Luoyin War Records

The setting is online and the IQ is online. It is a good potential stock.

After reading about 10 chapters, I have some suggestions: For newbie writers like us, the most important thing is the logic of writing, how to express one thing, a scene, a dialogue, and a plot clearly. We are not masters, and book friends don't have the patience to listen to our long explanations about setting. The most important point is to highlight the protagonist, let book friends focus on the protagonist and create a sense of substitution, explain things clearly, coherently, and the logic is smooth so that readers can read smoothly.

A little self-made set of pictures

When I wrote 202,900 words, I received 2,029 recommendation votes. Thank you for your support.

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It's a star map~~~

The term "Qixingzhong", at first glance, seems to bring it into "Attack on Titan".

You can go learn it when you have time, of course, provided you have time

Author of Across the Solar System: You write very well, keep up the good work

I suggest you change the introduction. It might be better this way, and the golden three chapters are more important. The first chapter points out the protagonist's strengths or opportunities.

Family, although it is finished, I have an outline of the plot of the second and third parts. I will open a new book in the future. I will adapt it and continue writing Han Xiaobei's science fiction youth love story. See you again when we are destined 😆🌹

Update quickly, the donkeys in the production team don't dare to rest like this.

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Well written! The author adds rich imagination to the details and completes the unity of space and time. It is a masterpiece of ingenuity! 👍

Happy New Year's Eve! May all go well with you!

Come on The writing is not without brains and planning, a rare masterpiece

Not bad, good, come on, Oli is here!