
Naruto Tool Master
火影忍具大师
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 580k Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Fan Fiction
- Updated
- 2y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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191Chapters
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Finally someone who values perception! Other fans who are fooled around by various tactics and clones are simply brainless! The most important information about modern warfare. Other time-travelers are simply not like the time-travelers of the 21st century. There is no need for radar in war. Let's live in World War II. Come on💪. Take good care of you! There are also three important factors in kayaking warfare: the first is information-based command (high-speed transmission of information, quick decision-making, and quick delivery of orders); the second is battlefield perception (radar, early warning aircraft, satellites, and the legendary fifth service strategic support force are all responsible for this); the third is strike speed (infantry mechanization and informatization are all for strike speed) Tactics examples of the pig, deer and butterfly combination! The Yamazaka Ichikai (early warning aircraft) is responsible for the construction of battlefield perception and informationized command. First, the enemy's position is discovered in the mountains, and Nara is notified within the command system. Nara (frontline commander) makes a decision, and strikes quickly to delay the enemy (both shadow and psychic techniques are possible in this step), and then Akimichi (artillery unit and missile unit)! This is actually a strike process of the modern army! The more accurate the information, the faster the response, and the stronger the combat effectiveness! Russia is not good at information-based command, battlefield awareness, and strike speed. It has strong firepower and is of no use if it cannot hit anyone! Come on💪, I hope the author can read it and reply after reading it
Why is the protagonist so crazy? Others are stupid and you are smart.
That's ridiculous. If you want to suppress the protagonist's strength, you don't need to have the Nine-Tails commit suicide. If you really want to do this, how can you have anything to do with the Golden Horn, Silver Horn, and Jinchuuriki? Couldn't these tailed beasts be able to commit suicide at any time to gain freedom?
I think the subject matter is quite good. You don't have to write it in such a hurry. It would be good to have a flying thunder god as a trump card in the early stage. Write more about the production process. You are a bit unclear and make the production of the ninja tool too simple. Isn't this the core point of your novel? It should be more detailed, such as the thunder chakra mode, you write It's too simple, it's very baffling. Why don't you first write about finding a thunder and lightning inscription to lay the foundation, then there is a variable numerical inscription, which is used to control the power of the Ford, and then a little bit of test effects and so on. What you wrote is too simple, and it is not covered in one stroke. In this way, your book will probably be cut very quickly, really, because there is nothing to write later.
If the nine-tailed beast could commit suicide in the Jinchūriki's belly, why not stay in a dark room for decades? If you want to talk about the sealing technique, the sealing technique used by the protagonist is the sealing technique of the Uzumaki clan. The Nine-Tails can commit suicide under the control of the sealing technique of the protagonist Uzumaki clan. Didn't the tailed beasts in the bellies of the jinchuriki of several other villages commit suicide casually?
In order to suppress the protagonist, the tailed beast can commit suicide. So what has Kyuubi been doing after being banned for so many years? Couldn't he just commit suicide and then resurrect in the wild?
Why does it feel like the protagonist thinks of Uchiha Itachi? And Uchiha Shisui just can't win over him? You have to give it a try. You have to watch Uchiha Shisui influence Uchiha Itachi. Why don't you go for it? In this matter, the protagonist revealed his objective impression of the two people. He was convinced that Uchiha Shisui and Uchiha Itachi would not agree with the protagonist. It felt very awkward when I watched it. As a normal person, what would you do if you faced this kind of situation? Do you want to fight for it or fight for it? Uchiha Itachi and Uchiha Shisui, their talents are very strong, and winning over them will be a great help to him. Why doesn't he fight for them at all? Are you always mocking them?
Come on, this is another film that I take for granted. I want to play with ninja technology, but technology is always supported by the barrel theory. Optimizing your brain after reincarnation, I reluctantly accept your knowledge of sealing techniques that can be much more powerful than ordinary ninjas since the age of four. This is originally considered poisonous. After all, which parent sees his four-year-old son being such a monster, I won't say more, but more importantly, where do the materials for ninja tools come from? Is it stealing or robbing? Remember that chakra metal is a relatively strictly controlled material.
Inexplicably, it starts to overwhelm the protagonist's fighting ability. This book is about to end.
There is a very cool idea. Wouldn't the protagonist create an instrument to open the eyes of the Uchiha's blind tribesmen? If you look at the three wheels, you will be a jounin or an elite jounin. Can there be 100 jounin in Konoha? There are probably thousands of people in the entire Uchiha who have not opened their eyes! Coupled with the civilians who didn't open their eyes, the protagonist created thousands of Uchiha jounin. Then instead of sweeping Konoha, on the day of annihilation, I fucked one or two thousand jonin and Konoha was dumbfounded!
In fact, the author didn't understand Uchiha. The Uchiha clan is guilty of original sin. The Uchiha clan's emotions are far beyond ordinary people's. Losing the things you hold most dear can open up a kaleidoscope. Uchiha Sasuke saw his entire clan being killed and opened a magatama in anger. You can imagine how much painful stimulation it takes to open a kaleidoscope. Those Uchiha kaleidoscopes must have lost all their treasures. The one Nisukeko cherished most was Itachi, the one Itachi cherished most was Shisui, and the one whom Shisui cherished most must be the person who opened his eyes. For them, family, village, even the world or themselves are not important. The moment they opened their eyes, they lost everything and became puppets of obsession. Think about it for yourself, how can such a bloodline have rights? After you open your eyes, you don't care about anything but your own obsession. If such a person gets his hands on power, the world will be ruined by you. And those who have kaleidoscopes, how the people they cherish died, it is hard to say whether the Uchiha clan was behind it or not.
Before fighting Otsutsuki, you should think about how to deal with Rokudou Sage. Rokudou treats everything in the world as a chess piece and only contributes when necessary. If he feels that the protagonist is not under control, the situation will take a turn for the worse. How to transform from a chess piece to a chess player is the most important thing!
I only read the front part, how can I put it, it's not very good, it's a self-help article. The IQs of the supporting characters need to be improved, and the operation of the pig's feet is also very natural. I rely on my imagination to figure out what I want. Come on, author, I hope you can write more smoothly.
It was really frustrating to read more than 100 chapters. Rather than being ostracized and either leaving or becoming the boss, what does it mean to be a pawn under Tsunade?
Really cool, are you starting to suppress the protagonist?
The fireball spell can be blown with a flute, why not 6 Gatling pipes. I'm working with a tailed beast to make energy 😃😃😃
The author should give the master a break and just practice ninjutsu with his hands. It's too ridiculous. You only learn the basics of a system and you want to create new things. Just like in reality, after you learn the three laws of physics, you want to build a nuclear bomb. Is it possible? Get a progress bar, how long does it take to develop a certain ninjutsu, add some information to fast forward, if the hang is too high, you can adjust the physical fitness, if you don't have space attributes, you can't learn Flying Thunder God
This novel should not exceed 200 chapters, unless he opens other worlds. Others learn a ninjutsu in just a few months and a few years, but the sealing technique of the protagonist does not need to be learned at all. You can learn it at a glance. Even if you have modern knowledge, it is nonsense. All knowledge cannot be acquired overnight. Even if there is ready-made theoretical knowledge, no one dares to say that it can be learned by just looking at it. All knowledge products are slowly accumulated and accumulated breakthroughs bit by bit. You have been a caged bird in the past few months, and you have been studying gene sequences and opening eternity in less than a year. You are really bragging and don't need logic. Is it really that simple for you? Orochimaru would be unable to do anything about Kimimaro's blood stain disease. I have already ordered all of your fantasy essays. To be honest, you would be good at writing at a slow pace. Such fantasy is meaningless. Stories also need logic. Books without logic are few and far between.
The setting is too biased, author. Most people who read this kind of novels like the idea that power comes to oneself. How many people read mecha novels, and a lot of people like to read anime, but not novels.
I've looked at a few pictures, and it's okay so far, but there are quite a few problems. For example, it's a little too jumpy, and the ANBU is a bit like a dead person. When it comes to arranging the sealing talisman, you throw things everywhere. You are also a family member who has inherited the sealing technique. It is normal to suspect you. It would not be surprising to kill you directly. The Flying Thunder God in front is a bit too taken for granted. You should just say that the protagonist's previous talent is not good, but he has good talent in the development of ninjutsu. Flying Thunder God can copy it so easily, and you don't even have any foundation.
Why is there suddenly no update today?
Won't you update today
Update, update, update, update soon
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Wow, even though the author is a bit unfinished, he has finished the book. But why haven't I applied for the completed status? Now the investment has failed. I'm a little depressed.
Come on, author! In less than three hours, your perfect attendance will be gone.
Why do I feel like the book cover looks so much like Kusanagi Kyo?
After reading it, you forced me to order it all. If you have the ability, author, force me to order it all. If you have the ability, just add more!
There are some typos, it's best to revise the logic. There are also some problems with the presentation.