Zhutian: Civilization Cultivator

Got it, I'll create a world later and continue traveling through it and keep writing like this.

The plot is average, and one of the biggest drawbacks is that the time-travelers are too awesome and the natives of the native world are too useless.

Let me evaluate this book objectively. Strictly speaking, this book has many shortcomings, such as some problems in plot promotion, character dialogues are also a bit stiff, and there is also the issue of time travelers that many people complain about. I will express my own opinions and personal opinions here. If you don't like it, don't criticize it. If there are mistakes, they can be corrected and can be discussed. 1. First of all, there is the issue of time travellers. Many people say that the natives have no brains. In fact, objectively speaking, it is more than that. Your Martial Ancestor, the Three Masters of the Misty World, and the great mages of the Magic World are all natives. Of course, there are many time travelers, including two generations of dynasty founders and now the pioneers of the fourth realm. But strictly speaking, the number of the two is almost the same. As for why there are so many I personally think that there are several issues regarding time travellers: Firstly, the environmental issues that the protagonist is in. He is in a demon-free universe, and individuals will use all resources and human development as much as possible. When they do not have the strength to set foot in outer space, the people of the same race around them are the first and best choice. With the experience of spiritual practice, the people of the same race will have a better world, which can be said to be a win-win situation. The second is a matter of time. At the same time, a group of knowledgeable people will definitely develop better than a group of unsighted people. This is not to look down on the indigenous people, but it is true that people in the main universe have more imagination and better insights in the era of information explosion. How can you, a primitive person, know about the composition of the body, acupuncture points, and bones? Even if there are no time travellers, the protagonist will bring them to them. This is to better promote the development of system cultivation. The third is the author's problem. As a newcomer, you always have such high hopes for new books. You always think that everyone can write a masterpiece. The higher the expectation, the greater the disappointment. This is a misunderstanding in itself. At the same time, in my opinion, the author's idea is to create a place where all the worlds merge. With the World Tree and so many worlds, it is unreasonable not to create a fusion and explosion of some cultivation systems. To achieve this, so-called time travelers need to go to different worlds to acquire knowledge and systems. 2. Regarding the plot, there are also a lot of controversies in this aspect, but there are only two types, one is to be a saint in front of others, or one is to farm quietly. Everyone can't agree on this aspect, and the author is also thinking that the protagonist of Tianyuan World has never shown up, but only removed the system, and Piao Miao World, but he took the initiative to show up, gave God's cultivation method, and also had an incarnation in the magical world. This actually gave readers room to leak out. Wherever you are in trouble, the author will write about it. Of course, there is also the possibility that the two sides cannot agree with each other, and this is a huge controversy. 3. Regarding the issue of the author's writing skills, there are many problems. The author mentioned it in the book club. He also had his own ideas and wanted to write such a book before he started writing. In fact, he is not specialized in this aspect. At the same time, he still has work and cannot exercise his writing skills at any time, so the details The description is not up to the level of many great writers today. Platinum's writing skills (I believe everyone has been tricked) will inevitably have flaws in plot dialogue, environment description, and detail processing. However, I personally think it will not affect the advancement of the main plot. If you really want to nitpick, leave it alone. After all, you can't write it no matter how hard you criticize the author. 4. Regarding the issue of the world system, in my opinion, the cultivation system is definitely not perfect. When comparing many systems, too many systems appear complicated and messy. This also leads to the fact that many cultivation systems are bound to be impossible to write in detail, and may be mentioned in one sentence or even not mentioned. For many friends who specialize in the cultivation system, it will definitely be a little uncomfortable not to see the system they like. But again, the author's strength is here, and he can't do it even if he writes too well. Finally, I would like to give some advice to friends who want to read this book or want to know more about this book: 1. If you don't like time travellers, they are extremely annoying, so don't enter. To be honest, the author's time travelers are not very new. 2. If you want to see the cultivation system you like, it is best to reply to the author's post, or join a group to ask the author for it, otherwise you may not be able to write it, which will be a big disappointment. 3. For those who are picky about details, let's not overly pursue details when reading novels. Many great masters, even Platinum, may not be able to handle everything well. This is a new author, so give me a way to survive. 4. It's a little unclear whether the protagonist is farming quietly or showing his sage in front of others. It feels a bit unfair to both sides. Readers can reflect their own feelings, but don't teach the author to do things, just discuss it. 5. The author is new and has a new book. To be honest, there is a lot of room for improvement. Everyone should give more encouragement and support, and don't beat him to death with a stick. There are really not many books that dare to write this kind of subject. I feel that all other websites are just mindless and cool articles. The above is purely my personal opinion and personal evaluation. The book shortage is considerable. If compared with too many books at the same time, there will be more problems. You are welcome to express your own opinions and we can discuss it together.

I just don't understand, even if people on earth have traveled through time, why the techniques are all created by those who have traveled through time. Are people on earth so awesome? Why is it still a level 0.7 Civilization? Just a few parallel imports can surpass the entire world. Isn't it funny? In the first world, the part about the Martial Ancestor is at least somewhat interesting. Not to mention the martial artist system, it was developed by the indigenous people themselves and reflects the value of the world. What are the things written behind it? If we keep letting the people on Earth go over and cause trouble, why the hell are we opening up the world? Why not just do extraordinary things on earth? What is the significance of creation? The protagonist doesn't have cancer, Goldfinger is the World Tree, and there is no obliteration bug. The time ratio can be adjusted however you want, so why do you have to keep letting people from the earth travel through time? Promote the plot and accelerate the evolution. Is the protagonist eager to reincarnate? In the first world, I just wrote a Martial Ancestor, and then I started the second world, and in the third world, I was doing knitting, are you counting?

Recruit some supporting characters, which can be time-travelers or indigenous characters. Format: name, identity, background For example: Gu Teng, time traveler, the second founder of Blood Qi Martial Arts, student of the Department of History and Archeology of Chang'an University, etc.

What's the point of sending time-travelers again? I knew what would happen when I saw time-travelers. The plot at the end is interesting, allowing the local indigenous people to develop their own unique extraordinary systems. If you do this, I might as well read other fantasy novels, which are locked in the framework of raising all human beings.

The protagonist actually did not suffer from an unknown incident and was infected with the cancer of creation😄

I used to read a novel about a skill that was quite interesting and meaningful for advancement in the small world. Good for a lot of worlds. That is to create a technique. An inner heaven and earth can be created inside or outside the body, and then the inner heaven and earth are connected to the world. This is interesting to many practitioners. You can understand the rules better. Then the cultivator uses the inner world to breathe the chaotic spiritual energy outside, and the world can absorb that chaotic spiritual energy. As long as there are more practitioners who practice this method, the world can grow rapidly, the world can quickly expand its origins, the protagonists can have more origins, and the method can be easy. It is best if millions or tens of millions of people succeed among hundreds of millions of people. One thousand people have one source per year, which is one source for profit. It should be ten sources per year, and the remaining nine sources are used for the vitality of heaven and earth.

Why do you feel that the people in the small pig's trotter world have no ability to think and do everything with pig's trotters. Are they not pure trash?

[Keywords] Creation, civilization, heavens [Storyline] What is civilization? It is the collection of all the past and the present. The protagonist of the book "Heavens: Civilization Cultivator" plucked the seeds of civilization from the past of the civilization of the main world. Create the world, develop civilization, leverage the rules, and finally reap your own fruits from the heavens. As civilization changes, the protagonist also sits under the branches of the world and watches silently. Civilization is a cage, a cage that locks the evil of animal nature with goodness. When you are no longer ignorant, you are kind. (With empathy, I am kind, and you should also be kind. This is morality, this is the rule) Civilization is a flame, a flame that burns all external objects with knowledge, explores all things, and understands all things. (The firewood of the fire will always turn into ashes. Can new trees be planted on the ashes?) Civilization is just inheriting the past and waiting for the future. Sacrifice to the dead and prolong life.

To be honest, in creation novels, the world is created at the beginning. What is the rule? What chaos? It's so magical. In reality, the protagonist is a novice, just like an ordinary person. He already understands the nature of the universe and has access to high-dimensional space. The question is, is he still an ordinary person? Therefore, the logical structure is full of loopholes. Readers of the new book have read it without asking questions. After reading more, they will have all kinds of questions.

How to say it? Time travel is a failure. It was good at first, but it was made speechless by your time travel.

These natives are all fw, right? Everything needs to be done by people who have traveled through time? The indigenous people all have cerebellar atrophy and have no ability to think at all.

I personally felt that this book was written too far. The time line traveled was too early, so that I didn't feel the development of a civilization at all. I always feel that the development of civilization in the copy is the biggest highlight of this kind of book. It doesn't need to be written in too much detail, but it must be there. It has already developed to the point of martial arts. What's the difference of thousands of years? A whole time travel to speed up? So are you writing about cultivating civilization or about reviving spiritual energy? It's not like it can't be guided. Does it have to be developed by time travellers? Anyway, I don't know what other people think. I feel that it is too early for time travel to appear at this stage. The development of a civilization is too early to be interesting, and the readability is greatly reduced. After all, you can imagine what will happen with your feet.

The world is so poorly shaped. The rich history and splendid culture of civilization are described as calm by you. Can such a garbage world evolve?

Is it poisonous? The first picture says it is an ordinary world, but where did the Three Sovereigns and Five Emperors come from in the ordinary world? Forget it, stop talking, withdraw.

[Keywords] All Heavens are Infinite, Farming, Management Bureau [Story Line] The male protagonist bullies all heavens, is the trainer of all heavens and the master of all gods! The book "All Heavens: Civilization Cultivator" starts with Wen Dao's acquisition of the World Tree seeds: Wen Dao obtained the World Tree seeds at the age of 15, but the seeds never germinated. Fortunately, Wen Dao deduced the method of civilized germination. Since then, the seeds have turned into buds, and the rules of the world have been completely broken. Wen Dao has surpassed the rules of the heavens... In one word, absolutely!

The subject matter is good, but writing this kind of book requires the author to consult a lot of information, shape the worldview, and also requires writing skills. I can only say that the author should work hard!

After reading it, I always feel that there is something missing. Maybe it's epic. The online literature industry has been popular for decades, and many systems have become very mature. The author should be more relaxed and copy the system directly. In this way, as an old bookworm, it is also easy to understand the practice system. The recent Sword and Sorcery is pretty good. It is very different from the system in my impression. The system belongs to the predecessors, but the story belongs to you. What I read is the story. Come on, author.

Currently fully ordered, please share your thoughts (only my personal thoughts) This book feels quite tasteless, tasteless, and a pity to throw away. It can be seen that the author wanted to write something new, but he abandoned one of the most important aspects of the "Creation Flow" element. The protagonist's identity as a "Creation God" is constantly being discovered. Among the excellent creation-flow articles I have read so far, the above two points must account for a little bit. The raising of all mankind with a three-hundred-pound smile is the first with a little bit and the second. The one in history where the wind started to come out of the circle is more epic. The sense of epicness cannot be imitated. If you imitate hard, it will be easy to resemble a tiger rather than a dog. But the first one will probably be able to show off? In my opinion, this book is relatively boring, a bit like a group portrait, and there seems to be no impressive plot and characters. I am not saying that these are not teaching the author to write a book or anything, but simply communicating with the author from the perspective of a reader. Please believe the perspective of a reader who reads more than 25 hours a week. Perhaps the author can make some improvements without changing the outline or the like? Or adjustment? Judging from the current content, the above two points will definitely be present in the middle and late stages, but is there a possibility that the performance of this book does not support the author's writing to that extent? The above is a little thought from a reader, I wish the author a great success

The protagonist is about to create all the worlds in the world. There will be many worlds to follow. If you have any worlds you want to see or write about, you can post them. The world information can be as detailed as possible. For example, [Tian Yuan World], the cosmic planet world Mainstream intelligent race: human beings Civilization: Blood and martial arts civilization (expanded)

If the time traveler fails, just send the time traveler away if nothing happens, why can't there be a few Dao Ancestors from the local area?

The author is great, I've ordered them all, please give me a thumbs up 🤓

Is it worth it?

Does this book have a heroine?