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It feels pretty good, but it just doesn't make sense The description of schizophrenia and paranoia isn't crazy enough? Personally, I feel that "The Genius is on the Left and the Madman on the Right", "Sleepwalking Investigation Report" and the stream of consciousness can be used for reference In short, when dealing with reality and delusions, reality should be very normal, push the timeline a little bit, and intersperse madness and delusions at the same time. You can add some descriptions and details of expressions, such as rapid heartbeat, heavy breathing, and faint sounds. Sounds are disturbing, heads turning, memory flashbacks, psychological activities can also be added As well as paragraphs, generally plain narratives can be longer, plot ups and downs, especially when reality and madness are intertwined, dense short sentences have a visual effect, as if a ghost is about to appear.