Man-Made Paradise

A friend showed the scene where the wolf beast appears to chatGPT. Unexpectedly... The first paragraph of serious comments (and affirmations) about the book turned out to be from AI... Unbelievable but touching.

At first I thought it was just a simple middle school literature, but after reading it I realized that it was unexpectedly a very serious book. The description of the scene is very symbolic, and the wording of details, such as the names of moves and chapter titles, have gradually improved with the development of the plot. It has also become more... Pleasant from the beginning. (Please forgive me for my lack of words) In terms of plot, the beginning part is a little unremarkable, but the progression and development of the plot are quite logical and smooth. There are also some foreshadowings and suspense. The battle scenes are also well depicted, with all the necessary details. It can be read with a little patience. When we arrived, probably at Baimeng's place, we started to elicit some suspense from the past, and later started to reminisce about the wars of the gods in the past: the war and peace between the two major forces of heaven and demons, and the relationship between several heavenly enemies and friends, all of which were pretty good. From two small worlds, one is Taoism and the other is Soviet Russia (I think it should be Baal?), It can be seen that the author's imagination has not fallen into the cliché... As for the square brackets, I haven't seen any effect yet. In addition, according to the author's comments, there should be a lot of foreshadowing in the first two volumes. I am still curious about Flat Earth, the family background of the protagonists, and the fact that the last two protagonists have left and new characters have to appear. It seems that Flat Earth will probably have an important role. It's just that the current situation is that the world view and the protagonist are getting further and further, and the past history is digging deeper and deeper (in some places, I even feel that I have reached Cthulhu). I don't know how the author will connect humans and gods in the future, and then adjust the vision back (no derogatory meaning, just curious). Overall... It's a very thoughtful book. Both the attitude and the writing style are not easy for a newcomer. If you have the patience, you can read it carefully. I feel that the author is preparing to do big things, and this book is also very ambitious. I wish you success.

The pace of the first volume and the first half of the second volume is slightly slower, mainly to expand the world view. The nouns or hints that appear in the human world will be recycled in some way after the main contradiction is fully explained in the third volume. (In addition, the views and words of the characters in the article are only used to improve the character design. Those who have different opinions can express them, but please do not be too radical.)

About being blocked on 3-30: Some of it was expected (on the whole it contained some sensitive content), some of it was unexpected, and... Unwilling (it was not my turn to sign the contract yet, so I carefully considered and tried my best to describe it in an abstract way but was immediately caught). As for the alleged XX, I have tried to avoid sensitive descriptions. In fact, there is no contact with XX. The focus is still on the pathology and contradiction of the character's thoughts. I don't know why... It's just that in my opinion, the description in this chapter is necessary. From a historical figure to a legendary god, after experiencing this process, the huge difference will naturally make them more likely to fall into a state of madness than the so-called "natural gods". Once you understand this point directly, skipping this chapter will not have much impact.

Supplementary map of the Southeast War Zone (I've been so busy lately that I forgot to log in

Emmmmm, I just found out that two chapters have been blocked again because they involve zheng... It's a completely fictional country... I really don't understand what the review mechanism is... (The previous two chapters have almost been deleted and haven't passed yet.

Updated continuously for 30 days, worthy of praise

There is not much to say, but this persistence alone has little starting point.

Added it to the bookshelf. I'll share my feelings when I have time to catch up on the updates.

Hhhhh I just watched it yesterday, why was it blocked again today?

Can anyone explain the plot to me? I think it's a little confusing (Ｔ▽Ｔ)