Azeroth Begins as an Arms Dealer

Let me tell you! ! As someone who has read several of Lao Lu's books and is also a player of World of Warcraft, it has been 8.9 Years since I entered Azeroth. The author can take a look at how Lao Lu writes about World of Warcraft. I am not criticizing here, just a few suggestions. I usually don't write posts. The core of World of Warcraft is the balance of the six forces. In other words, no matter how bad you are, whether you are a Titan, a king, or the ultimate embodiment of the force of a certain order, you will not be able to turn things around and unify the six forces. Tao eliminates demons and rises is always the theme. The ending of Azeroth cannot be that Ai-chan dominates the world The appearance of the bronze dragon is enough to show that the result is imperfect, because Ai-chan becomes the embodiment of the ultimate order and will definitely prove to be similar to the great Luo god in our mythology. From the invasion of the shadows, to Mr. Sa's jumping ship, to the transformation of the jigsaw puzzle, Elune's backstab. It all shows that force will not work. No matter how powerful the Shadow is, I, Elune, jump directly from death to life naturally, and the Shadow is directly terminated by death. Life and death, shadow and light, arcane and evil. In World of Warcraft, all characters exist in ebb and flow with the six forces. After the two eredar giants fell into the embrace of evil, the influence of the Holy Light in Azeroth immediately increased crazily. After being scarred by the war between the insect empire and the trolls, Elune immediately jumped into the life camp. Never underestimate trolls, the people they win over are all demigods at the level of "Thunder God". Elune jumped back, and the troll threw death into the abyss. The shadow of the void has the king, the arcane and life have the titan, the evil has the shaman, the death also has the death monarch, and the holy light has the jigsaw puzzle. All the characters in World of Warcraft follow the rise and fall of the Force to confirm their positions. No one cares about "justice and evil". The course of heaven is constant, and it will neither survive for Yao nor perish for Jie. The orcs invaded for survival. As for the elves fighting the trolls, it is completely untenable. They occupy the holy land and home of the trolls and still look like I represent justice. The Indians have something to say here. Not to mention human beings, the flesh and blood degenerate body of the Iron Vrykul, the Terminator, Skynet said why I have never encountered such a thing. I bring the author's elf into the American perspective, which is called silky smoothness. The high elves are the United States, the night elves are the entire Europe, Azshara is the pinnacle Queen of England, the major court nobles are the members of the royal family, and the common people are the people of the old France. Don't say it anymore, I won't be able to say it anymore.

The high-end route is not at all down-to-earth, and there is no sense of immersion. It's hard to find a book like Warcraft. Even if you defeat monsters and upgrade a little bit, there will be a lot of readers to read it. Did you write Yunshan Mist Cover to filter readers? It's completely self-indulgent.

I don't understand what the author wants to express, and I feel that the writing process is okay. But I don't see what the protagonist wants to do, just expand the territory? I didn't feel prepared for Sargeras' coming, like I didn't know anything. Maybe I missed it

You must be sick. The protagonist is prepared to be shot down by someone from the front for hundreds of years. The loyal brother may not be directly written to death just to fit in with the 101 death song. With the protagonist being dragged down, the Well of Eternity will have to be blown up, right?

To be honest, the book is not bad. In the future, we can take the path of separatist territory and export arms to the world.

The title of the book is not Azeroth. I can't find it. Please change the name.

Generally speaking, it is good. As a blacksmith, the protagonist creates a hodgepodge of legendary items from many worlds. But the disadvantages: 1. The progress is too slow. The protagonist is a night elf, an immortal species! ! But the author has been writing in a short period of time: for example, making artifacts for Azshara, learning energy conversion and other knowledge + developing materials + manufacturing? Just one magical tool in just one year (including the cost of learning)? ? As a human, one year is about 60-70 years old, but as an immortal species, the protagonist can make an artifact in one year, not to mention wearing it so early. . How to write a timeline? Do you know how many years ago the War of the Ancients was from the main line of the game? ? Illidan: I have been imprisoned for ten thousand years! 10,000 Years does not mean thousands of artifacts, but a few hundred is not a trivial matter? ? Excessive quantity leads to depreciation! ! There is no way to change it, but I suggest you study the 20-30-year runes, then collect the 1-10-year materials, and finally after 5 years of crafting, you can create the artifact. . The protagonist's current production speed is too fast and the timeline is too slow, which is very worrying! 2. There are already too many. Chapter 160, there are 10+ legendary items from another world. . It's almost 1-2 chapters to make an item and 1-2 chapters to use the item. Chapter 1-2 is overdone, and then new ones are created. The items are made too cheaply and do not reflect the true value of the items. What a pity! It feels like a waste of resources. 3. I know that the later stage is more exciting, but I feel like it will be a eunuch. The later stage is exciting when someone introduces the protagonist: This is xxxx, the greatest forger in the world, and then he becomes xxxx. . Then be respected! Can the author really write until that day? 4. The name is not right, no one is interested in the arms dealer, more interested in the master of artifact forging What is an arms dealer? Wholesale arms, any item bound to "wholesale" seems very cheap. And what is the artifact? It is unique and powerful. Make artifacts and then give them to different people to play a huge role in their hands and promote the protagonist in disguise! Find out more about "Hokage: Teigu User"!

Azshara should be more arrogant, not so stingy 🙂

I can only say that it's okay, but it seems a bit pointless and difficult to spend money on him 🤫

It's a pity This novel collapsed after reading it. . . . .

Odin and Thorim died too hastily. These are guardians, the top beings in Azeroth, on the same level as the elemental lords and ancient gods. Those animal demigods like Cenarius can be resurrected after death. There is no reason to be higher than a demigod. Guardians at this level do not have the attribute of immortality; secondly, the guardians fought against the Dark Empire in ancient times and won. How can they die in a random battle if they are old enough to fight, let alone lose energy after fighting for a few hours?

Since it is the Kaldorei period and the background is the transformation of elves from trolls, why not study the radiation from the Well of Eternity to accelerate the evolution of trolls and expand the base of elves? Also, I think night elves should be considered half-elves. All civilians in the night are further away from the Well of Eternity, are less exposed to radiation, and have not yet completed their evolution, so their skin color is darker. The upper elves are nobles who are closer to the Well of Eternity and are exposed to strong radiation, so they have white skin and strong magic abilities.

The writing is not very satisfying, and there are still 10,000 years to go before the plot. During this time, if you don't add dnd factors, you can directly create a dnd version of the magic network, invent the core of Mythra to rise in the floating city, build a real magic empire, create your own spell slots, and invent various dnd spells to increase the number of spellcasters. After all, it is easier to get started as a mage than a blue bar mage, and you can also use the magic mage priesthood to become a god.

There are so many Warcraft articles, why is Azshara not so popular? Isn't this the official number one beauty?

After reading more than a hundred chapters, to be honest, I didn't understand it. Weapons, armor, and some other accessories are basically missing. I just got weapons, two armors, and a shield, but nothing else works. I don't understand what I'm trying to express. In fact, it's pretty well written, but let's go into a fight without fully arming yourself. I didn't see the shadow of any kind of weapons. I killed two Luo and gave the loot to the enemy for free. Then suddenly, decades later, two titan portals were built, and nothing else was done. Then the power development was neither high nor low, and resources and money were all vague. Many strategic resources did not say that there was no settlement, and the main focus was on casualness. Phobia of lack of firepower? Fear this and fear that, as long as you are armed with magical weapons all over your body, gods will come to kill gods, and demons will come to kill demons. No one can stop it, okay! As a result, I upgraded a staff, oh my god, armor, heavy armor cavalry, heavy armor infantry, explosive medium armor shooter, medium armor five fireball mage, research group magic, specialized in defeating giant units, and enemy bosses, and specialized in breaking large magic shields, causing a large number of physical attacks in an instant, various targeted research and development weapons, as well as large-scale destructive weapons, group attack weapons, weapons that cause continuous damage, and large artifacts Mass production, everyone around you is directly armed, literally armed, including full body armor, gloves, shoes, wrist guards, 10 rings, necklaces, headdresses, helmets, weapons. With this set, the attributes must be increased to the point of explosion, and then you can't win over the forces very much. You treat everyone like sand. The enemy is cheating you, but you still keep silent. You are really convinced and still dormant. It's funny, it has been like this for decades. I really like this subject matter. The author's writings are all excellent, but yes, they are better than Xiaobai's works, but they are still a little far away from the works of great masters. The turning point is too tough. The protagonist has made such great achievements and just dismissed them as if they were beggars. This is a record achieved by one person, killing 6 Luo, and the logistics manager of more than 100,000 trolls. Those nobles are still acting like this. The real protagonist has a chance. After decades of planning, they have accumulated enough power to destroy the queen. The result is still so passive. I always want to follow the plot, and I always want to be a bystander. At this time, I can actually start the plot alone. There is no need to stick to the plot. The protagonist himself is the biggest variable. If you want to correct it, you must eliminate the protagonist. In many novels, some variables will be slowly corrected. Haha, go ahead and talk nonsense. People can get over it and still correct it. It's just an excuse that some authors find because they are too lazy to use their brains to think about it. My own weapons and my girlfriend's weapons have not been updated, and this has been going on for decades. I can obviously make artifacts, but I insist on not making them, and I forcefully explain the materials. What a waste, holy shit are you serious? I have been in a relationship for hundreds of years, but I have never had sex. I am still a virgin, so I am really impotent. 🙄

Do you know what the rows of iron lumps under Ulduar are? It will give you time to prepare, so that Loken can be ready to bloodbath the entire Azeroth.

I enjoyed watching it very much. The author is not a eunuch.

Titan's furnace facility is transformed from the void, and as long as the facility is not destroyed, the energy is theoretically infinite. It only concerns the storage limit.

Not good-looking, pig's feet have no friends or emotional lines

After the ancient war, there are only 100,000 elves left?

Here comes the heroine Azshara