I Can Come to the Game World

Now that you can enter the game... Why don't you come and try butter🐶 (The heroine doesn't have to worry about it.)

Online picture, I hope the author can post the picture of the avatar~

Admission ticket for the college entrance examination in 1952

The author has changed... I hope the author will not be ignorant and make mistakes again and again. These readers are not scolding you. Everyone reads novels for entertainment, not for scolding. And they meet by chance, why are they scolding you without any reason? Everyone is angry at you for not arguing, but they wish you well and don't want you to die... The screenshots are here for public display! (You won't delete and ban the package, will you?) (I hope you will improve it and keep it at the top!!!)

It was okay in the beginning. When writing the Three Kingdoms, it was like a running account, with various side descriptions, psychological activities, and forced explanations. The creativity was very good, but if I continue to write like this, I will definitely have the qualifications of a eunuch.

It's purely for fun, and it's written like a personal biography, not like a novel. The author is so cool, he appears as the narrator too many times, and it's hard to feel comfortable writing.

It's a good idea, but you can't control it. There's a lot of room for improvement.

It's not a curse on the author. This is based on my twenty years of reading experience. This book should be a hit. . . . This introduction. Many people can't understand it. It doesn't matter how well you write. Not all readers are heavy 2D readers

The creativity is good, but the writing level is below the standard. I can say that I just wanted to see what else the author could come up with. I wish the author will make great progress and achieve explosive results.

NieR Automata ➕ Warriors Orochi 3 ➕ Castlevania ➕ Saint plus Bayonetta ➕ King of Fighters = New version of Warriors Brawl (Warriors Orochi 4)

Now that you can enter the game, why not play Stellaris? ? 😏😏

To be honest, it only took three minutes to go from chapter 54 to the latest chapter. The Pokémon of the Three Kingdoms can only be seen in the front part, which is not bad. The rest is not important. It is better to end this Pokémon party as soon as possible. It is not easy to write about Pokémon alone, let alone the addition of the Three Kingdoms. As a reader, I still don't understand the focus of this episode of Pokémon of the Three Kingdoms, and it feels like there is no main plot. (The previous stories didn't even end, so they were full of regrets)

Now that you can enter the game, why not play Stellaris? ? 😏😏

Pokémon + Three Kingdoms + Dragon Balls = Training Saiyans to conquer cities and conquer lands?

This book should be a hit. The most important thing is, what are you writing about? This is the most taboo point for writers. If it weren't for the review, I wouldn't know when your account was banned⊙⊙. Also, this article has too many running accounts, as if it was written eight years ago, but with a new perspective added. There are changes, but not much. You have absorbed all the shortcomings of the article from eight years ago. This article should be used as a writing practice. After all, writing a book can only be understood but not expressed in words. What is written in words is not called writing a book, it is called a formula.

Well, if you block the memory related to the game, wouldn't you become a "traveler" without memory? The protagonist directly thinks that he has passed through the soul and put poison.

How can I put it, there is no sense of participation. When I read the Golden Finger novel, I was very concerned about the benefits the protagonist got, such as natural materials and treasures, various skills, resources, etc. When I read this book, it was very abstract. Wang Xiaoming got it, and then the protagonist operated it,,,, hiss, it was weird. Can't see it.

The subject matter is quite good, but the writing is too self-indulgent and the viewing experience is too bad. This is a novel, not a comment section. You want to make up stories for others to read, not just to complain about yourself.

Let me tell you my opinion: Reading a book seems to me like eating a piece of bread. This book is like eating a piece of bread that feels unpalatable at the first bite. But the bread maker keeps saying that this piece of bread is bitter at the front and sweet at the back. I believed it, and then I took one, two, and three bites. After more than fifty bites, it still tasted bad, so goodbye, my friend.

Looking at the introduction and playing the game, is it just a game? It's not just killing time. If there is no feedback, money, skills, and attribute points can't be fed back to reality anyway. It's just a stream of data. What's the point?

It's a side story. If I don't write the main text, I'm excited to write a side story. I'm asking: Who will read it?

A big bug is that the title of the book is "I Can Come...", But the protagonist never comes in the first forty chapters.

The idea at the beginning is quite good, but I guess the author's outline design is not good. It is best to benefit from the game and feed it back to reality. The plot should not be too long. It is best that each one is somewhat related, and in the end the reality becomes a god.

Innovation, a rare innovative plot, but...

A batch of water, from the beginning to the end, write a plot of Calabash Water to introduce everyone who wants water

Let's finish "Martial Arts Supreme" soon. The content in the introduction that everyone wants to see is at least the development and ending of the previous copy~ The martial arts and other things, especially the gold type, are poorly written. Although the angle is good, it's still not exciting enough... What an idea I want to see~

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