American Comic Priest Online Salvation

It can be seen that the author has his own ideas, each stage has its own theme, and uses some characters and their behaviors to express this theme. But the price is that the protagonist is very weak and cannot be beaten by anyone. There is no excitement. After reading nearly 80 chapters, the only pleasure is when the protagonist shouts: When the protagonist shouts: The moment of pleasure is not created by the author himself. It is borrowed from or plagiarized the plot and content of the original version of Fate, and even the exact same prayer . Furthermore, I put the aspect of the shape and moon in the second article. This is called flashback in the article. But in terms of online articles, in the eyes of readers, the protagonist should be climbing up step by step like a ladder, rather than walking for a while and suddenly remembering that he didn't bring something with him and running home to get it. You can definitely put the second one before Marvel. Furthermore, it's really messy, the characters are a mess, the protagonist disappears from time to time, and he's not even seen in four or five chapters. I hold Batman and Tony Stark in high esteem. I don't even understand how long the protagonist and Tony Stark have known each other. After meeting Odin, he humbly prayed for some Uru metal. He thought it would be given to him. It was so humble and understandable. But the author uses the ancient one to tell readers that the protagonist wants some Uru metal to give to Tony Stark. It can't be said to be licking. The protagonist didn't kneel down and lick Tony like a dog like in other novels. I just don't understand why our pseudo-priest protagonist cares about Tony so much like a biological father and mother. To put it nicely, the protagonist feels like Maria to other people, caring for the world. The structure of this book is like an inverted U shape, starting from DC-Marvel and going back and forth to the top, and then starting from Xingyue, like a memory, slowly coming down. It can only be said that the author's creativity is very good. If the level of this book is 100 points, the creativity of Father + DC + Marvel + Xingyue can account for 90 points. But sometimes it's not enough to be creative but not able to control it 😃 It's just one person's opinion, don't mind, I'm really sorry

The writing is weird, I want to read it but don't want to

It's too messy, with pieces here and there, and it doesn't feel like it's telling a continuous story. It was okay to write the DC part before ten chapters, but when I jumped to Marvel, it felt like it was fragmented. The main character suddenly became different, and the story became fragmented. The whole story was so confusing that I didn't know what to write.

There are too many things written, which makes the main character disappear. Too many things are written out in a mixed manner, lumped together like a fisherman frying thread, and written in such a way that things are hidden in the clouds. How can it attract people to read?

Chaos, confusion, sense of fragmentation... The reading experience is not very good

This book is hard to describe in one sentence. It has good points and bad points. The writing style is okay and it is considered good among online articles, but many places are messy. I don't know whether it is a deliberate attempt to depict the stream of consciousness or a simple writing error. In summary, it is not suitable for web writing, and it is not suitable for web writing as a starting point. Everyone who comes to Qidian to watch fan fiction basically has to be happy. The protagonist should be strong, unrestrained, and able to do whatever he wants. He should be whoever he wants to kill. Define right and wrong if he wants to. He can do it every second and every second he wants. He should admit whoever he wants into the harem. Although if you read it too much like this, you will get bored, and you will feel that the writing style of elementary school students is uninteresting, and you will even feel stupid (I have been in this state after reading too much before), but the market is like this, even if the quality of this fanfic is poor, nt, does not conform to the original character image, and is illogical, there will still be people reading it. Why? Because it's simple, straightforward, and fun. These problems are relatively few in this fanfic, but this fanfic has a bigger problem. It is not exciting enough. The protagonist is either being beaten or on the way to being beaten. He feels aggrieved and always cautious. Although it seems reasonable if you think about it carefully, because the protagonist is indeed not strong and has problems with both his character and his brain. Just, very real? But this is a fan, you have set up the system, why don't you use it? Why don't you use that module and that knife? Also, after the transition between DC and Marvel, the style has changed so much that it feels like "The Spiritual Guide of American Comics", but it also makes people feel happy, because the protagonist is the evil Lord Black Sun! Where's your imaginary number magic? Where is your magic eye? Why not bring the summoning of heroic spirits or something here? The author writes too carefully. It is recommended to delete Marvel (the Marvel chapter is not as good as DC in terms of perception, the protagonist is offline for a long time, and the group portrait is too group-like), delete the system (the system's presence is too low, and nothing useful is extracted), write to increase the popularity, put it on the shelf, finish the minimum living, and then write your own stuff, maybe there will be great progress. Also, don't engage in stream-of-consciousness or other things. Most of the audience for online articles don't want to put too much thought into sorting out those things (unless it's written by a big shot, and someone will lick it if it's written by a big shot, or it's just your writing that's good). If you do this and quote classics and so on (some of which I have never heard of), well, there will definitely be fewer people coming to read it. People who come here specifically to read cool articles will think you are showing off, even if your starting point is not that.

If you don't understand, just ask, is there a little boy in this novel? I won't watch it without you

I feel like I am reading translated documents, which are wrong, confusing, and threadless. If it is not a mental problem, it is a machine work.

Priest: Devil, get out of this little boy's body! 👿: You go out first.

Is this the author's first time writing a book on Qidian? After reading everyone's comments recently, I feel that this book actually has a lot of problems. However, I may not be able to read many people's comments at the first time, so I set up this book review. If you have any thoughts and opinions, please post them here. The author is also easier to see. Thank you.

It's so confusing. I changed the map before I even understood many places.

I got involved with S. H. I. E. L. D. Again. Hey, I'm gone. It has nothing to do with the writing. I'm just tired of it.

After reading the comments, I realized that this is a self-pleasure article. In fact, I quite like this subject matter, but as for American comics, if it is written as a Japanese light novel prose self-pleasure article, it would be better to forget it. It would be a pity.

It's like writing prose, not like telling a story

Author, are you writing a collection of essays? There is no main line, and the story is told in pieces. It seems like you are writing an ancient supernatural detective novel, but the detective novel is not that riddle-like and can tell the story clearly.

It's too stream-of-consciousness, and after watching it for a long time, I feel like the Riddler is everywhere, and Gotham is filled with emo emotions. .

Forehead. . . . . Not too friendly to me, I don't even know what black mud is! I was confused when I saw it😂😂😂

Otherwise, it would be a bit weird to change the master's degree to a doctorate and use the master's degree as a degree to apply for jobs, at least in the United States.

It's pretty good. It has the same feeling as when I watched the Qidian fandom in 2012.

Now if the protagonist is exposed to the eyes of the Latitude Demon, he will be a super dessert, delicious and delicious, who can bear it?