Zhutian Film and Television Starts from Dajiang Dahe

Love apartment, the elite of trouble

The first book I spent money on at Qidian, although I used QQ Wallet

I originally wanted to see a big river, but I ended up seeing an increase in intracranial pressure.

The author does not consider the relationship between characters, status, or language environment at all to describe dialogue and emotions. Take it for granted. 😓

The whole world is against the protagonist, and I almost vomited due to all kinds of pulls.

Don't you consider reality? In the past, when the planned economy was a production market, would manufacturers be afraid that no one would buy it? Can you believe that in the past, cement was taken away by others within a long time, and the price was definitely high, and you were worried about losing business? In the past, you had to ask others to find materials. According to the current market relationship, there were too many loopholes in the past.

It's been 4 months and I haven't cleared a copy of Zhutian dungeon. Why don't you write a chicken? Go ahead and drive the screws safely and honestly.

To be honest, the first part of your writing was too cumbersome and too detailed. You wrote a hundred pages for each world. You were able to travel through several worlds, and it was very tiring to read. If you speed up later, it will become a world with twenty or thirty chapters. It will also lose some readers

Not to mention anything else, I just feel that the pace is too slow. I haven't finished it until now with more than a hundred pictures. I thought you would only write about this world. Great author, you are called the world of film and television, and you still write so slowly. Then you are a ghost in film and television, like this The novel basically has to end at three hundred chapters, otherwise no one will read it - this is the case for me. I have read many novels by Zhutian Film and Television, and the first three worlds are the best. They usually have about 150,000 words per world. Slow-paced novels like yours are really rare. It's better to say that it's a maverick. Anyway, I can't stand it anymore.

I especially want to read a fanfic about Dajiang Dahe, but I don't like this book because it's too wordy.

Write less heart-wrenching chapters, which will dissuade many people. Write more cool articles about upgrading and work innovation.

I was quite happy to read you write Dajiang Dahe, but after reading it, I felt that there was a reason why it was not popular (I think I said it quite euphemistically).

Are you really planning to write a big river and a thousand chapters?

You can write in a windy place

If you write based on movies and TV shows, write based on movies and TV shows. People's first impression is movies and TV shows. If you don't write according to movies and TV shows or add random additions, readers will think you are wrong. Everyone has seen it. If you write like this, you will be very separated from the readers. You are not original and the right to interpret is not yours.

The early single playthrough is too long. Since it is a fanfic, it is interesting to interact with the original characters more. Otherwise, why would you read a fanfic?

It's too wordy and watery, and there's nothing refreshing about it!

You probably wrote too many pictures for your first world, almost 200 pictures. . . . . .

Flowing water! How can you talk so much!

Come on, come on, it's been a long time since I've seen Dajiang Dahe

Dajiang Dahe should have a wide audience, but what the author wrote is not attractive at all.

Attracted by the great rivers. The result... Uh uh uh, farewell

Come on, few people write about big rivers

Write 2,000 words a day for Hammer novels

Change your name to pig's feet. It's the same name as mine. It's embarrassing.

Season one, two and three

The settings are also very strange, the cheats are also very strange, and the poisonous points are obvious. If you give it, you will give it, and bug fixes are included. It is worse than those that directly cheat.

The writing is okay, and the logic of the plot is also online. There is no quarrel with the sky or the earth, Long Aotian, he knows how to advance and retreat when doing things, and his personal emotions will be restrained and hidden. He does not favor the Yangtze River because of its clear water, and does not favor the use of the Yellow River because of the turbid water. He has achieved great things with a carefree mind. If it can be maintained for a long time, it will be regarded as a fine product, and it can be a eunuch.

Eunuch🤔🤔

Is there anyone else who writes about leaving the Yumen in the west?