I Have Lived Forever Throughout History

The description isn't impressive enough. I suggest changing it to: He taught Confucius, tricked people with Bai Qi, drank with Zhuge Liang, and made Li Bai suckle beef. Wouldn't that sound much better? 👿

Just to clarify, the early parts of this book only slightly altered the lives of a few people. It wasn't until the Wang Mang era that history truly took flight. It's completely different in style from "Poor Ghost," and it doesn't have the same feel as Sister Nan. References: Korean history books

If you're not going to change history, then what's the point of traveling back in time? To learn from Yi Xiaochuan?

So the main theme of this book is that a scourge can last for a thousand years.

Sima Qian's writing in the beginning was good, but it changed when he took in the boy with the same name, "Su Chen." When the painter saw Wang Zhaojun's beauty, he couldn't resist and kidnapped her to enjoy himself. He also constantly cultivated historical figures to serve in the court, leaving a legacy of evil for a thousand years.

The author claims women can achieve immortality but men can't—what else could he be but a simp?

This kind of plot is so overused. A character who's both scholarly and martial, and has lived for countless years—after reading a few chapters, it starts by showing off his abilities to impress his superiors, but then he goes overboard, turning into a ruthless, combative warrior. The youthful passion and the fact that he's lived for so long feel a bit out of place. That's my opinion.

The beginning is too abrupt, jumping straight into the main topic without any sense of immersion. It's like a sudden break in the story, or abruptly jumping to the next scene – it really pulls you out of the story. Another issue is the poor character development; characters like Zhao Gao, Liu Bang, Xiang Yu, and Fan Zeng are written too rigidly.

It feels a bit lacking... Maybe you could write it from the perspective of immortality and godhood. Then, like a poor person, you could experience life, delve into history, and become both a passerby and a participant. So far, it seems like they're all playing dumb to fool others, their intentions are unclear, and their interactions are all based on a template.

Everything has to be compared. That poor guy's "Two Thousand Years of History" on Qidian, though it ended badly, still set a standard for this type of genre.