too buggy. A strong man will definitely ask all his subordinates to sign this contract. If there are as many people in the chain as possible, everyone in the world will sign it from birth. It will save a lot of worry. From now on, the world will be peaceful. If a person at the top of the pyramid dies, everyone in the world will die. I hope to arrange for the protagonist to sign this contract as a servant.

I feel like it's a bit broken after I reach level 3. I still like the slow pace at the beginning, but then it's level 3, 4, 5, 6 or 7 in an instant. Are you almost finished? 🤤🤤

There are more and more women, and the content I see recently is usually written for women to have sex with.

After the protagonist reaches level 5, he feels a bit broken. He levels up too quickly. Moreover, the subsequent levels six and seven are too fast. I feel like it's no longer interesting after level seven.

I don't know when, "IQ Online" became a dispensable label and the choice of a few authors I don't know when, looking at the choices of most authors, you came up with the idea of ​​writing yourself At every moment when inspiration strikes, you write down the creativity, looking forward to using this creativity to add to your own work Every time At a moment when you are not understood, you open your book and look at the protagonists and supporting characters, as if you have become them, and they have become your close friends And one day, you suddenly find this comment in the vast sea of books, and suddenly encounter this book, you may get a friend, get an understanding, and get some ideas...

The world view is quite big, keep writing.

Deep blue, isn't it deepseek?

Finished reading.

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It always feels like the world view of Harry Potter

It has been added to the collection. It has great ideas and the author's writing is very good. This book title makes people want to click on it. I visited with my work "The Witcher Begins in America". Thank you!