Be Careful, Fellow Taoist Monks

It's this kind of rhythm and writing style, the words are clean and neat without losing quality. There is a place for you among the future greats

Half of the mountain is full of mist and rain, and half of my life is full of worries. One thought makes my heart light and everything stops. The back of the mountain is originally a pure place, but the common people are worried. Cough! No further reading, no recommendation, it will take 300,000 words before it can be published. This perfect attendance is not as fast as selling a pair of words 😭😭😭

The author is an ordinary cultivator who doesn't have a golden finger. The writing style is quite good. The overall structure and framework are okay. It doesn't feel like poisoning people when reading. After reading thirty chapters, I don't want to read it (it's not that it's bad, it's just that I have read too much recently and I have no interest in the type of protagonist who is cultivating immortality and practicing Qi) br>During the Qi training period, there is no hope of cultivating and building a foundation. If there is no chance, why not go back to your hometown and inherit thousands of acres of wealth and ten thousand acres of fertile land. During the Qi training period, there are all kinds of fights. The cultivation qualifications are poor to begin with. If someone breaks off the next door and breaks the leg, what kind of cultivation ability will there be? Aren't you going to deliver food to others in the future? I've seen enough of the qi cultivators causing trouble. If I am the chief of a large sect and have jurisdiction over the area, the casual cultivators should not be disturbed. Either leave, or become my outer sect disciples, or go to the city under the jurisdiction of the sect to marry a wife and have children as family members. You can't leave the city thousands of miles away if you have no business. This way you can control the safety of the city and reduce the flow of casual cultivators. Reduce the limit on resources for cultivating immortals. Those with poor spiritual roots will live a few more years than ordinary people. Do you think there are still people who practice hard? It is better to get married and have children. The children of the family will be accepted by sects with outstanding spiritual roots. Within a few hundred years, the rule will be the survival of various families without large casual cultivators. The sects will also have new blood input. Those who are unwilling, yes, the sects will send you out of my jurisdiction, swearing to never come back or to never do anything to the people of the ××× sect with any ill will. As for the herbal medicine and mineral veins of the sect, how do you get them? Naturally, they are casual cultivators plus outer disciples (casual cultivators have skills, spiritual roots, and cultivation talents) Okay, become the outer disciples. The above 👆🏻 tasks are given to them. They can't ask for it! ) The outer disciples here are not the ones in the book who don't practice well, do alchemy, weapon refining, talisman training, and complete the dungeons under the sect's tasks. They have qualified spiritual roots to enter the sect. , Brother Jiji, Elder Jindan's preaching hall to solve the problem of Kung Fu. If you don't have high-level Qi training or Jiji in other halls, you should play less to cultivate immortals and hundreds of arts And the management of the sect is like the nine-nine-six, but you also have your own time, but you have to contribute to everything in the sect's life, and don't give time to go out and grow herbs like this. Isn't there someone else doing the mining work? It takes a hundred years for a mine to be dug (in other books, casual cultivators and mining slaves dig it out, and it is dug out in eighty years. Here, the disciples of the sect take one hundred and fifty years of physical and mental training, and it is dug out in two hundred years.) As for the resources of the sect? Do you think practicing Qi is better for self-mastery than building a foundation pill? Much time? Lasting power?

I just think that being without a system is the most ridiculous thing. Even Han Paopao has a little bottle, saying that golden fingers are all right and that the system is all right. For a cultivator with such serious class consolidation, if ordinary people don't have a golden finger or have a mutation, they don't even have to think about it. So I don't understand the psychology of those who don't read it even if it says it has a system. . . In reality, those who can reach the provincial and ministerial level have great opportunities. . . !

This is an inscription for Nan Sheng Gu Liang. If there are portraits or big characters written on them, please pay attention.

I want to pursue reading. I have written 200,000 words and haven't been promoted yet. It's too miserable 🥺

I suggest the author change the title of the book. Read the last sentence of the introduction and recommend a title. This true immortal is too stable.

Now it has 230,000 words. If there is no trial and promotion, it is estimated that there will be no more. There's nothing I can do about it. I've tried hard and shamelessly written many book titles for people. As for the results, since they were not written very well, they are normal. If you really like it, you can keep a book. This book may not be too long. The last few chapters have been affected by my mentality and I have been fantasizing about recommendations, so the quality is not very good, but it will improve in the future. In addition, the book will definitely be finished, at least the story will be completed, and there will be at least hundreds of thousands of words left, and an explanation will be given. So, you can keep it for now, and when it goes on sale on May 1st, just give me an initial order. Finally, I would like to thank those Taoist friends who support me. Really, sometimes I feel extremely ashamed that I cannot write well, but I have no choice. After I finish writing this book, I will still write the next one. Actually, some of the writing in the middle is quite good, haha, but it does not have a good connection. I believe that the follow-up will definitely be much better.

Here you go, let me add some popularity to you! Come on!

An obvious problem is getting rid of Arabic numerals and metric units. Make a play

The price of spiritual stones has plummeted. As I mentioned earlier, I am so poor that I have to empty my toilet. There are thousands of magic weapons, three bottles of elixirs and ten thousand spiritual stones, which are still used during the Qi training period.

Okay, okay, I have been reading fantasy novels about cultivating immortals for more than ten years. I have also read a lot of all kinds of cool articles and stallion harem articles. I thought it was quite interesting when I first watched it, but after watching it more and more it became boring. And sometimes I wonder, how is this fantasy world of cultivation different from our real world? In the world of immortality in the novel, all kinds of good things belong to the protagonist. What are the chances of such good things happening to me in real life? ? The most unbearable thing is the cross-level challenge. Why can the protagonist practice Qi to kill and build foundation? I think it is very unreal. As the saying goes, life is not what you want it to be. Nine times out of ten, I hope the author can stick to it and not jump to new levels at every turn. The villain should have some brains. Good things should not always belong to the author. It is best if there are no cheats. It is not too early to have cheats. It is too bad. Come on, author, keep writing, there will be no problem.

It seems that there is no good spiritual root among mortals, but this spiritual root is so good

So well written. It is still necessary to watch this kind of cultivating immortality that is close to ordinary people's thinking and comfortable to watch on a daily basis. It does not have all kinds of unreasonable plug-ins and unrealistic combat capabilities, and it has a little humor and fun. It is indeed rare.

This book is really well written. The world of immortality is also filled with all kinds of troubles and bloodshed, fighting against the sky. Compared with other protagonists who are brainless and powerful, this one does not have the best talent, and relies entirely on his own abilities, which is more realistic. Come on, come on, I'll keep chasing you

It's interesting. It's not a problem for this book to remain a high-quality book.

I haven't seen such a heartwarming article in many years 😆

Very well written, keep going!

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I'm one of those few subscribers. Hope the next one will be great.

It's a mess, even though it's an earth spirit root, it doesn't get the treatment of a genius.

The road is long and far away, I will search up and down😁

The writing at the beginning was so bad that I couldn't stand the sense of justice after reaching chapter 13.

Although I am rushing to finish my book, I have already received perfect attendance today and saved 90 chapters. I have finished writing the next two months, and I don't know whether to start a new map or a new book. . .