Tianfang Is on Top

I read this book I have a few thoughts "Tianfang is on the Top" is just as the name suggests, I understand this But I don't understand how the author wants to arrange the plot in this way I have written more than ten chapters before and the name of the protagonist has not yet appeared (By the way, I also read the characters in this book first before starting to read the book) The protagonist is obviously Su Tianfang Then what is the operation of writing a little girl named Crescent Moon in the first ten chapters (of course, I also guessed that she is the protagonist) But such an arrangement is not fascinating and attracts readers' interest in reading (because it is written by an unknown author without a certain foundation - referring to fan readers) For such an author, the most important thing is not how to develop the plot, but to be eye-catching enough. The three golden chapters at the beginning are very important (of course the content is also very important) A few suggestions.

1. The pace of the beginning is a little slow. Is there a wedge in the first fifteen chapters? It feels a little delayed. After all, at this time, the name adopted is still Yue Ya, and the name of the heroine Tianfang has not officially appeared. 2. There is no explanation of the background of the story. There are good and bad. If you read it slowly, you will naturally understand the world construction, division of forces, and character relationships. However, giving too many unknowns and confusions at once will also reduce the reading experience. In the first few dozen chapters, the characters that appear and the relationships behind them give people a sense of suddenness and unpreparedness (on the contrary, the first fifteen chapters are written in such detail)

Let's join in the excitement. This tree has appeared a lot now. The character relationship chain seems to be a bit messy and I haven't figured it out yet. I hope the author can control it well so that everything doesn't get out of control in the end. If it can be written well, this book should be quite good. Keep up the good work and update it. Don't let it fall apart in the later stages. It's already a bit broken in the early stage.

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I read part of it, and generally speaking, the beginning is okay, but I feel that the writing seems to be getting more and more confusing later on. It is obvious that some things are not according to the rules, and the heroine is not good, and all aspects described by the author seem to be a bit weak, and some positions are written in more detail. Some positions should be detailed but are just mentioned in one stroke. It seems that there are some shortcomings, and the author still needs to work harder.

From the current plot, it seems that Su Tianfang is a bit arbitrary in dealing with things, and from what we can see, Su Tianfang does not look like a thirty-year-old person, but she is really down-to-earth, like a seventeen or eighteen-year-old girl, who is in the rebellious period, so she does not listen to all the words of her elders, and she has a great rebellious mentality. How should Su Tianfang take her life path in the later period? It would be better for the author to position the heroine well first. As far as the title of this book is concerned, I am quite looking forward to it. I want to see how Su Tianfang finally succeeds in getting to the top of the road to success, high above the rest.

The writing style is not enough, the fire is lacking, and it needs more practice, what should I say? Su Tianfang is destined to grow up with the author's writing. The success of many things requires tempering. To become a qualified author, there is also a lot of room for development. Come on, after all, life is not achieved by one step, and there are not many suitable detours. Work hard to update, come on! .

From what we have seen so far, Su Tianfang's character design has a lot of shortcomings and a lot of flaws. As far as past and present lives are concerned, if Su Tianfang's two lives combined are considered to be a person in his thirties, then he shouldn't be so childish. In every aspect, he seems a bit lacking in brains. No one in his thirties has the maturity and stability that a person in his thirties should have.

Let's talk about it briefly. For me, if this book is about strong women, then Su Tianfang will naturally be stronger and more arrogant, the better. Naturally, everyone will bow down to her. However, this hole must be filled. Don't just dig the hole and leave a lot of mysteries in the end. Anyway, I still hope for stable development. Finally, I want to ask, is it possible that Yueya will come back in the end?

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