The Unscientific Detective in Conan

Looking at it now, I feel a little "burning" That is to say, although the protagonist's golden finger is a bit flawed in some aspects, it is still pretty good. But after your career is set, except for the main professional detective, who is always used by the protagonist to solve crimes, other professions do not feel as satisfying as the ability of the profession itself. Let's put it this way, you don't even "burn" the detective profession that is mainly described. You directly dominate the plot and participate in the original plot by yourself instead of participating in the plot of Conan Kogoro and others, which itself is greatly reduced. Then, as for your chef career, you were not given basic abilities or recipes at the beginning, so you kept putting it on hold, pretending to be good at cooking or enjoying the excitement, it was gone. In terms of swordsmanship, that professional book makes you very powerful, but at present, it seems that it is basically used to protect yourself in the dominating plot. The same goes for blasting, it was only used once. Ditto for bodyguards. In summary, something feels wrong. 1. You did not intend to let Conan and the others investigate the case according to the original plot. After you dominated the plot, you did not write a certain sense of satisfaction. 2. Now that I am alone, there are too many professions. Not to mention the detective profession, the performance of the other three is too weak. 3. Not flammable

The writing is too bland. As a fan, it's like going through the crime-solving scene with another person, and there is no attractive connection with the original characters.

I have read the latest chapter. As for the protagonist, he is now in a harem state. It feels like the only people who care about it at first are Shiho and Momiji, and others don't think much about it... Maybe they don't pay attention either? Then, the protagonist realized Sato's feelings later, and then they disappeared. According to the author's progress, although there are some ups and downs, it is not a gift for the daughter. It can only be said that the author does have some ink in writing about emotions. After that, I feel like I was rushed by the readers, and then I accelerated the progress, and now I directly decided to choose the harem to accept (you are all my wings)

I'm chasing the heroine Xiao Ai! The author must not be a eunuch! 😭😭😭

If it weren't for the cover, I wouldn't have come in, you know?

The main character of Zhijingbing's book revolves around Red and Black and his identity as the son of nature. The wizard revolves around catching ghosts and pitting Conan. The corpse collector is the protagonist of Black Fandi and his transformation into various ghosts. The coroner is that his method is not detective but autopsy. They all have these good Ke Xue fans. There is a clear theme center. This book is somewhat successful because there are assassins and systems, but this is not the center. It is always mixed with cases. I believe book lovers who have read many Ke Xue fans will be tired of the cases. After all, so many fans write like the old three, and they should prefer to incarnate everything to make things futile.

When I watched Conan for the second time, I realized that the old policeman in Tsukikage Island was the most terrifying. Even Aso Honesty could spot these drug dealers. How could this old policeman who had lived on the island for so long and experienced a suicide case twenty years ago know everything? Who in a village suddenly became rich was basically the focus. Not to mention the huge amount of unknown income like drug trafficking, this guy might be a gangster policeman.

I strongly request Haiyuan heroine. After reading so many Conan fandoms, I have seen Xiaolan's operation as a heroine, but I have never seen Haiyuan heroine.

I saw more than forty chapters. . . It's too dry, and it feels like it's just a repeat of Conan's plot, with just a different protagonist and a different solution. There isn't much interaction with the original character. After all, when looking at the fandom, firstly, the world view is complete, and it doesn't take a lot of thinking. Secondly, the interaction between the characters and the protagonist doesn't feel like it reflects the attractiveness of the protagonist.

Haihara Ai

Qingshan is already killing everyone in the original work, and you guys are just like 🐶

I have read Chapter 661 so far, and I feel that Sato has a role with the protagonist, why should he give it to someone else? Otherwise, don't tease, or don't give it to others. Giving a girl away is the easiest way to get scolded (because I saw a post by a Shennong brother, and I'm not sure it's Sato at the moment. I'll continue reading. If it's still disgusting, I will post another statement to everyone)

Outline red leaves

I can't stand it any longer. This male protagonist or the author probably likes Platonic very much. After reading almost 800 chapters, he has not even established a relationship with anyone. It's all about ambiguity. It's not even ambiguous. It's just that the tone of the conversation has become more intimate than the previous closeness. This male protagonist still feels like he is Aquaman. No, man, this...

In this book, every chapter is inseparable from the system, and the only way to make money is to draw a lottery. Good novels try to downplay the existence of the system as much as possible. Good guy, this author still emphasizes it every day. There is no reasoning in this book, and all the original case narratives are copied. After copying one case, you will directly move on to the next case. They don't have anything of their own, and the characters in it are just tool people. Summary: Without the system, without copying the original plot, you will not be able to take care of yourself.

Ooka red leaves

She was deceived, the heroine didn't even have one! The same goes for Momiji. The first meeting lasted for more than 200 chapters. There was no interaction for a few chapters and then disappeared again. The identity of the parents was almost 400. I haven't filled it out yet. They solved the case in Conan again. I haven't seen the plot of the winery. I only read it when I saw the heroine Momiji. It lasted more than 400 chapters and only came out a few times (probably 3 times. I found the protagonist for the first time. The male protagonist has no memory. The male protagonist is similar to replacing Hattori Heiji. When Hongye was a child, he said that he would marry her in the future, but Hongye remembered it. The male protagonist didn't know anything because of time travel. The second time Hongye found the male protagonist, and paid to hire him as a bodyguard during the trip. A case appeared in the middle, but it disappeared after it was over. The third time he accompanied Hongye to a classmate's wedding, and he solved a case, and Hongye disappeared after it was over).

Chapter 63: I scratched the back of my head 35 times. Can I change the shampoo to a better one for the male protagonist? Folliculitis? Why don't you go take a look? I always feel so itchy.

The plot of Soul Lotus is the most ridiculous and stupid plot in my opinion. I feel that writing Miyano Akemi to death is better than this kind of plot. The props provided by the system in the previous stage are all reasonable and scientific, but when it comes to the Soul Lotus episode, it starts to become fantasy. The comparison before and after is too dramatic. If you have been cultivating immortals from the beginning, I think it is more reasonable and in line with the atmosphere of your story, so you can continue watching. I flipped through the catalog, and there was a soul lotus breeding manual at the back. It said that the protagonist can control the activities of the soul lotus. In a non-controlling state, the host decides whether to have consciousness? ? ? You really might as well just write someone to death. Miyano Akemi is still a human being after all. Or you would just let the protagonist plan in advance and ask Dr. Agasa to provide some scientific props such as bulletproof vests, blood bags and the like (after all, Dr. Agasa also made bulletproof glasses in the original work). Wouldn't it be more reasonable to save him like this? There is also a bit of a game with the black organization, isn't it more interesting? Another outrageous point is that when Gin Vodka got out of the car to kill Miyano Akemi, the protagonist wore an assassin robe to reduce his presence and installed a time bomb on the Porsche. Afterwards, Gin Vodka seriously injured the person who had killed everyone... It really gave people a sense of wonder. It feels like a child can't win a fight and then secretly breaks someone else's window at night... If you want Miyano Akemi to be controlled by you, then you can't write that because the protagonist can rescue her from the organization, she decides to listen to the protagonist in the future to repay the protagonist? And then add a plot where the protagonist rescues her sister to deepen this determination? The cheating should be done in a reasonable manner. With so many skills and props in hand, if it doesn't work out like I said before, you can ask Dr. Ali for some scientific inventions. In the end, if you want to save someone, you have to ask the system to give you a resurrection item long in advance. This kind of violent cheating is really not interesting 😅

Haha

I really don't understand, in this setting of modern society, how do you let the protagonist open a harem? And they are the same person?

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The writing is so strong, and the young man is full of energy, but his feet are weak when he encounters red leaves. Are you sure you are writing about a young man, not a middle-aged man? With this kind of performance, there are multiple female protagonists. I can't stand a single female protagonist. Forget it without a heroine. In the game, this is a pain in the ass.

It can be seen that the author's experience is still somewhat lacking. In the middle three or four hundred chapters, it is obvious that the author is repeatedly entangled between opening a harem or not. However, after about five or six hundred chapters, the author finally firmly decides on opening a harem. It doesn't matter if you lack experience or your writing skills are not good, as long as you can improve, learn, and improve. The student party is nothing 💰, I mainly just subscribed to read it, sorry 🥺 I felt a bit strange when I saw about 400 chapters, so I deleted it. Then I flipped to it and added it back to continue reading. After seeing about 600 chapters, I feel that the author has made a lot of progress😁

Isn't this a bit more refined?

I used to update it once a day or several times a day, but now I haven't updated it for several days. I'm just waiting for the update. I've read so many Conan fan stories, but I can't stop reading this one like the Soul Exorcist.

The system of this game is completely broken, and it doesn't even provide a mission. The plot updates are extremely slow, so I'd better abandon the game decisively. In addition, the settings of many female characters are annoying as hell.

One chapter is updated every ten days and a half. . .

As for the author, there has been no update for five days.

Aren't you going to update it during this time? It used to be updated once a day.