I Break the Restrictions and Practice in the World of Immortals

This protagonist is a typical college student who looks down on low-educated people. How much superiority can a time traveler give you?

The control of the plot rhythm is a bit messy and unreasonable. There is no logic. First. The protagonist travels through time. Already received a memory. Find a hotel to stay. When I discovered the existence of martial arts, I was immediately shocked! This is the first irrational and illogical place. Second. About the existence of cultivators. The protagonist attends an auction and discovers that there are actually cultivators of immortality. Then I was shocked again! . . About the existence of cultivators. There are only two possibilities in a dynasty. Either it becomes a big secret, a secret that only the top echelons of a dynasty know. Because this is in line with human nature. Either that or the legend of immortal cultivators is spread even among the people. After all, the more upper-level people know the secret. The harder it is to control it from spreading. Therefore, the author's plot arrangement is very unreasonable. Either the protagonist receives the memory and knows that there may be immortals in this world. It's very embarrassing to act like a fairy who has never seen the world! Or if it is a top secret of the dynasty. It can't be high-end information that the protagonist can get access to just by participating in a small auction. . . . One more thing. This is how the author arranges the plot. It's too late. Just crossed over. I have just used the golden finger to improve my knowledge, but it has not been used yet, and the plot of martial arts training has been arranged! I have just started practicing martial arts, and I have just used the golden finger to improve my martial arts a little bit! The effect has not been fully realized yet. This news about cultivating immortals has appeared again! . . That's the feeling it gives me as a reader. The main character farts the entire time. Everything you do is in vain. . . So for these plots arranged by the author. I can only comment. One pound of goods contains nine ounces of water. . .

The writing is immature and the logic is touching, please keep up the good work.

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The protagonist takes the imperial examination at the beginning, learns martial arts in the middle, quickly becomes a first-class, obtains a magic weapon, and is in danger of life and death several times. This is just the beginning of the story, and he doesn't even have time to practice martial arts, and he just becomes a first-class by force. This rhythm, tsk tsk tsk. Awesome.

Recharging with money is quite low-end, let alone the fireworks of the world. Will you still make money when the protagonist reaches a certain age? According to the fireworks, the statues in the temple can also be recharged.

Every time I hear nails digging into flesh, I feel goosebumps coming out.

Pretentious writing, the writing is immature, come on!

. . It's so easy to get this limit-breaking point. After you rebel and become emperor, you can print as many copies as you want.

It feels a bit inconsistent for a scholar to use a knife. . .

The subject matter is good, the writing could be more polished, come on, don't go to the palace

No wonder my grades are so bad! Written like this, it is completely unbearable! Deserve it!

Let me give you a small suggestion. If there are too many routines, it will become a textbook. You can counter the routines appropriately.