Elf's Golden Ranch

Overall, it's okay, but the writing style is still a bit poor and lacks detailed descriptions.

Too bland, no live dialogue, no combat details, lack of realism

I ordered this book to watch the protagonist play Harvest Moon, not to watch the protagonist gradually fall into the whirlpool of some strange events, and then be driven to increase his strength to solve the incident. As the author, you feel that you are writing it wrong.

Is the author's writing a bit general? I feel like he could be more detailed in some places, otherwise it would feel like it could be finished after you put it on the shelves.

If you have ordered it, can you tell me which chapter of this article returns to ranching? After ordering a few chapters, I looked at the preview and saw that there seemed to be various battles. I really didn't want to read it and wanted to skip it and watch the ranch management.

It's too bland, the entire text is introduced in a narrative way, with no dialogue at all. .

It feels the same as a written report. Maybe the expression is wrong, but it really doesn't feel interesting. After reading about 30 chapters, they were all told in a straightforward manner, with no description of the environment or emotions. It just felt like this, this, so this.

You can go and see how other people write farm articles. . . There is no dialogue in the whole process, it is all a running account. You write like this. . . It seems that there is no sense of substitution, almost like reading an essay. There is also a lot of popular science. .

It's all about environment description😬

Author, can you draw a farm map?

I quite like this type of book about farming in a world of extraordinary systems.

Wiki.52Poke. Com Pokemon illustrated website recommended to the author and everyone, go to Baidu yourself. The only disadvantage of this website is that the Internet speed is slow The advantage is that it has almost all the information you want to see, including basic racial values, etc., And even includes the performance of the Pokémon in games, animations, and comics. I won't go into details about the elves that are suitable for the farm. Here are just some elves with elf by-products: Big Milk Jar, Three Bees, Tropical Dragon, Rich Honey Dragon, Hot Baby, Ouch Ball Mushroom, Lily Root Baby, Hairy Cliff Crab, Iron Arm Spear Shrimp, and Nanny Mambo, auspicious eggs, etc. (Note: Some of the products from elves here are renewable, such as the claws of hairy crabs. As for how to reasonably remove them from them, see what the author writes. For example, those that fell off during fighting with each other for exercise?)

Is this a fucking novel or a manual?

None of the participants even have formal names

I don't think it's necessary to lock the skills. Just like Crash, Arbor Monster, and Cady Dog, it's shown in the illustrated book that they can't be learned. With their size and attack methods, can they be "crash"?