American Comics: My Saiyan Panel

Gina just appeared, I think it's okay. There's something about the god of love in the back and someone pretending to be a girlfriend. Those who didn't know it thought it was a domestic TV series. Today's novels are basically novels about changing skins and falling in love.

There is a villain and a hero in one mouthful, as a primary school student would say. . .

The title of this book is really discouraging. If I hadn't read the book, I wouldn't want to click on it. Also, the addition of this female character makes my head hurt.

It's a bit of a self-pleasure, but it's hard to put it into words

Well, I just read two or three chapters, and what I said in the comment section is right. It is indeed a bit poisonous. I would like to give you a suggestion. It is better to set the age of the protagonist a little younger, preferably to 12 or 14 years old. This is mainly because the behavior and thinking of the protagonist in the first few chapters are too childish. Maybe the author wants to write a growth-oriented character, but the age of the protagonist is mentioned at the beginning as 20. In the first few chapters, this age is obviously too childish and does not look like someone of this age group. In my mind, I might as well change the age to a younger one, so that childish thoughts can be put into perspective, and the growth is reasonable, because a younger age has high receptivity and plasticity. Moreover, if you only change the age, you don't need to change the article drastically. Change the protagonist's previous inner thoughts to make him more mature. There is no need to change the age. It only takes a few numbers at the beginning, plus the description of the protagonist later, and it is done. It is convenient to only change a small part.

The heroes are all dead? What use do you have?

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I didn't read the book, but I read the introduction. It was very attractive. They said Xiaobai is very poisonous, so I ran away.

The book is good, come on, it's much better than other garbage on the market.

Is this the kind of article where you need to add points to get a certain percentage of Saiyan progress?

But if the Vansaiyans are like this, they won't be exterminated.

Come on, the book is a little bit poisonous, but it's not so easy to be poisoned.

Good idea, but the writing is a bit immature. Come on.

I don't know why, but after the pig's trotter's ability has been upgraded, it seems like the power in a fight is not worthy of the upgrade.

Not bad, well written, good luck to the author

This plot looks very similar to the one in the American comic book World Trail of Dawn.