The Back Room of Gushan

I think the writing is fine. As for the short story, I think it can be submitted to a magazine if I revise it. At the starting point, should you consider writing more plainly. Many places require 2,000 words of content, and it can be done in 100 words. It is easy to understand if you read quickly. The transitions are sometimes very sudden. Strange characters appear in unfamiliar environments, and I tend to be stunned suddenly. For example, some people with poor writing skills, I read a new novel today (not naming names), a short story segment that can be understood at a glance. He didn't finish 5 chapters, but I could understand 20 lines at a glance. As a result, many people read it, which is amazing. Come on, author! ! As an aside, I have removed the author's previous books on writing practice without reading them, which is a bit regretful, but the covers are well chosen.

I recently climbed a mountain and felt severely weak and exhausted.

It couldn't be posted again during review. Good night everyone.

Chapter 4 has been temporarily blocked. Chapter 5 will be updated tonight.

I'm too sleepy. I'll improve it tomorrow😴🥱

Today I will update Lao K, and I will update tomorrow.

Happy May Day, I'll take some time off to sleep today, and I'll finish a volume tomorrow. Remember to accept the red envelope.

If the two yangs are not good and the yang is high again, you will commit evil and be sleepy. I still have five lives, who knows?😭

Sorry, I've been too busy lately and updates are very slow.