Conan: Becoming a Detective

Regarding the heroine of this book, I would like to explain here. I personally respect the original work. Several pairs of CPs such as Xinlan and Yuanzhen will not be separated. The heroine is tentatively Suzuki Reiko. As for whether she will be added in the future, it depends on the situation, but I guarantee that there will not be a harem, and there will be two heroines at most. In addition, Ke Ai is a heretic and will not accept refutation!

Suddenly I discovered that the old thief Qingshan was trying to model, the fortune teller and Sister Bei have the same face

I recommend Qiuting Reiko as the heroine of Big Sister 😏

After reading a bunch of Conan fans who started out bankrupt and had a belated Golden Finger, I was really feeling a bit tired of aesthetics. The protagonist saw that the washing machine reasoning was praised by the public and secretly took blood. He was really self-conscious. His behavior was like a time traveler from a Japanese high school student. He felt like a guy who didn't know the plot. Until the system appeared, the protagonist acted startled, but it felt more like pretentiousness. He didn't have the temperament of a doctor at all. How can a person who was about to faint from hunger when the case happened and then stay hungry for such a long time get the momentum of a tiger? Go watch the documentary. Except for the food that may make him move his eyeballs, everything else about such a person is just a cloud. It is like a person who is exhausted from working every day and sees the goblin on the bed.

I'm a novice at writing, but I feel it's just average. Come on author. We still need to work harder to portray the characters.

Xinlan has been demolished, the latest movie version and Xiao Ai kissed three times

Suzuki Ayako

With this current development, no matter how I look at it, I feel that Xiao Ai is also one of the female protagonists.

Opened a new book again? 😏😏😏

After reading The Incident of Moritani Teiji, I would like to share my thoughts with the author. Firstly, the writing style is relatively green. Some descriptions and character lines have a sense of déjà vu from fantasy novels ten years ago. It is a bit embarrassing to read, but overall it is OK. The second is that the emotional line is not paved. Without enough paving, the protagonist's emotional outburst will make people feel abrupt and jumpy. If Ayako and the protagonist can have some common secrets or common hobbies, give a little space to describe it, or from the perspective of others, such as Xiaolan or Conan or Sonoko. To "see" Eryu Ayako's closeness from the perspective of others, and give reactions such as envy, complaints, or gossip to strengthen the reader's sense of the escalating relationship between the two, instead of directly relying on narration to report how much the relationship between the two has improved. The third is that it would be nice if the overall style and tone could be more obvious. Daily comedy, persecution of Conan, warmth, love, battle of wits and courage with the organization, or the protagonist's own growth. If you can choose one or two to amplify, and occasionally add a little bit to others, you can form the unique style of this book and make people remember you among many fans. Of course, I am not trying to find fault with this so much, but I hope that the author's performance in this book will get better and better, so that he will not be discouraged. Because the problems I feel so far are all related to writing skills. As long as I can persist in these, there will be obvious progress. However, in terms of plot logic, I don't feel that there is a strong poisonous point at the moment. This is enough. Moreover, the part about the train explosion reasoning is very eye-catching. According to the prompts, I first thought of the speed sensor device. After referring to the physics-related knowledge of the object, I checked whether it was connected to the speedometer, rejected the speed sensor, and then rethought the answer to the light sensor. This reasoning is the biggest reason why I feel that this book has the potential to keep me looking forward to it, and I look forward to more similar surprises from the author in the future.

Um, although, I feel like Ayumi is really defeated.

I found that the protagonists in these Japanese comics are quite willing to die. When I saw Conan's sentence, "Top shirt, Genta is missing. If you don't see it, you will disappear. It has nothing to do with the protagonist."

A eunuch?

The writing is so bad, the protagonist's personality is about the same as that of the Virgin Mary

Average, the plot is average, the writing is average, I can't say it's bad, so it's average

Hmm... The author doesn't seem to know how to fill in water... I don't know if he wants to go through it quickly in the early stage. The description of the case is too fast, and it feels like a running account. It was like watching a slideshow... And it went by in a blink of an eye. Although they are all familiar cases, it is not good to go too fast.