Dreamwalker

This is my first time writing. As an exercise, I took a lot of detours, so I revised it many times, which was very hard. I am very grateful from the bottom of my heart for every friend's message and recommendation. Everyone encourages me and sincerely offers wise opinions to help me make progress. Couldn't be more grateful for this. All my friends who have read this book have given me a lot of positive energy and made me full of upward power. No matter what, I will definitely work hard, keep learning to write, learn how to write a good story, keep honing my writing skills, keep updating, and finish writing this short story. A friend asked me how I could persevere without signing a contract or getting traffic? In fact, for myself, I just spend my time on Douyin writing. For me, writing is not a painful KPI, but a happy enjoyment. The process of writing is relaxed and enjoyable. Movie scenes are in my mind, and even the sound effects and background music are well matched. It is an extremely happy enjoyment. Of course, changing is still very painful. Well, seven rounds of major changes were very painful. So, you have to keep learning, strive for success once, get started in the right way, and don't make major changes. At the 730,000-word mark, I have made seven major changes and still feel it is good. Therefore, I feel that I still like this little story I wrote. At least I can read it, haha. No more than those great masters, I am stupid, have no talent, am not good at writing, have poor command of words, and do not have a lot of knowledge and accumulation. The only advantage I have is that as an amateur basketball player, I have good physical strength, so I can still exercise my liver from time to time. Finally, I still want to thank every friend, and I sincerely request that every friend who can give me advice, leave comments, vote for recommendations, collect likes is extremely valuable support for me as a newbie! Thank you again, I am very happy. I hope you all like my hilarious little story, and I wish you all happiness.

To be honest, the starting point is not suitable for generating electricity for love. If you put it on a tomato, with such a large number, hundreds of people will watch it at the worst.

Come on, at least we can say when bragging in the future, I am also a person who has written a book

Seeing this, please allow me to bark a little. It is undeniable that this book is better than mine. But why wasn't it signed? Not getting a lot of attention? I want to talk about it objectively. What I like to read the most is the book by The Squid Who Loves Diving. After reading his book, you will fall into a kind of inference from small things to big things. At the same time, it will be accompanied by various feelings. For example, I recently played "Arcane" for the second time. After reading it, even if I know the plot content, I will fall into it, and I will also think about what I will do if I fall into it. Even though he doesn't have very good writing skills, the atmosphere, emotion, and sense of reality are all very strong. I think that's the difference between us and Platinum. So my personal feeling is that a book not only needs an explosion of inspiration, but also needs some routines and a lot of realism. Personal opinion, for reference only.

I am a writer's assistant. After reading three chapters, I discovered a very big problem: I can't imagine the scene you described. You don't have a relatively fixed angle to describe it. You always ramble around and the plot is completely incoherent. Too many unnecessary descriptions seriously affect reading.

This is a real great god. No, after writing so much, it has become a kind of belief and worship.

As long as everyone is happy, I am very happy. It has one million words. Considering that the plot and characters have not collapsed, and so many friends support it, for me, it is quite successful. 😊Nothing else, thank you for your support, I share my happiness with you, let everyone be happy together😆😆😆

Not to mention anything else, just being here alone, I would definitely not be as good as 👍👍

🐮🐮🐮Come on (ง •̀_•́)งPersistence has surpassed many people until now!

Thanks to my good friend for the red envelope, Fatty Ma bowed