I'm Really a Drunken Swordsman, the Kind Who Can Fly with a Sword

I just read Chapter 20 and I really can't help it. I'm going to complain first. What should I say? This subject matter is already very familiar to old bookworms. Of course, this is just a small problem that can be ignored, but I only read 20 chapters before I saw a fatal problem At first I read five and ten chapters and thought he didn't write it well before. It will probably be improved in the future. After all 20 chapters, this program was released. Machine Your appearance and excessive plot make the page really too long, especially for authors who don't update more than four or five chapters. This operation is very fatal. If you update quickly, four or five chapters a day, you can barely live up to it Because there are so many words in one chapter, the content of your four or five chapters can be finished by others in two or three chapters. , The watering-in operation was too obvious, especially in Chapter 20. When I moved over, almost half of the page was filled with exclamation marks and question marks, not to mention that there are more books on the same subject. Your operation is very bad for the popularity of passers-by. It is a forced increase of word count. Passers-by will basically not read this kind of thing, but there will always be rich people who will take a look But if you only follow two or three pictures a day, and you still want to engage in this kind of craziness, neither passers-by nor rich people will look at you. Rich people have no intention of following your low output and poor quality, and passers-by will basically not read it either By the way, one last comment, are you serious about quality assurance and new books by old authors? I can still believe the latter sentence. Are you kidding the first sentence? As long as it takes me a long time to write a book, I won't do this malicious thing of filling the book with others.

I'm just curious, what is a forbidden area? Why are you asking? Do you want to invite celebrities to participate in the forbidden area and give meows to the creatures inside? Or play basketball for the creatures inside?

The sword rides on the wind to ward off demons. There is wine and joy in the world. Without wine, I will be drunk. I drink all the rivers in one drink. I drink the sun and the moon again. I can't get drunk from a thousand cups. I am the wine swordsman. It is clearly expressed in the poem. I can't get drunk. There is no one who writes about drinking and getting drunk in this novel.

What can I say about this book? All the water in the West Lake has gone into this book. If the West Lake dries up one day, it must be this book that has sucked up all the water in the West Lake.

This? Does Jiu Jianxian only drink and pretend to be drunk?

It's really a Renaissance. This introduction is like a novel from 10 years ago.

Just read the beginning and end of one chapter, the middle is all nonsense!

Hasn't the Renaissance begun? Forbidden area performance, everything that has been written has been cut off

One chapter is 4,000 words, half of which is nonsense

150,000 Words, of which at least 60,000 to 70,000 are useless.

Why is there all water in your wine?

It's 140,000 words. I've obviously read it, but I don't seem to have read anything.

It's so cool. It's like I haven't read the first 20 chapters.

Too much nonsense and the plot advances too slowly! The story is okay! The writing is average!

The speed is too slow, it's a lot of verbosity, it's almost 90,000 words and I haven't gotten to the point yet.

In what era does this kind of operation exist?

Zhao Maimai

What is this writing about? Why don't you just write about a drunken maniac who goes around molesting girls?

You can understand what this book is about by reading this introduction. There is no need to click in and suffer.

Is this the Jiu Jian Xian? This is a fucking sloppy Taoist!