Swallowing the Starry Sky: the Great Nirvana Era

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Animation kills people, it's so easy to wash away. Judging from the plot in the original novel, the little aunt in your heart is ruthless and murderous without batting an eyelid. It is not an exaggeration to say that she will do whatever it takes to achieve her goal. I don't know when Bai Yueguang came into the hearts of a lot of people. At the beginning, a lot of people wrote about her as the heroine. I don't know if it was a sperm or a brainwash by capital. Anyway, I personally don't like it. Judging from the original work, Li Yao was more unjust than her. Their family was ruined mainly because of her. Although Li Yao was not a very good person, he was also a strict father! Li Wei let this woman pamper her so much that she lost her respect for the world. It can be said that she was mainly responsible for Li Wei's death. Li Yao also took action directly in revenge, but this woman repeatedly came up with ideas to attack Luo Feng's family, and did not take into account the rules set by Hong and Lei Shen at that time. When Luo Feng first came to No. 9 For one year and three months, he was already a senior executive of the Extreme Martial Arts Gym. Even if Luo Feng was really dead inside at that time, if you touch his family, it would be a slap in Hong's face. If she really succeeds, how will Hong lead the team in the future? It will be difficult to lead the team if people's hearts are broken. So if Luo Feng's family really dies, she will definitely follow closely behind. She is such a stupid woman. What do you like about her? Do you like that she has big breasts and no brains?

In Swallowing the Starry Sky, there is no need to write an emotional scene, because you are not sure what to write, and it will be very embarrassing, which will lead to a decline in the quality of the book. If you look at someone who writes that enchanting one, is your plot okay? Isn't it embarrassing? You can play in Swallowing Starry Sky, but you can't get emotional. You see, the original heroine Xu Xin in Swallowing Starry Sky has no sense of existence at all. After leaving the earth, she can't write emotional scenes, so don't write them.

After reading a lot of Devouring fanfics, the author makes people's eyes light up! Especially if you join the military, how can our great country, China, be inferior to a martial arts school 👍

Just look at the aunt and the enchanting, go to hell with the vultures, the aunt is mine.

The Earth Chapter swallows the essence. If you recall it carefully, you will find that the plot of entering the universe in the original work is obviously not as detailed as the Earth Chapter. There is no need to rush out. If the Earth chapter is well written, it will be easier to become a fan classic. For example, enriching the details based on the original work will make it more vivid and real. For example, Zhang Haobai in "Swallowing the Starry Sky" wrote that during the actual combat assessment of warriors, although the examiner can call for help if he is defeated, it takes time for rescuers to come, and it is often too late, so those who are not strong enough are not protected. There are many more details. Once the details are written, the whole story becomes flesh and blood, making it more vivid and real. It is also a good supplement to the original work, and it does not necessarily require significant innovation in the plot.

What I'm most speechless about is that during the Genius War, the Earth inexplicably produced several more geniuses than in the original work. The point is that these people have nothing to do with the original work, and all of them performed better than City Lord Luo. It's too embarrassing to forcefully implant them, and they all ranked first in the Genius War. It's outrageous. If you have some relationship with the protagonist, you can become a peerless genius. The human race is going to support you. How are you doing wholesale of love here?

Can you learn the secret method created by the overlord of the universe without even understanding the laws? Just kidding

To be honest, I can understand that the author wants to describe the sacrificial spirit and tragedy of the army fighting against monsters, but I still feel that it is too stiff. I was quite surprised when I read it.

Brother, my aunt must accept me to pursue you. Even if Suye comes, I can't stop her.

It's ridiculous at the beginning, plus one for constitution, and just talking about quantity without talking about units is just a hooligan.

When I clicked on the character list, the first one died of poison. It's not like the sperms in the brain can be accepted by garbage like Venina. What kind of woman do you want when you go to the universe?

The author has made too many magic changes, and he has not even understood the basic level of cultivation. The Rampant Demon God can be brought into the original universe, and he is also said to be the True God of the Void, and the True God of the Void can go through reincarnation. It is so funny. Except for the reincarnated life of the original universe, there is no way to enter the original universe. This should belong to the supreme rule. Even a mountain guest has to be reincarnated to enter the original universe. That witch is at the highest level of a god king, can she enter? The original owner's predecessor didn't have that ability.

Want to seize my monthly ticket gold master throne? You are twenty thousand years too early!

The author's style is too small. Spend so much writing and ink cultivating influence? The original works are all briefly mentioned. So what if you just cultivate a group of the strongest people in the universe? They are not cannon fodder in front of the beasts of the world. Just brush them off. Are you going to go behind the scenes?

After reading a few chapters, I don't know what kind of system it is. The timeline is set so early but is decades later, which is a bit embarrassing. At that time, the precarious base city was still building a school. Killing monsters was a matter for everyone. There were high-level students and warriors. As long as you had the ability to kill monsters, you were a hero. They didn't care what level you were (besides, it didn't matter whether there were any levels in such an early timeline).

Because it's Devouring the World, I couldn't keep watching the main theme. It's right to be patriotic, and there's nothing wrong with being passionate about it, but because it's Devouring the World, it feels quite isolated, so does anyone say there's no similar plot somewhere?

Awesome! The male protagonist at the pinnacle of the universe can participate in the genius battle (original star-level genius battle/cosmic-level strong man battle.)

I, Ma Liang, am a planet-level dancer and double swordsman, fifth in Hanxia and seventh in the world! Why just order noodles like this? After the Magic City Guard battle, go into the rescue room, and you won't be able to distribute the equipment later! ?

Read comments Change basic settings? Forget it, I won't order anymore. It's really hard to find good fans.

This is so cool. The first chapter was in 2017. Two hundred chapters later it will still be 2017. Time is so slow. I wrote two hundred chapters. True Six, water.

The key to the problems in this book are, firstly, the disappearance of the protagonist in several chapters, and secondly, the issue of rhythm. Writing a book cannot always be a continuous battle with blood. It must have ups and downs. When it is dull, it must be written about daily life to foreshadow it, and when it is passionate, it can climax. The plot of joining the army in the early stage is not that joining the army itself is not good, but because one battle after another is kept tense and the readers are tired of the aesthetics and feel that the plot is too awkward.

I'm just a stranger, I haven't read the book yet, but when I saw the title, I couldn't stand it anymore. Whenever you type a phrase in the input method and look at the words that come out, you will know that the word "Nirvana" is wrong...

If you want me to reward you, no way! Get your monthly pass, if you drop it, it will not be reissued.

It was a good start, but after the heroine Liu Qiyue came out, she pulled it off, as if she was a new person. He created a lot of strong men and geniuses, and created a cosmic overlord on the earth, the Venerable Tiancang, and so did Ma Liang. The planetary level was inherited by the Venerable. Can you understand?

Hey, Little Devil Boy's second place is about to be lost, congratulations in advance🎉

Alas, in order to complete the book raising, I insist on increasing the amount of reading for you.

You really deserve the title of your book. You were able to write over a hundred chapters during the Great Nirvana period... The most exciting thing about Swallowing the Starry Sky is the universe... You could write so much in just a few years on Earth... Tsk

You have tens of thousands of fans right away. Are you excited?

Our old horse is still ready to go under the knife!