Blood Wolf Chunxiao of Ice and Fire

I just hope it won't be written in the direction of high demons. Nowadays, as long as it's a Game of Thrones fanfic, it's just a fantasy novel with a Game of Thrones cover. Although there are dragons in Game of Thrones, it's still a story of low demons. Many authors write about war strategies in the early stage, but their true nature is exposed later. It was about using fireball to defeat the White Walkers. I remember the most outrageous book in which the protagonist used the Lightbringer (super invincible and powerful enhanced version of the legendary hegemony sword 999) to split a peninsula in half on the opposite side of Westeros with one sword. I couldn't watch it anymore...

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Bai was so happy that I thought it was the male protagonist. If the author hadn't admitted that he was a man, I would have thought it was the female author. The author believes that the heroine saves a lot of troubles, such as marriage. This is the author's prejudice or lack of understanding. First of all, there are the most male readers of Qidian. It can even be said that Qidian is a male channel. As a male reader, you can never bring in the perspective of a heroine. Not all male readers watch Dear Dear. On the contrary, female readers like to watch Dear Dear most, especially Qiong Yao dramas. What do male readers watch when watching Game of Thrones? I saw that it was about farming, machinations, troubled times, things about male protagonists and female characters, especially dragon mothers. To put it bluntly, male readers don't like reading this book. Mother-in-law, it doesn't have the masculinity that male readers need, and the echoes of machinations in troubled times. [For example, the worst-written Game of Thrones fandoms have better scores than you. The key is that they have fewer words and the quality is incomparable with you], and female readers don't like to read it, because it's not enough Qiong Yao, and there aren't many men who want a woman, and who want a woman but not a king. Neither male nor female readers like to read it. If you want to achieve success, it is just a dream. It has more than one million words. I don't know how many people have read this book during this period. I have read it several times, but whenever I see that the protagonist is a woman, I immediately quit because men cannot bring in women. If they can, it means that there is something wrong with the readers, such as those men who think that they are women.

Hahaha, I finally saw the dragon with pig's feet appear, and then change the POV. It's such a magical way of writing. I suppressed my emotions for a long time, then stopped abruptly before the climax, and changed the story line to POV. It's a breathless one, and then the supporting characters tell the story in a straight-forward manner. Nb. If you're still not convinced by this author that Qidian won't let you sign the contract, why don't you give me a thumbs up? This Bolton red-robed monk can summon the shadow army. If it weren't for the dragon mechanical god and pig's feet, the whole army would be annihilated. Does the Red God know that this red-robed monk's magic is so nb? How did Dany survive in the Eastern Continent? How do the horse people deal with such naughty magic and witchcraft that drags the gods and ghosts to Mawang City to eat ashes?

Mention a few shortcomings: Too wordy. Chapters seven or eight are all dialogue, with no plot advancement at all. There are too few climax scenes. I know you are following the style of the original work, but Martin also has a lot of pornographic scenes to enhance the reader's reading experience. Simple presentation and dialogue seem boring. Also, readers want to see dragons and battles, not tens of thousands of words introducing the situation in Winterfell, those weak families and forces, and the infighting between each other. You can write about it, but in most cases you can just brush it off. What we are watching is not a documentary but a novel.

Seeing the comments section praising the author, I couldn't help but pour some cold water on it. The excellence of this book is obvious. It has excellent writing style, and the delicate description of each character is just right. Every scene has a strong sense of picture. But the lack of results is not due to the use of pov writing, but because the level itself is insufficient. The parts that test the most writing skills, such as plotting, temple calculations, war, and farming, are intentionally omitted, and the written parts are too simple, which is equivalent to giving up the most exciting parts of a normal novel. It is normal for there to be no readers. Moreover, the existence of the protagonist has very typical female video characteristics, the powerful background setting, and the actual operation that are too busy to cook, have a strong sense of dissonance. There is also the fact that the author has too much respect for the original work and does not use any swords throughout the whole process. Even if he does, it is irrelevant to the plot of the original work and lacks an eye-catching plot. If the first few pictures had the protagonist killing Jaime and Tywin in an unexpected way, this would be called a haircut.

The writing is quite good. The author may be doing it for love. In fact, the first point of view is also acceptable. The main reason is that the protagonist is a woman. Maybe the author is a woman? (My guess) It would have been better if the protagonist was a male. I am not discriminating against female protagonists, I just feel that this book is not suitable for the starting point and a certain green platform (you should all know which platform I am talking about). All I can say is, come on, author

Now available! ? The iron tree is blooming, although there are only a few pictures to be finalized first...

There is no doubt that it is a good book. Both the writing and the plot are very exciting, but it is not suitable for me. There is nothing wrong with group portraits. But in fanfics, especially those with original protagonists, group portraits often jump from one line to another, and the time is not connected to each other. I don't know how other people feel when they look at it, which makes me feel very awkward. But the writing is indeed online, which is a pity. I have to wait for the author's next book

This was Bolton's march route after leaving Harrenhal, and the march to Maidenpool was to die. The entire navy's march route basically looks like this.

After reading Chapter 73, I really want to complain. After Chapter 65, has the author given up on himself? The quality has plummeted, and he has started to slap himself in the face without being logical? The previous chapters pave the way for the protagonist. She is the first female champion of the tournament in history. She can defeat Pakistan with her personal force. She can travel around the world and recruit fleets and subordinates as a teenager. She has a noble status, invincible military achievements, and dragons. Shouldn't this be the template for a legendary hero? This is much better than Nymeria. Since you have this experience and the protagonist is the youngest and most energetic, why should he be ridiculed by several counts? First, some count scolded the bald donkey in front of the monk and called him a bastard, and then he was ridiculed by Big Amber. Is it reasonable? It's so funny

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Suddenly I realized that the general direction of the plot of this book so far is no different from the original work... Hang Frey, kill Bolton, unify the North, and deal with the wild people beyond the wall. In the original work, these were supposed to be completed by the Wolf family group of Erya + Ji + San Fool with the assistance of Bran, the three-eyed crow. Then the author killed the three idiots, Erya hadn't come back yet, and Jong changed from the original backbone to the commander of the front army, and all the free plots were concentrated on Mei Yi. There is a sense... Why did Mei Yi stop the Three-Eyed Crow in the first place, because the current situation of the Wolf family is even worse than in the original work... So I hope the author can do something big next, Mei Yi, you are the protagonist, you have to stand up!

The author writes very well, and the personal evaluation is very good. But the threshold is high and the style is not Internet-based. Most people will look very, very tired. So, enter with caution.

The image of the protagonist at this age and with this level of strength flashed through his mind.

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Watching it, it feels so uncomfortable I finished reading the free chapter so far in one go I feel so uncomfortable This article is not a web article in the usual sense The protagonist is a standard representative who is involved in everything, does not use anything, and insists on going a long way This is nothing Mainly Traditional web articles will have a main line, just like (Lord of War) The whole story is written from Yuri's perspective as the main point of view, with other people interspersed as branch lines This book is written from the perspective of Yuri, Yuri's brother, warlords, Ukrainian generals, Interpol, and even street fights That's okay Well, as long as the writing is good enough, it is good enough to understand the world through puzzles and mosaics However, in the story, everyone's perspective time is staggered. The whole story is about whether Tywin is dead or not, what the Kingslayer is doing, and whether Dragon Mother jumps repeatedly at different time points. It is a headache to watch. The whole story is within the framework of the original work. Keep rewinding and fast forwarding This is okay, you can solve it by skipping and looking back The most uncomfortable thing is that the stories are not finished, or the worlds between the characters are not connected Maybe the blood wolf is still fighting at this moment, and the next moment he will jump to the little devil The whole story is fragmented, I didn't say it. I rewind it after finishing it. There are no nodes, I just thought Ah, by the way, it seems that this person has written a little too much, let's write about another person It was okay in the early stage, but the more obvious it becomes in the later stage These are my personal feelings The following are the points that make me uncomfortable The thing that makes me most uncomfortable is Bolton When others are working on reviving magic, a king who may have hatched a dragon is attacking the city and eradicating the rebels. Dragons are farming in the Dragon Mother The final peace treaty suppressed all my imagination I failed to get the last hearty feeling, nor could I accept it calmly. Accept, if I had never hatched a dragon, I might have accepted it Then I read it with unwillingness I found it was gone It will be over for the time being To be fair, the writing is okay, and the treatment of each character is reasonable. It is a good book But I have to follow up. I definitely won't follow Reading can make my blood pressure soar from Little Devil to Drogo When I am urgently concerned about the ending of a story, or the temporary ending, I really can't stand another person's story Maybe I will read The End of the Blood Wolf first and then go back to complete the full text Save an eye first

Various castles found on Push.

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The writing style is really great, but it's really not unfair to get poor grades. This kind of writing is really not suitable for online writing. It's not easy to persevere until now, but I don't know how long the enthusiasm for creating without profit can last. If I can finish the book, I will come back.

I didn't put Chapter 350 of Game of Thrones on my bookshelf, so I opened it and took a look! ! ! ! Multiple group portraits + male writing female + shitty Stark, no wonder I didn't add it to my bookshelf 😁

Why does Gouba have a book with more than 1.2 Million words in the new book section? Hateful! Are you going to destroy the new book section? (Manual dog head)

This is the route that Mei and Yi led the army southward (red line), and her own route back to the north (green line) The green line includes the search for the Brotherhood Without Banners.

Overall map of the Battle of Meereen

Frost is coming, and all living beings are in mourning. I made a promise when I touched the fish beam, and the stars in the sky have been seen. Starting from today, I am the shield of all peoples and the sword of the wilderness, guarding the snow, pointing my blade in front of the enemy. I am the arm in black, the fangs of the running wolf, the pigeon of White Harbor, and the sharp eyes of the mountains and forests. I accept freedom and erect a fireplace in the cold wind. I express my perseverance and burn the flames of justice. The war song always sounds and never stops. He stopped dead and fell to the earth, and his soul returned to the clouds and smoke.

The protagonist's setting is vague (it's said that the natives want to control gunpowder and improve society, and they know the good things in the Eastern Continent in the original book; it's said that they traveled through time, but they don't know Bronn, and they don't know about the War of the Five Kings or his own life experience; the inexplicable high combat power and Easy Walker, no clear plug-in, and no intersection with the Three-Eyed Crow), basically all the climaxes are skipped, a lot of marginal characters are in the plot. I couldn't help but read on. After all, he is an author who rarely reads the original work. What a pity. The ending is an outline escape involving roommates fighting each other.

It would be better if the castle had a scarlet fever exterior.

It feels like I'm reading The Dreadfort's Daughter. It's very interesting, but if I don't sign the contract, I feel that I can go to a fantasy novel website like the book above. If I change the website, remember to mention it.

Wasteland Raid Battle Diagram

The Fengxue Hall shouldn't be this big.