I'm Guarding Tianlao in Journey to the West

It's well written, but updates are too slow.

I have never quite understood why, Fairy Sifan, why everyone says something is wrong with Heaven. Yang Jian's mother gave birth to three children within a few years, and his sister gave birth to one within a few years. According to their personalities, they must take their husbands to cultivate immortality, and give birth to at least a thousand children in thousands of years. Other immortals began to follow suit and gave birth to a thousand children. Heaven has no place to start, and then go to the mortal world to find a place. Why are you unwilling to give up the place for my children to live? Damn it, let's ask for power when the child grows up. The Jade Emperor arranged for his nephew to be a justice god. Is it reasonable for other gods to arrange positions for their children? Moreover, even us laymen know that our love for a person cannot last a lifetime, which is only a few years. After that, we will only live together as partners. People can see through it. How can gods who have been practicing virtue for thousands of years not be able to see through it? If you can't see through it, you don't deserve to be a god.

The author assumes that Sun Wukong came out of the alchemy furnace and was a Daluo Jinxian, but because he was suppressed by the Buddha, his luck declined and his realm fell. This is too nonsense. This operation directly transforms the Taoist practitioners who have become stronger step by step into the garbage gods in the West who are nothing but luck, incense or believers. All those efforts turned into a joke.

In the world of Journey to the West, Heavenly Court and Lingshan are not the same family. Is it a problem for you to use the sword of the previous dynasty to kill the officials of the current dynasty?

The protagonist is reborn as Tang San. At the beginning, he refuses to worship the master, marries Qian Renxue, makes Xiao Wu a licking dog, joins the Wuhun Palace, supports the Wuhun Palace to unify the two empires, and takes his wife Xueer to meet his father Tang Hao. A different protagonist Tang San, who does not join Shrek, marries Qian Renxue, and violently abuses Yu Xiaogang and Dai Mubai. Come and take a look. Just click in to watch. Douluo: I, Tang San, will marry Qian Renxue in this life

Now Qidian is trapped in an endless loop. Readers are afraid that the author will choose to keep the book, and the author will become the eunuch because the readers keep the book 😥

The setting is novel, the plot is tangled, and the protagonist is portrayed as a loser who just goes with the flow. He has no distinctive personality and cannot be called ordinary. He really is a loser.

Is the protagonist's cultivation level fake? He's completely stuck in the same place? The most important thing to read is the cultivation data. More than 100 years have passed, and I have almost become a Golden Immortal. But now I am a Level 1 Golden Immortal every day? The author is destroying the Great Wall. No matter how many plots you write, if you even remember your cultivation level incorrectly, it will become a joke.

I forced myself to read fifty chapters. I don't see how this book is as good as the reviews say. Various issues and bugs. Don't say anything else. I don't see how fast time flows between a day in the sky and a year on earth.

Everyone, what is the problem with this book? It is that the author cannot control the data. Starting from the immortal, the experience value required for upgrading becomes more and more exaggerated. It is tens of thousands at the beginning, and hundreds of millions and trillions later. The millions that a prisoner gets after imprisoning a prisoner is simply a drop in the bucket. In the middle, the author made a patch and imprisoned a few ancient demons in the realm of Daluo deep in the Tianlao, and gained more than 10 billion per day. , But Da Luo is almost the highest level among the saints, and the main character is the Golden Immortal, which costs 10 billion. The following Tai Yi, Da Luo, Quasi Saint, and Saint are based on the author's experience expansion speed. I don't know what to do with those upgraded experiences. The system is almost dispensable. He also bluntly stated in the article that it is not as fast as his own cultivation speed. Slowly, it changed from a system text to a Journey to the West novel.

After watching the new version of Fengshen, the changes are really messy. Can Yang Jian know the eight or nine mysterious skills and escape with water? , Shen Gongbao is a demon? Is Jin'ao Island full of monsters? As soon as Jiang Ziya appeared on the stage, he presented the list of gods to King Zhou. Is Bigan's Qiqiao exquisite heart so worthless? The Yin Shang Dynasty was destroyed because they killed their father, not because they rebelled against poetry. I can't complain anymore, either don't call it Fengshen, or just respect the original work. Did the editor figure it out?

Speaking of the second brother, I think of the novel Life Chang Hate Shui Chang Dong. It is very healing. I recommend newbies to get involved.

Stop writing, eunuch. The hard squeeze is so embarrassing! If you feel uncomfortable writing it, others will feel uncomfortable reading it.

Eunuch, congratulations! Congratulations to the author for publishing a eunuch work. Last month there were already signs that the updates are getting slower and slower. It's okay if I can't bear the pressure, but I won't make any money anymore. The writing is pretty good, hurry up and start making money by writing a new book.

At first I thought it was a Journey to the West world view, but it turned out to be a prehistoric world view... In this case, the realm of Yang Jian and the Seven Great Sages was set too low. Yang Jian and Nezha of the prehistoric world view should belong to the strongest group under the "Zhengguo" - the level of Taiyi Golden Immortal Peak. Yang Jian may even be able to fight Daluo Jinxian because of the special skills, and he will not be a talent.

The writing at the back is messed up. It was obvious that three hundred years ago it was the first level of the Golden Immortal. In the middle, it was written that it was promoted to three. However, three hundred years later, it was inexplicably written that it was still one level.

Just tell me whether your book will end hastily? Uemoto could have written the ending better. I'm convinced.

Clear bookshelf -1, another indirect eunuch 😰

After subscribing for a few chapters, I no longer want to read it. It's too pretentious, not to pretend to be critical, but to pretend to be noble.

Don't write randomly, there are gods three feet above your head

This is the best prehistoric novel I have read in recent years. The author fully follows the original works such as Fengshen and Journey to the West. The skeleton is traditional Chinese Confucianism, Buddhism and Taoism mythology. The gods and Buddhas in the sky are in line with our traditional cognition, and there is no random fabrication. The plot design is interlocking and there are unexpected ingenuity and design from time to time, which makes people feel bright. Some book friends say it is unfinished. , I don't think so. Although the ending is too fast, the story that needs to be told has been told. If the map is forced to change like those tens of millions of words of constantly changing maps to fight monsters and upgrades, it will fall into the cliché. Today's novels have nothing new and force millions of words to go, but in fact it can be finished in hundreds of thousands of words. The story must have an ending, why not now...

The writing is smooth and the logic is self-consistent. It would be great if I could continue to write about modern society, but it is a pity...

After reading more than a hundred chapters, I suddenly found the finale.

I would like to make some suggestions. First of all, there is the issue of realm. The five realms of immortality are heaven, earth, gods, humans and ghosts. Among them, the realm of heavenly immortals can only be inherited by saints. Even Zhen Yuanzi can only be the ancestor of earthly immortals. Secondly, there is no distinction between Taiyi and Daluo in terms of realm. The inheritance of the Three Pure Ones is called Daluo. , The others are all Taiyi (you can look up Taoist mythology, after all, it is better to learn from it when writing novels), Gods like Sanxiao, whose true souls have entered the list of gods after their death, cannot be so arbitrary, and they will be subject to everything. The restrictions on the list of gods (even saints are helpless) cannot violate the rules of heaven. A single thought from the emperor can make their lives worse than death. Some people even believe that the gods who have a trace of their true souls on the list of gods after death have no emotions at all and can only do their own jobs. In any case, the gods whose true spirits are on the list of gods written in this book are too arrogant. It is not an exaggeration to say that the Emperor of Heaven is not taken seriously, and the Emperor of Heaven in this book is too useless, right? ? Have you watched too much of the TV version of Journey to the West? Whether it is the Great Heavenly Lord in Taoist mythology or the Jade Emperor in the original Journey to the West, they have all lived for countless millions of years. As long as he wants to know, there is nothing that can be hidden from him in the entire Three Realms.

Well written, with clear logic and self-justification The plot is smooth and relaxed The ending is also very good If it could be longer it would definitely be a hit🔥

Give me a boost. I've given you seven monthly passes.

Yes, although the update has been criticized, the ending is generally self-sustaining. Looking forward to the next one.

The author tried to use AI to turn text into video. It is very imaginative.

Finished spreading flowers, supported by monthly tickets!

Brother, I will never watch pirated copies again. Please update quickly. I will subscribe to them all.