I Played the Whole World by Myself

It's been abandoned, but the thunder is loud and the rain is small. This girlfriend is both the protagonist's link to society and a constraint. There is no highlight in writing like this. It's a one-man show. It's really boring, but the rhythm is still very good and not too watery (although it is still watery).

It's a bit rubbish. I just killed those two people in the first few chapters.

It's much better than most of the same genre. I'm really poor, but I can't even read the pirated version. This is the first novel I spent money on at Qidian.

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After reading so many people's pretentious articles about the saintly style, you are the only one who is really embarrassed to read it. You can't relate to it at all. Every time you watch it, there will be one scene after another, and there is this inexplicable emotional scene with the heroine.

I've read a lot of articles like this, and this is the shittiest one to me. The hero saves the beauty at the beginning, and then the heroine agrees to marry her in order to fulfill her grandfather's wish. The heroine's grandfather is terminally ill, and the female anchor goes to the hospital to explore. A group of barrage viewers watch the hero save the heroine's grandfather like monkeys.

The subject matter is good, but the writing feels a bit too fake. The tone, description, actions and words of the characters feel that they want to expose extraordinary power. How can a person with extraordinary power keep talking about extraordinary power? In addition, it is not reasonable for a vampire to go to the hospital to suck the blood of an old man in the early stage. Moreover, he wears a vampire costume, and the sword fairy also wears a vampire costume. Marvel knows that magicians have WiFi. When cultivating immortals in China, they wear ancient costumes. Isn't this because they are afraid that others will not know that they are cultivating immortals?

The subject matter is quite good, but the author doesn't remember the protagonist's data, and the character's attributes fluctuate up and down, which is quite embarrassing for viewers! !

Subscribe until the sun never sets in the country, and the demon is born. I am a little disappointed. You are a demon. Since you don't cause destruction and no one has died, this is not normal. Holy Mother,

I can already imagine that the wizard's incantation is in Chinese, followed by an Eastern fantasy world, and the source of Western transcendence is in zg. Basically all the eunuchs I read are written like this. It's too dramatic. It's like writing about a single family, so why don't you learn about Western extraordinary things? Just brush it off.

The combat power system collapsed so badly even before the 100th chapter was reached. I am speechless. How can these people continue to read this? I admire them 😅

I feel that the author has really thought of things too simply. The protagonist is an outer disciple, and the things he does and the words he says are inconsistent with his identity. The people sent by the government and the think tank that handles the matter can treat the protagonist like a pig.

It's well written, but the wizard's spell is in Chinese and it's too poisonous.

The writing is so naughty that I didn't even read the first 20 chapters. It really doesn't take modern criminal investigation and surveillance technology seriously.

The whole world doesn't know whether it's acted or not. Anyway, I just want to give you a mouthful of phlegm. Is there anyone still dreaming about lottery tickets these days?

The only thing worth mentioning is that the subject matter is good, but the writing style needs to be strengthened, especially the scenes of manifestation, battle scenes and the construction of the entire combat power system. It feels that the description is very low. A monk in the golden elixir stage has so many abilities at the same time, but it feels very weak. Will he always be able to use flying swords? It didn't highlight the power of the Jindan stage at all, and it didn't have the strength of the wizard ancestor, so it died so easily. Those battle scenes are really low, they all happen as soon as the flying sword comes out, and then it's over, the monster is dead, there is no passion at all, like a running account! Overall, there are still problems with the writing style, and there are also problems with the design of the combat power system. I hope the author can improve it in the future!

Don't write about female protagonists, don't be emotional in this kind of writing

Another official and overwhelming article about the mastermind behind the scenes!

The following points: First, the protagonist thinks of the power of the country too simply. When you use the third flashback, that is, when the immortal cultivators fight against the vampires, and then return to the normal timeline, the country can basically be determined to be you. Starting from the investigation after rescuing the old man, you can find out the rich girlfriend the protagonist knows, and you can find out that the protagonist saved her one day ago. Then check the protagonist and you will find that the protagonist bought a vampire costume and a sword within one or two days. This is all clear evidence. Secondly, the author did not explain clearly that if the clothes bought 3 days later were worn 3 days ago, is that set of clothes in the store still there or not? Third, when writing this kind of book, you should either give yourself the power to be invincible in the world and not afraid of anything at the beginning, or complete the rapid expansion of your own power in the first one to three times. It is not the kind of expansion of a tens-billion group or a hundred-billion group, but you have at least one or many zz people to delay time for you and strive for development time. There is no possibility of peace between the transcendent and the state.

There are a lot of flaws in the book. It feels like the main character is just playing house to entertain himself. The dialogue is childish and there are no big scenes. What is written in the introduction is completely different from what the content shows. The main character is not like the mastermind behind the scenes who is just a child who only talks about love and plays house.

Currently 108 chapters. I'm not going to read it anymore. There are too many flaws in this book. First of all, the wizard leader was killed by the immortal cultivator when he appeared. Although he was from a different school after the spiritual energy was revived, it was too childish to play house, and the professions were not balanced. I didn't want to read the next part about Bai Suzhen. The writing is not to my liking

Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh, why is the writing so clumsy, why is the writing so stupid, why do you want me to see it, do you know what traceology is? Do you know what criminal investigation is?

Disgusting. The 100-meter-long snake only weighs ten tons. A silver ingot is worth a hundred taels. The author has no concept of quantity in his mind. It made me upset. I endured it again and again. I couldn't bear it anymore. I spit and never see him again.

I should be the only one kneeling and licking the World Government, with all kinds of lowly and cowardly ways to please me. I am speechless.

The author has entered the palace? 🙂

I really like it. I left it alone because I was too slow, but I actually cut it. Such an interesting setting. Although the first few dozen chapters are a little bit toxic, the later chapters are very good, as if they were written by a different person.

You write, there's nothing wrong with writing like this. I finally found a behind-the-scenes story that I like. I suggest you write more fairy tales.

It gets better and better in the future, why do we need eunuchs! All booked!

When will your new book be released?

A eunuch? It's a waste of the full order😒