Elf's Real Sand Breeding House

Recommending books, writing about beast control, Pokémon fan fiction 1. "Elf: Trainer Shinji" 2. "I opened an Elf Breeding House" 3. "Elf's Real Sand Breeding House" 4. "Gourmet Beast Control" 5. "My Elf Trainer Simulator" 6. "Elf: Beginning Plan for Metagross" 7. "Beast Control: I Can Give Entries" 8. "I'm Not a Trainer" 9. "Spirit Controller's Manual"

To be honest, I don't really like qualifications. There is no need to add qualification restrictions to the ideal Pokémon. There are no resources to give it to a certain level even if it has the best qualifications. If the qualifications do not limit the level but only limit the comprehension ability, it is good to treat it as an individual value, but limiting the level almost locks the upper limit of the level. Then Weixin's breakthrough on the battlefield will be a lot less fun.

This book... I always feel that it is very similar to another book, some about system settings and some writing habits. "I am a breeding house owner in the elf world"

I suggest the author to advertise below. I am a breeding house owner in the elf world. There are still many people who want to read Pokémon fan fiction in the breeding house type. Among a bunch of eunuchs or unfinished breeding house types, your writing is considered top-notch.

The protagonist is either conquering the elves, or on the way to conquer the elves. As a breeding house, shouldn't it be written in detail about the raising and sale of elves?

The writing is a bit messy, and the quotation marks are uncomfortable to look at, but otherwise it's fine.

At first glance, I thought the title of the novel was Shinji Miaomiaoya

Remember not to open a trumpet account and cause harm to others

The system is too powerful, and the tasks are also low. Farming by Tian Wen like you is not like real farming, but like farming in a variety show.

I feel like the author's name is a bit useless haha, or it was influenced by the animation that the main character's name is Xiao or something haha

Keep up the good work, even though I'm not watching.

The new book needs your support! If you think this book is okay, please help me read the latest chapters every day. This is the author's biggest motivation! Thank you readers for coming here! ! !

It's a very heart-warming book. I hope to see more daily life with elves. Come on.

Just don't be like the eunuch next door!

My personal suggestion is that you wrote too detailed the level and quality of each elf, especially the skills. The writing of the main/big battle is okay, but even the minor supporting characters are crammed in, and the word count is a bit low and the plot is dragged out. It's not my main job to write books, and I don't update them every day, so it's easy for people to let go of books or even abandon them.

Musashi, Kojiro, Meowth

PY has several Pokémon novels that are being updated. If you are interested, you can read them