I'm in the Detention Center and the Suspect Is Myself

I can't bear to reward you. I want to ask, does the protagonist have a needle eye or glaucoma? ! Let's not talk about the rhythm of the plot, but let's talk about the most basic writing skills. All kinds of wrong sentences are written in white, which is quite uncomfortable, especially if you are watching the plot with concentration, just one [Bai Zhe] can make people instantly fall into drama. Beautiful (this adjective is meant to express that the heroine is as beautiful as Zhang Liangying?), Fast, long distance, eyes wide open, unconscious for a moment... Really, the foundation of the foundation, pay a little attention, this affects the reading experience too much

Impressions after reading Who said ordinary people can't be detectives? The reincarnated male protagonist's awakening reasoning system seems to be only used in writing, but in fact illusion and reality are intertwined, and reality can also be included in articles. He is willing to use his own efforts to gain social stability. Let's see how he takes the system to the guest of public security and uses reasoning to ensure peace! [Audience] This work is suitable for book lovers who like to read urban mystery novels. The systematic reasoning style brings readers a different reading pleasure! Title of the work: "I am in the detention center, and the suspect is myself" Author: Qing Shizhang Sword Walking to the End of the World Tag: Reasoning - Wisdom - Urban Literature Status: Serializing Recommended Index: ★★★★★ [Plot Summary] At the beginning of the time travel, Xu Hao was in a detention center and was confused. After sorting out his memories, he was surprised to find that he was involved in a murder case. In order to leave this place as soon as possible, he awakened the reasoning system and asked to help the authorities find the truth of the incident, and thus embarked on a path of reasoning and deduction! [The works are more exciting] The Mystery Writer System is a newcomer to the original network. The works produced have received a mediocre response. This system with unknown origin and many functions allowed Xu Hao to see the possibility of realizing his dream. What should I do if I can't find the material? Join the official as a guest detective. With his system, he symbolizes the city's last line of defense in public security management! [The language style of the work] To be honest, the author of this novel is a newcomer to the Internet, but his writing style does not feel unsatisfactory at all. Compared with some newcomers who have just entered the industry, the meticulous interpretation and description of reasoning in the work, the humor in language communication and calmness, and the cautious style of the male protagonist Xu Hao allow me to give this work and the author a very high evaluation!

I can only say that the first three or four chapters are quite discouraging. I suggest you skip it or read the comments, which are much better than the main text. It's okay later on, just see if you like it.

Overall, it's pretty good, and the rhythm is good. It's slightly flawed, but I feel like the police don't play a big role, and the protagonist's aura is too high. Keep up the good work!

The first few were well written, but the one that imitated "City Lights" made me silent. First of all, the Internet at that time should not have developed to that extent. Another point is that the police will not gossip with you. When you see someone, arrest... There are not so many cumbersome things.

With this frequency of crimes, I feel like Shengzhang has to step down.

It has been poisoned. The first poisonous point: the author wrote a real-world mystery novel instead of Conan or a fictional parallel time and space. However, it lacked the most basic research on the criminal investigation department and public security organizational structure at that time, and it was completely empty imagination. An example is: public homicides have a great impact, there is no task force and no provincial support, but there is only one forensic doctor in the entire city? What's more, you can seek support from brother units; there is no sense of substitution Poison point 2: The reasoning method is as full as Conan's, which seems to be unclear, but in fact it is completely unworkable, and the power outage is outrageous; Poison point 3: the supporting characters are really Just like in Conan, I don't have the brain of a normal person 🧠 After three days of investigation, I couldn't even figure out why the power was cut off. Unexpectedly, I was shocked to death. In the iron-footed era of 2002, I didn't even check out all the suspicious persons, and the staff paid special attention to it.

Passion killing was a term proposed by the defense lawyer in the Yao Jiaxin case in 2010. Now, the author has not set it to 2002. At this time, jingcha is presumption of guilt, and it should be classified as murder at the beginning. The protagonist's use of the term passion killing should be questioned.

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I gave a reward of 100 and came to speak directly. I have read ten chapters. What should I say? I think the setting is good, but the ideas and writing are hard to describe. In the face of evidence, reasoning is vulnerable. Don't say that there were no criminal investigation techniques in 2002. In 1987, the Chinese police used DNA technology to solve crimes for the first time. With the police's criminal investigation methods and the support of superiors, the case will not be so complicated unless it is an old case or other factors. I am also part of the mystery circle, and I boast that I have read some mystery books. Many of the mysteries are either limited to the Blizzard Villa model, or are from the police perspective. Otherwise, if the reasoning detectives and the police compare the progress, the police will always win, because you, a single reasoning person, have no chance of winning when faced with the entire team + technical support. Judging from the content of this book, the author should not be an official, otherwise there would not be so many bugs. The author can look at the National Forensic Medicine. Although it has been criticized for its poor accounting, the introduction of criminal investigation methods is still very good. I hope the next one will be better. Otherwise, just let it be a blizzard. Don't think that detectives are better than police officers. That's unscientific😃😃

When I read Chapter 30, overall it was pretty good, but the aura of the protagonist was too strong and there was no participation from other people, which gave me the illusion that the police were just freeloaders. Second, each case progresses too fast and is very sloppy. There is obviously room to flesh out the plot and add some roles for other supporting characters. I feel that if I continue writing like this, except for the skills given by the system, everything else will be seriously homogenized, and then it will be gone. There will be nothing to write about. Third, the time between cases is too short. One case follows another without any rest time. The protagonist is also a human being and needs a rest. The audience also needs a rest. It is recommended to add more details of life. Another reason is that people die in every case. Your case goes too fast. In real life, our security is pretty good! It gave me the illusion of being in a drama. The city in the novel made me feel dangerous, and I would try my best to move.

Just conceive some bizarre and interesting cases, so that the length of the novel can actually be very long. It has to be a big scene. Each case has a greater impact than the other. Small cases are just criminal police issues, so there is no problem in writing more. The author insists on writing cases that affect one province or even multiple provinces. This is not just a matter for the police. It is thankless, troublesome to write, and easy to touch on sensitive content.

In just one week, three murders occurred with such cruel methods and such bad social impact, and the death toll continued to rise... The leaders of the jurisdiction said that even if they were solved in time, they would not be able to escape their responsibilities, and they would not be able to keep their positions.

Did anyone mention it? The author has too much interesting stuff and too many incidents, which can lead to fatigue and dryness, which is also very boring.

Chapter 96, no one at the wedding doesn't know the groom, right?

Have you finished writing the big event? A common problem when writing mystery novels is that the police are just like a decoration. Why don't you just move the time forward to the 7080s? All reasoning is meaningless after two thousand years. Ignore various modern criminal investigation techniques

Seriously, I want to read all the novels in your novels,

I can not watch it but I can't live without it

The design of the case can be seen, but there are too many poisonous points outside the case.

Ahem, let's get serious Following reading is very important to the author. There are two chapters a day for the free period. Although it's a bit uncomfortable to keep reading, you should try your best to keep reading. This score is related to daily updates after it is put on the shelves The author is a newcomer to Qidian, but he also writes on other websites. There are many books, and the number of words updated daily can still be guaranteed. On my website, 10,000 updates per day is considered normal, 20,000 updates per day is considered normal, and 30,000 is considered a volume After it is released, my daily number depends on what... You understand what I mean, awa I beg you brothers to read it! ! !

Wang Chao

Is the author panicking now? There was a person in Qingdao who had a stomachache on the 8th and was cremated on the 13th. The family of the deceased did not agree. The person was cremated 🙂🙂🙂 Doesn't this sound familiar to you (the oil case of a person from Beijing)?

I saw this book in the reading welfare, I am so heartbroken

After reading this book in one sitting, I had two feelings. First, the author's cheating should not be so real. I almost wanted to try to rob a bank with force. Second, seeing the author being interrogated every day, I personally feel that death is not a pity. People stare at you for interrogation every day and midnight. Either you are a good person or you are the author. Even the final sentence is interrogated. The relationship is extremely bad, haha! Still down to earth! 🤭

This ending is weird, it feels like it was censored too much and it was forced to be unfinished.

To be honest, I guessed who was behind it. . . . So obvious. . . But it was very good, but the ending was a bit anxious and rushed.

When the gangster hit someone with his car, the police didn't know what he was doing. When the vegetative man took revenge, the police jumped out The classic Leaning Tower is a classic. You have to wait and see. The ghost of Zhong Shui will probably live a long life.

You have also seen the following plot. It is a world similar to the earth but not very related to development. Therefore, the unscrupulous media in the beginning is because of the rapid development of the Internet and the short and rapid development time. As a result, there are not many measures to manage public opinion and the media. There may be breakthroughs in new fields before the plan is released This is different from ordinary people using Nokia, but Apple 2 has been released, you can see the difference in network development The protagonist enters the police station, and the police only go in for temporary protection considering the unscrupulous media.

Fine, understand

The first time I decided to complete it, I only chased half of it and no longer wanted to chase it. It was rare to finish the chase.