I Have a Breeding House in the Ancient Pet World

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Cut again. If I say a few words about BB, it's like going to the grave. The creativity is okay, but the sense of substitution is not strong. In other words, you write an original beast-controlling world, but the connections between the characters at the beginning are not deep, and there are relatively few descriptions of the environment. I can't imagine what the customs and customs are like. No details. If it were directly about the Pokemon world, I would have a picture in my mind, but I don't have this one. The second thing is the details. Looking at the plot development, you can feel that the author has a good outline and knows what to develop next. But for the reader (me), there is no desire to continue reading. "I'm not curious about the next development." It's too straightforward. I'm not saying there are no twists/surprises. But Goldfinger is a delicacy, bread. Then there is no more. I'm not curious about how the bread is made, I just know it's goldfinger... And I don't think there's anything interesting/noble about it compared to potions. No feeling. The protagonist's pet beast is also ordinary, loyal and easily moved. No more. Not an interesting character. Let me be offensive, the pigeon in Yuantong's new book that keeps garbled characters is more interesting than the pet you wrote about. But what's even more unbearable is that his pigeons are just embellishments, and your pet is the focus of the whole article... Even the parrot who knows current affairs/is afraid of death in his article is even more hilarious. Teacher Lu's writing is interesting and his character as a pet is very interesting. Even though we are writing about farming, we still have to have an interesting character. It's so cliche that I have no desire to continue reading...

I have four questions, and I hope the author can answer them 1. The source of the tree fruit (spiritual fruit): At first glance, I thought that the source of the tree fruit could be concealed by others. It was found by Eevee, picked in the wild, given by others... But system purchase is definitely not a long-term solution. A person can never leave the house without leaving the door, but he can continuously produce resources of rare tree fruits as raw materials, so everyone wants to know this secret. 2. Recipe: The protagonist is currently making bread, which cannot meet the needs of the trainer, and is coveted by the Chamber of Commerce, so it is essential to join a force. Then the formula can be used to ask questions, the knights, the young master of the city lord's family, these are all people you can rely on. The formula may be valuable, but this is not something that the early protagonist can grasp (a child holding gold in a busy city). The author sets the era as the Dark Age of Warcraft, so torture, interrogation, and hypnosis are entirely possible. It's perfect to use formula to give yourself a protective umbrella. 3. Force: can be watched together with 2 The protagonist is now a granary type. My neighbor collects grain and I collect guns. My neighbor is my granary. Then the formula is a good stepping stone. This kind of elf bread is coveted by the Chamber of Commerce. Does the Knights want it? Does the city lord's palace want it? The answer is that they want it all. If possible, there must be no shortage of enchanted beasts. The protagonist can completely seek refuge in the city lord's palace, rely on its power to open a chain of bakeries in the city, and buy horse bones with thousands of gold. Presumably the city lord's palace will not be stingy about handing out dividends. The protagonist relies on the resources earned from bread to cultivate Ibrahimovic. After reaching a certain strength, he will definitely enter the high-level. Then will the previous situation of receiving dividends become a patent fee, and will bread become a unique resource of the city? If you continue to become stronger, you either have to break up with each other (not recommended, it is inconsistent with the protagonist's current temperament), or you can each take a step back to help the protagonist build a city and reach a cooperative relationship. , Then will the former baker automatically become the protagonist's team? Elf bread is a cultivation resource. Can we build a breeder association based on this? If it continues to be stronger, it will treat the medical department, combat department, research department, etc., To win over, divide, suppress, isolate, and co-operate. Transformation, will the integrated trainers association (pet alliance) appear? Can hospitals, pet houses, breeding houses, training halls, exclusive pet beasts (happy eggs) for aristocratic families, and regional spokespersons (kings) be established (after all, it is too big, so it can only be an alliance). The protagonist goes one step further and makes elf bread, turning himself into an elf coexisting with the world, becoming a bridge for communication with human pets, and living freely in the world. (Don't blame me if you read too many articles about cultivating immortals) 4. Price: The current price of bread for the protagonist is much lower than that of potion. From the beginning, one person cannot threaten the market, so who knows in the future? So are the court mage groups offended? If the price is slightly lower than the potion and the protagonist makes more money, people are likely to think that it is slightly more affordable than the potion, but the pet beast likes to eat it and it has some special effects, so he is willing to buy it. Then the combination of potion and bread came into being, and the protagonist won over a force and gained favor. (Predecessor of the Breeders Association) In addition, who wouldn't be happy if the resources become delicious and easy to use. Now that it is a little more expensive, some people are crying, is it that the protagonist underestimates himself? Even if the protagonist announces the recipe, can others do better than the protagonist's cheating? Even if it is achieved, will the world's market be divided up by these few people? High-end products make more money, and it is normal to give others a proper sweetness. Isn't the low-level elf bread made public? Doesn't this belong to the downstream market? Can the protagonist integrate everything from raw materials, production, and sales? Can the protagonist know it? Can one person do this? Did he receive such a huge benefit? If he has no power, he deserves to die. If you have no ability, you deserve to die. I very much hope that the author can solve these problems as soon as possible. And these are my thoughts, you can refer to them, hehehehe. ʚ♡⃛ɞ(ू•ᴗ•ू❁)

To be honest, I am very interested in this subject, but I am a eunuch

Why are you advertising orphans here? Ah? The update quality is poor and the plot is crappy.

To me, there are too many words describing the emotions of pet animals in the article, and I feel that the protagonist's thoughts may be too advanced for people at the time.

[Keywords] Pets, farming flow, system [Storyline] After waking up, Chen Li traveled to Yali in the world of pet beasts, and still owed money. He wanted to become a pet trainer with the help of the system, but why should he be a businessman serving pets? Let's see how Alex made his first pot of gold with elf bread. When I first read this book, I had the same feeling as when I read Chong Mei. I really like this kind of farming novel in which the relationship between the pet beasts gradually becomes stronger.

😓G again. .

This book has been cut again

A very important point is that the most important thing about beast control is not the people but the beasts. Otherwise, it would be better to change it to an online game novel.

Alas, too little, not enough to eat.

It's been a year since I've been a pigeon, have you changed your name and started writing a book?

😒😒Writing about elves, if the subject becomes writing about people, it will definitely not go far.

If you are writing something original, don't include pictures of Pokémon, it will feel very inconsistent.

With the protagonist and Xiaobu, there are three customers. Bread is not enough, so the protagonist still thinks about whether he can recruit the civilian, inspect it, start with it, and do some steps that do not require the protagonist to do it himself. Then upgrade your own class and improve your strength. By the way, the bakery became bigger.

I came from the trainer simulator. Come on, the author.