I Can Change the Difficulty of Reality

If you don't know how to write emotional scenes, just don't write them, okay? A girl likes the protagonist for no reason, and then comes to him whenever she has nothing to do! It's really embarrassing to watch! There is no emotional foreshadowing! Even people you meet for the first time! Is the protagonist a humanoid aphrodisiac? Why do you blush when you see it for the first time? It's really a mouthful that makes me want to vomit!

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I was passing by and saw that the author's third book had been released. I was really moved. I am an old bookworm. I have read the author's first two books. Every time I read the author's writing, I feel very comfortable (except for the part where he is rushing to finish work). At that time, I just read the beginning of Pan Dimension and read it without realizing it. The following Dragon Clan of Immortality was also the first Dragon Clan fan I followed. I have always felt that the author is the kind of person who is rewarded by God. He describes the environment, dialogue, characters and emotions very naturally and to just the right degree, and his language style is also very unified. There are no old problems like the half-white, half-text, and blunt emotional transitions in most of Qidian's articles. In terms of connecting words in a small part of the plot, it can be said to be very smooth, and there is no abrupt change in the plot and scenes. Especially, this has been the case since the first book on Pan Dimension, and it has been the same since the second book on Cultivation of Immortals. Today I saw the third book and read it for a while, and it is still the same. There is no doubt that this is his instinctive writing style, rather than the explosive level of one chapter or two. But the author is still not popular, maybe because of the update speed, maybe because of the overall control of the plot. In short, every book encounters various things, which is really a pity. I sincerely wish this book will have good results. I have learned a lot from the author's articles.

Don't accept any strange tasks randomly. What the hell is this slave organization? You dare to mess around without knowing anything about it. I really don't know how to write the word "death".

The heroine and her sister are twins. Why are they different in age? Is the heroine Nezha?

The advantages are as obvious as the disadvantages. The advantage is that the male host does things quickly, without procrastination, and is measured. The golden finger is not very strong, but it has full functions. It has a simple and powerful beauty, which is very good. The disadvantage is that the emotional line is too naive (maybe because I am just a single person?) The heroine is given away too quickly, the portrayal is not smooth enough, it feels like there are some missing descriptions or situations, and the turning point is a bit stiff. My personal suggestion is to polish the description of the emotional line carefully, or try not to write it, otherwise I will be sorry for such a good hero like you.

Captain? Sanhua said, eunuchs are not allowed (fake)

The writing is okay. It's just getting more and more uncomfortable to watch, one thing after another. It didn't stop at all. Just after the killing here, there was another one there, and just after this one was finished, there was another one there.

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Why does it feel like the author has opened a small account to write other books? This update makes no sense.