The Immortal of the Red Mansion

You update every day. I guess my hair will turn gray before I can finish reading it.

After reading about ten chapters, the writing is incomprehensible and incomprehensible. There is also a maid who sells one thousand taels of silver, and without the hero's knowledge, the maid secretly lends 600 taels of silver to the hero's friend. Really, did you think of the money at that time as RMB or Vietnamese Dong? When writing about Red Mansions, you should at least check the prices at that time. At that time, a farmer's family could live very well with only twenty taels of silver. You can imagine spending one thousand taels to buy a maid. If you write blindly, you won't change it even if others point it out. No wonder no one reads it. It's crazy how good your grades can be if you write it in such a blind way.

The protagonist feels that there is no bloody character. He was betrayed by his friends again and again and was not angry. At the beginning, he became enemies with Xue Pan because of robbing Xiangling (and was knocked unconscious). He forgave him and saved him and Baochai without telling him. However, he was dumped by Xue Pan and Aunt Xue several times. Pan took revenge and beat up Liu Xianglian 😓, and just took all the maids away. Ping'er didn't mind at all when his master misappropriated money for Wang Xifeng. He said that he loved Lin wholeheartedly, but inexplicably, he seemed to have a crush on Xue. Anyway, when he met the Xue family, he took it upon himself to be inferior. How can such a person survive in the officialdom?

Does the author want to write about officialdom? Can he start his career with literature and establish himself as a martial artist? I am a little tired of reading officialdom articles, but the courage of the overlord is still enjoyable. How about becoming the adopted son of the emperor and becoming a county prince?

Many people are saying that Lin Daiyu is the most suitable wife. Just say you like her and that's it. Why do you have to praise or step on someone if you like her? Based on the content of the original book, at that time when the feudal ethics were at their peak and the Jia family was in an atmosphere of leakage, how many girls in the Grand View Garden were not bad guys? Forgive me for describing it as bad, but it was really like that in the eyes of the scholar-bureaucrats and nobles at that time! Whose girl among the rich and powerful is still hanging out with a man in her teens? Sharing the same bed? Can you enter the boudoir at will? See if these girls have handkerchiefs from the same class? How many people came to propose marriage? Zhongshan Lang said it sounded good because he proposed marriage, but said it sounded bad because Jia He was selling his daughter! Mr. Cao is really interesting. Look at the young masters of the Jia family calling their slaves grandpa and sister. Tsk tsk tsk. It's really fun! I would like to advise those who praise one and despise the other, don't take it seriously. They are just characters in novels. Really put them into the background of the times. Regardless of appearance, personality, and ability, reputation alone can deter people who want to develop their careers! So you can like what you like, don't flatter others and criticize others, it's really boring. If you like this thing, it is idealistic, there is no need!

It looks like a novel angle! The writing is also good

The woman who paid 1,000 taels at the beginning was really vicious. The high-end thin horse bought by Jia She cost 800 taels.

It's not easy for a newbie. Try to find a way to promote it. You can find other authors to py, post on forums, etc. Come on!

Wait a minute, the heroine Aunt Xue?

You really don't regard money as money. In the Ming Dynasty, a bucket of rice cost only ten or twenty cents, and a maid only cost five taels. A family's annual cost was no more than five taels. Your maid only cost a thousand taels.

Read the comments and say who you like, have you read the book? For example, the one who likes Sister Feng, no, you like the photos of Zhang's stepmother in ancient costume when she was young. The appearance descriptions of the ancients were extremely sloppy and purely impressionistic, but the character descriptions were very serious and flesh-and-blood. Therefore, if you like a certain character in a book, you must first read the book, then understand the character's personality, and finally the appearance. Instead of looking at the face first in reality. . . . . . Personally, I don't like or hate Sister Lin. He is still a child and it is understandable that he can be willful. His bad personality is also caused by the loss of a relative, so he is neither lovable nor annoying. Miss Xue, on the other hand, is more in-depth. She is calculating but has a soft personality. Yes, she is soft, because he only has his mother and his father died young, and his background as a businessman makes him very calculating. As for Feng Lazi, the innocent eldest daughter of a rich and powerful family is still the kind of uneducated eldest daughter who failed in education. In reality, there are many like this. They only act based on whether the family has the ability to do it, without considering the consequences. As for right and wrong, she has never learned at all. As for the other few springs and so on, they are completely the product of the failure of education in the big family. One of my favorite characters is Yuanyang. Even if she dies, she has complete control over her own destiny. As for being sold to the Jia family, she was still young and had no choice but to win Jia Mu's favor without certain qualities and scheming. It is impossible. After becoming the most trusted person around Jia Mu, she is not arrogant and behaves in a measured manner. However, it is normal to meet someone like Jia She in a big family in a feudal society. It is pitiful and annoying.

He is neither a soldier nor a scholar, he is just wandering around and is an illiterate young man.

I like to write about things between men and women, but in fact it is very blunt and disharmonious, and it looks disgusting. I have nothing to do when it comes to business, and most of my leisure time is boring. I always want to hang out among women, and everyone wants to have an affair, so I force myself into the dog-licking Xiaobai Xian.

I thought it was a good book, but I felt sick when I saw Aunt Xue. I didn't like the Xue family and felt sorry for the Xue family. I feel sorry for Xue Baochai. Through Aunt Xue's perseverance, I no longer have to insult Xue Baochai. Is it interesting? The author can earn a few more readers by writing in this way. Write Aunt Xue to be in her thirties, please, even if Yuan Chun was at least thirty-four, five or six years old when she died, the original book stated 42. How old will Aunt Xue be?

Chapter 27: Unable to bear the poison, defeated.

Why are all the recent books titled Jia Xun? It's so funny.

Brother, the author, you have traveled through ancient times, the ancient times where etiquette was the most important. In ancient times, you did not value reputation, but other girls valued reputation. If you think it is not good, you can change the imperial examination. In ancient times, the imperial examination was the only way for scholars to upgrade.

I became interested when I saw that the heroine had Aunt Xue 😍

The book Red Mansions I read before was well written, but it was a pity that it was unfinished. , The writing is quite good, the author can refer to it. Come on!

Which Xingxue merchant do you want?

The emperor, powerful gentry, and military nobles you write about are all playing online games. While the emperor's power was growing, there was chaos all over the place, and military households were everywhere.

At first I thought the protagonist had something, but I didn't expect him to be a brainless person, on the same level as Jia Baoyu. If the author hadn't given the protagonist a halo, haha

Overall, the writing is okay and pretty good-looking, but sometimes the situation is too straightforward, the conflicts are too explicit, and the imperial power is still somewhat majestic.

It really doesn't matter if the heroine has Aunt Xue. If you have the ability to take care of Jia Mu, you will be a great talent. After all, if you take down Jia Mu, you can live in Jia's house.

Age is not a problem. In ancient times, women got married at the age of 14 or 5, and their children have grown up by the time they are 30. This is normal.

You are also a talent when it comes to dating a gambler.

Tanchun will probably compensate the boss 😁😁

It's tasteless, tasteless, very tasteless, the plot feels very inexplicable, and the protagonist has no scholarly spirit, which makes it boring to watch.

If you don't use money as money, buying a little girl for 10 taels is still about the same.

The last chapter is interesting, but it feels like a script rather than a novel.