What Should I Do If My Good Days at Barcelona Are Over?

I am convinced that the introduction is so nonsense.

I saw your reply, so I would like to say a few words. Although I feel that readers like me are really annoying, I would like to leave it here to give pointers to the author for writing a book. I read the first chapter when you posted it last week. I felt very bad at the time, so I didn't add it to my favorites, and it was hard to say anything. I was always afraid of saying too much, and the author would be influenced by the readers and ruin the author's ideas. I saw the chapter about the ban today, which confirmed that my hunch was correct. Let me tell you about the problem. The problem is that the male protagonist can be a diaosi, but he cannot be without quality. The same young people with average intelligence and average moral standards must be more "qualified" and "decent and hypocritical" than they were twenty years ago. Because living conditions have improved, even if they are really losers, they no longer have that loser mentality. Specifically speaking, the plot of beating the Koreans was handled very poorly. Not to mention that new readers have never seen the plot of Koreans promoting Taekwondo. It is very disrespectful to simply stir up trouble and make false accusations. Nowadays, many people are really not that straightforward. Those who like to read novels instead of scrolling through Douyin most likely have some reading skills and reading habits. Many times they are both assertive and assertive, and like to stand on the moral high ground and mock others. Therefore, hitting someone can be maliciously guided by the protagonist, but it must not be the protagonist who stirs up trouble in the first place. The spitting is best done by the Korean himself, or the protagonist has to teach him a lesson due to something from others. Since the protagonist has experienced the Internet era, he must know that the Internet will amplify everything. He does not need to be a perfect victim, and he cannot have too obvious flaws, so he is unlikely to be so reckless. I think the author should write less about things other than competitive factors (competition includes both inside and outside the field, not just about games). I can't say what other readers think, but I think this protagonist is not as likable as the original protagonist. At least the original protagonist is very real. Even though I have never admired this kind of protagonist, I feel very good from the perspective of character creation. This protagonist is fictional, does not feel real, is very mechanical, and is full of the author's misunderstanding of ordinary modern young people and dream time travellers. Many cool articles look at Bai, and the protagonist is nothing special, but the internal logic is that a modern young man can grasp the cool points, and Bai Bai is because of the lack of character creation ability. The author's ability to create characters is already there, even quite strong. Many people think that you write books as if you are used to vomiting. This is actually a great recognition of your writing ability. However, your new book creates a character that you actually don't understand at all. You only understand them in online articles, not enough about them in reality. You copy cats and tigers, resulting in the character's lack of success. This Yao has neither the soul (emotions) of a modern young man nor the thinking logic of a modern young man, and is incompatible with the identity of a time traveler. (I don't know how many old readers have read this new book now, but what attracts old readers may really have nothing left except competition. After all, the predecessor we admire was robbed of everything by the time-travelers...) The above, This can be regarded as nitpicking by a turtle-haired reader. In fact, as long as sports writers use their strengths and avoid weaknesses and write about sports well, there will always be an audience. At least for sports articles on the Internet, the understanding of professional sports is as important as the ability to write a good story, or even more important.

In an environment where the background of the basic villain is Seven Point Eight Silly, you know how to draw traffic when writing about Eight Silly!

I was really confused after reading these chapters of time travel. Why did I travel again? There was originally a God of War system. Although it didn't match very well, it was still understandable. The chapter said that there was still more. You see, these chapters in the past two days were really inexplicable, as if you had changed your mind. I only saw a chapter review after three chapters, which also said that your writing is uncomfortable. Author, please write well. After the return accident, the plot of these chapters can be cut, because it can really persuade a lot of people to quit.

As long as you write about Barcelona, ​​I will complain. This club is disgusting from its roots.

The collection has been falling off every day in the past few days, and it has fallen below a certain point and then started to rise again. It's just like stock trading. It's scary to watch! Put it away, this book is finished anyway. But you have to let me write the complete story! Every story has its antecedents. When I wrote From Back to Youth, I was trying to supplement the reasons why the protagonist went abroad and how he went to Italy and Barcelona. After all, the Chinese Super League football environment in that era was really great. All the international players who went abroad did it for honor and fame. To be honest, the salary is not as high as in the country! Drop it, I will write these even if I drop them all, the story needs to be complete and reasonable. It's all nonsense to convince the coach to join the professional team through trial training at the beginning. If this is the case, then Brazilian and Argentinian players from South America can fill all the spots in all European teams.

If the protagonist is changed to a foreigner, the behavioral quality will be very reasonable. It is best to have black genes.

Come on

It's a lot of mess, but there aren't a few words about football.

Who can read this article? It's extremely poisonous.

If your writing skills are poor and you don't have time to compare, then you just write simple articles. What kind of fun is it?

Although both novels and stories use stories as the core carrying point of the text, the stories in the novels release aesthetic value, and the pleasure of reading is also a manifestation of value. Therefore, the author's writing style is very good! You can look forward to this novel~

What the hell? I've already seen half of it, so I'm wearing it again! No need to make it up, right? ? System error?

How is the pacing of the new book? Is it still the same as the last book, transferring after playing a few games?

Barcelona, ​​be more serious

It feels like a novel from 10 years ago, which is crappy and crappy.

Lots of typos and repeated paragraphs

Is this going to play Pepe and Shui Ye in the El Clasico?